I TRIEd self-dialogue Maan 13 july

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys...it's extremely difficult...there is no war this time..Everything in him has opened up to Geet,every wall has been broken..i cannot write today..but i will try

Maaneet waiting for car to come,and when it comes

Maan(brain)- khud baithogi ya haath pakad kar bithau?

Maan(heart)- well..I wouldn't mind... 😳

They sit, and off they go

Maan(heart)- waah,kya dhaba waali line boli..does she want to eat there...aw..meri jaan.. 😆

Geet- sir, aap bhi mera mazaak uda rahe hain

Maan(brain)- chaalu ladki. jo notice karna hota hai woh karti nahi hai but aaj sab notice karenge..din hi bekaar hai

Maan(heart)- dude..be happy..she's started noticing you

Maan stop smiling,Geet challenges him

Maan(heart and brain)- 😲 😲 😲 dhaba??!! MAAN SINGH KHURANA...oh lord..

Maan(heart)- the things people do for love..
Maan(brain)- she challenged me! that's why I'm going

At the dhaba

Maan(brain)- ouch..wow..I was about to fall
MAan(heart)- no Maan..you have fallen..accept it
MAan(brain)- shut up. Let me concentrate on sitting..ahhhh

MAan(heart)- 😆 😆

Maan finally sits upright..LOL guys...and then asks for menu card

guy- woh nahi banta yahan par

Maan(heart)- 😆 😆

Maan(brain)- um..heart...I'm nervous here..look around
Maan(heart)- dil ki aankhon se toh meri nazar ek jagha concentrated hai..baaki..yeah,it's kinda different...
MAan(brain)- kinda!!??oh my.. kids.

Geet interacting with kids.
Maan staring at Geet while she's talking to aunty

Kid- uncle, aunty ko kyun ghoor rahe ho?

Maan(heart and brain)- 😲 kya!!??

Maan(heart)- wow..bacchhe Geet ki tarah..yeh bhi mere kapde utarwaayenge..

Maan(brain)- oie..that guy just called me SHER.. 😆
Maan(heart)- ur a darpok guy..can't even accept..rehne de Maan 😆 😆

Maan(brain)- oh..so another challenge..mirchi...
Maan(heart)- oh don't..plz..you will make us both suffer

Maan eats mirchis..

Maan(heart)- CRY Me a RIVER..... 😭 😭 🤢

Maan(brain)- stopped working..GEET has touched hand .GEEt has touched hand
Maan(heart)- 😲 MAan aaj chaandi ho gayi teri

Geet holds lassit o MAan's mouth

MAan(heart and brain)- unavailable for comment. 😲 😲

Geet too I guess..awesomeness!!

Maan upper lip is white.

Geet wipes it with her hand

Maan(heart)- OH GOD..I'm dead
MAan(brain)- erm..what..My lips are throbbing dude..I hope she doesn't notice... 😳
Maan(heart)- not listening.. 😲 wow..that feather soft touch and those eyes

Geet again takes Maan's hands to drag him for bhangra

MAan stands there staring at Geet

Maan(brain)- waah! pehle salsa..ab bhangra.is there something u cannot do?! I can't help but smile
MAan(heart)- Oh yeah..Eat sea-food properly.. 😆 😉
MAan(brain)- she's asking me to dance..I can barely breathe
Maan(heart)- OH cmon MAan..STOP IT and enjoy it plz . just let go

Something in Maan let's go

MAan starts doing bhangra
Maan(heart)- so, have i won!!??
Maan(brain)- um...maybe..maybe not..ok,they have all stopped dancing

Kid looks at Maan again and says
Uncle aunty ko ghar jaake ghoor lena

Maan(heart)- I WISH!! 😳 😳
Maan(brain)- enjoying myself!!

Maan(brain)- dekha...I can enjoy myself at a dhaba as well..

Geet- amazed..aap itne bhi dusht daanav nahi hain

Maan(heart)- 😲 😆 😆
Maan(brain)- dusht..kya?? 😲

They leave..

Precap- help me breathe.. I dunno what just happened..Maan is hugging her,closed his eyes,like he's crying..Geet is crying..or is scared...:(

Does she get sad thinking of family??

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG.....Hi i have not scene the Episode yet as its only going to be aired here in Bahrain....But I think its gonna be wonderful
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Again Awesome yaar 👏

loved it !!

I liked these parts so much



Maan(heart)- wow..bacchhe Geet ki tarah..yeh bhi mere kapde utarwaayenge..

Maan(brain)- oie..that guy just called me SHER.. 😆
Maan(heart)- ur a darpok guy..can't even accept..rehne de Maan 😆 😆
Maan(brain)- waah! pehle salsa..ab bhangra.is there something u cannot do?! I can't help but smile
MAan(heart)- Oh yeah..Eat sea-food properly.. 😆 😉
MAan(brain)- she's asking me to dance..I can barely breathe
Maan(heart)- OH cmon MAan..STOP IT and enjoy it plz . just let go


soon heart iz gonna win over brain , oh yeah !!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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it's really lovely imagination girl......i already told you....you are a rockstar!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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well written... u r an awesome writer.. 👏 👏

[kafi baar hogaya na.. now touch wood😉😛]
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i love ur post geet as always awsome👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well done Geet..the dialogues were great!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKANargis

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Well done Geet..the dialogues were great!!👏
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thank you! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: missbubbly04

Again Awesome yaar 👏

loved it !!

I liked these parts so much



Maan(heart)- wow..bacchhe Geet ki tarah..yeh bhi mere kapde
utarwaayenge..

Maan(brain)- oie..that guy just called me SHER.. 😆
Maan(heart)- ur a darpok guy..can't even accept..rehne
de Maan 😆 😆
Maan(brain)- waah! pehle salsa..ab bhangra.is there something u cannot
do?! I can't help but smile
MAan(heart)- Oh yeah..Eat sea-food
properly.. 😆 😉
MAan(brain)- she's asking me to dance..I can barely
breathe
Maan(heart)- OH cmon MAan..STOP IT and enjoy it plz . just
let go


soon heart iz gonna win over brain , oh yeah !!




you know..I think heart has won..or will in an other episode..phir main berozgaar...:(
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayuri.vet

<font size="4">it's really lovely imagination girl......i already told you....you are a rockstar!!!!!</font>



HA..thankie!! 😃 😳

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