Maan knows ab't Geets pregnancy FF-Update17 Pg 47 - Page 3

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whitepearl thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Neetu, I am glad you are liking it.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing update!! Maan is so sweet...pls cont.soon
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Hi! Maneet Fans. Ready for the next update! It is becoming so difficult for me to write my own FF after watching fabulous ongoing episodes of Geet. My thoughts are flying too fast so to pace myself down I am entwining some of the scene with the current episode so that you can close your eyes and visualize the entire story.

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Geet has gone back to the outhouse and Maan has straight away gone to his room. Still thinking about Geet he lazily opened his laptop and sat on the bed. He clicked the inbox mail and found at least 50 mails waiting for his reply. He has no desire to read them now. " Maan focus... focus on your work" He reminded himself. His eyes hurriedly ran through the emails and replied only the most important ones. As he was typing suddenly a thought sparked in his mind. He logged out from his email account. His fingers were trembling as he began to type in the search engine......'Expecting mothers and pregnancy'

In the fraction of seconds a list of several websites concerning Pregnancy and childcare flashed on the screen. There was a strange feeling in his heart. He has never felt it before. His heart was thumping from the anticipation. He clicked one of the sites and began to read. As he was going though the website he was experiencing a new emotion filled with awe and marvel on God's most wonderful creation - A child. He then went through as many sites as he can. With each hour going by he was feeling more and more close to Geet. Now he can understand what she must be going through. "Oh! Geet...... There is so much for you to learn and discover....... Ab maein ye sab ise kaise samjhayu. Is ladki ko to apana kyal bhi rakana nahin aata. All of a sudden he had a strong urge to see Geet..... if she is all right. "Now I can not go to outhouse at this hour, its' almost 3 O' clock in the morning. "... Well! How do I see her......" his eyes shone and his lips smiled in mischief. "I can see her through the security systems' camera....." He opened the home security system on his laptop and put the password to see the views of outhouse inside. He knew that there is no camera on the bedroom of the outhouse so he panned the dome camera installed on the ceiling of the main hall towards the bedroom. The window was open and he can clearly view Geet who was peacefully sleeping on the bed. "Sorry Miss Geet I know it is beyond the limits of decency to peep into a girl's bedroom. But ...... let me remind you ... you are in my bedroom, on my bed and you are..... well! my........." He smiled. He zoomed in the camera and now could see her face clearly. The entire room was lit up with moonlight. Geet was looking like an angel. She had a faint smile on her lips. "Her face glows so much.....even in the dark. She does not need any moonlight to shine..... She is the moonlight herself." Mann thought to himself. "Sorry Geet you have barged in my heart, my soul and in my life. I am only barging into your room" He tried to justify his actions. He froze the view and took a snapshot and save Geet's photograph on his laptop screen. "Welcome into Maan's world. Ms. Geet Handa." He could not take his eyes off her. He rests his head on a pillow and smilingly closed his eyes and a sleep fell upon him.

"Its 6'oclock in the morning and Maan room is still closed what's the matter"... thought Dadima.

Daadima slowly opens the door of Maan's room and saw his grandson sleeping. His laptop was still open. Daadi came up to the bedside and gave a glace. What she saw was a delight to her eyes.... "Hummm... Toh rat bar Geet ki photograph se baate ho rahi thee..." She lovingly looked at Maan and decided not to disturb him. As she was about to leave the room Maan opened his eyes hearing a faint noise.

" What..... Daadima what are you doing here so early.... what happened. "... Maan suddenly realized that his laptop is still on and Geet photo is there as wallpaper. He tactfully turned the screen of laptop away from Daadi.

"Nothing Maan... Tumhe dekne aaye thi."

" Ab main yahaan aagaya houn to kya aap subah shyaam mujhe dekti he rahegi......" Maan said annoyingly.

"Haa... Waise agar tumhe dekane wala koi aura bhia hai.... yaa phir tum kise to subah shayam dekhane lage ho to .....to main tumhe nahin dekhugi"

Daadi hit back throwing a glance at the laptop.

Maan thoughts went to the dargah times where he saw Geet steeling a glace at him...from behind the windows.... and also went he was constantly looking at her actions when she was trying to avoid him in the office the previous day.

He gave a stern glance to Daadi. "Daadi you and your TV serials dialogues..."

Are you not unwell? Why do you have to get up from the bed....Doc has told you to take proper rest. "

"I am OK now!.... I'll go and see if your breakfast is ready." Daadi did not like when Maan changed the topic.

"Thanks Daadi. Today I have a very special assignment to do, I am already late." He walked towards the bathroom.

"Can I be of any help ,beta"

Maan paused for a moment and said, "not now dadi... may be later."

Daadi's face lit up, she smiled and said, "All the best."

Will continue......
Edited by whitepearl - 14 years ago
kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Superb update!!! Can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
i just read ur last two chapters...
wow.. it's very interesting..
and maan is so sweet... he's trying to take care of geet...
i hope u update the next part soon.. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its! lovely ff yaar!!
loved it reading.........
hope CV"S show it in the same way...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice FF Liked both the parts
Maan really maintained cool not loosed his temper after hearing abt that Geet is pregnant
Dadi jus likes annoying Maan
Maan really cares for Geet a lot
Plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey whitepearl this is an amazing FF I wish something like this happens in the show as well. Dont want maan over reacting or shunning geet after getting to know of her pregnancy.
I want him supporting her and loving her still. please continue soon you are going on very well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey i loved this part .........now i am gng to read next part .........thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u knw wat i'm really loving ur ff .........i loved how maan dznt want let geet knw that he knws her secret ..............
thsi si so fantastic dear dis is too good

i just loved it


plz update it soon
pzl thank you 👏

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