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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Hey Richa... 🤗

I loved it it was Fantastic!!! very interesting can't wait to read the next part !!!!!

Bohot Saare *Jhapiz*

Love Sarah

P.S Can u plz pm me when u update 😳
Edited by DMG_LOVER203 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Nice part Richa...very sweet and enjoyable!
Though I read it before lolz, but still it was fun reading it all over again!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Richa so u fianlly update dear.
I thought u forget ur own created ff.
Nice one.Thnaks for pm dear.
Love it.Update it soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
richa its lovely cont soon and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
A NOTE If anyone wants me to add that person in my PM list so please comment for once. It become easier for me to do so. Thankyou Love abhi and nikki
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Abhi was watching Nikkis photo on his phone and was smiling unconciously. Suddenly Rids came over and observed her brother smiling without any reason . Ridhimma walked over to him .

Rids: Bhai, what happened , why you are smiling without a reason ?

Abhi ( hiding his phone) : Err'.nothing , why haven't you gone to sleep as yet ?

Rids: just like that, Bhai.

Suddenly Rids phone rang , it was Ammy . She got nervous as Abhi was in front of her.

Abhi: who's it Ridzi ?

Rids: no one , just my classmate. Umm 'I will call her later.

Abhi: Arey why ,pick up the phone , it might be an emergency.

Rids(has no option but to pick up the phone): Hello.

Ammy: Hey , where were you , I was waiting for your call, remember you said you will call me later on. ( pause) Hello ?

Rids: Hi , Arohi. How are you

Ammy(giving a weird look): Arohi ? Hey '. its me Armaan '. Hello ?

Rids: ( carying on the pretense) Haan I am fine

Ammy: What's the problem, Hello?

Rids: problem ?

Abhi looked at her and questioned

Abhi: is she the one who you were talking about.

Rids( under pressure): yes bhia.

Ammy: bhai , acha means sadu is near by you.

Rids: ya!

Ammy( changing his voice into a girls voice and carried on ): Ya Ridhima, I am fine.

Rids smiled at this and Abhi noticed .

Abhi: Rids, your friend is in problem and you are laughing , poor girl ! let me talk to her.

Abhi took the phone from her while Rids was trying to stop him.

Rids: bhai'''.. bhai.

Abhi: (being very generous) Hello Arohi, how are you.

Ammy( got confused what to do , suddenly got a idea and started talking in a girls voice): H ello bhaiya, I am fine , how are you.

Abhi: I am fine. Actually Rids talked to me about your problem , so thought about speaking to you.

Ammy(confused): problem ?

Abhi: ya , you are the one who had that confusion na.

Ammy: confusion ( getting no clue , he just thought that saying yes would be a better option)

Ya confusion, I remember.

Abhi: remember?

Ammy: actually, I have many comfusion in my life , so I got confused which confusion you are asking about.

Abhi: ( feeling a little confused): ok. But I hope now its solved after talking to Rids. We need friends in times like these.

Ammy( taking a chance) actually, its not solved properly yet. So I was wondering if Rids can meet me tomorrow in the evening. So that I can clear all my confusion.

Rids was getting worried seeing with the scene unrolling in front of her.

Abhi: ya sure , you don't need to ask me , ask Rids. I am giving the phone to her.

Ammy: actually Rids is saying ki , you will not allow her to meet me at 8 in the evening.

Abhi: what? She said that ?( looking at Rids with a questioning look , then deciding something) don't worry she will come .

Abhi gave the phone to Rids and asked her to meet her friend next evening.

Rids: what?

Ammy: see you tomorrow Rids.( before Rids could say anything) and say thanks to sadu. I mean your Abhi bhaiya.

Rids now had to meet Ammy next evening.

Next morning

Abhi after getting ready for college received Nikki's message to meet him at a shopping complex for buying their dresses for the play before rehearsals. Abhi smiled reading the message , which was seen by Anjali.

Anjali: bro, why are you smiling ? is there any joke on your cell

Abhi immediately stopped smiling .

Abhi: Muski ka message hai .

Anjali: ( interogating her bro) is there anything special bro , looking very dashing today !

At that very moment Rids come down from the stairs and she was looking very pretty. Abhi gave her a smile.

Anjali( smiling) are you going on a date today.

Abhi and Rids both together first looked at Anjali, then looked at each other and hide their faces from each other and walked across each other in front of Anjali saying good bye. Leaving a bewildered Anjali behind.

Nikki was waiting for Abhi outside the shop angrily walking up and down mumbling to herself

Nikki: stupid , idiot , jerk. Always complaints at my being late and today himself is late and that too by 10 min. What does he think of himself he will make me wait ? Me NIKKITA MALHOTRA wait ! I will not leave him !

Suddenly she found some noise coming from a near by park. She sees some children playing there. Watching this a smile comes on her face and she turns around , suddenly realizing something she turns back and was shocked to Abhi playing basket ball with the kids. She was amazed to see how good Abhi was with the kids and how the kids were enjoying with him. She was happy to see her Mr. Sadu being so good with the kids. Suddenly she remember that because of Abhi she was standing ther alone from last 10 min.

Nikki: good, no ! no-good( bringing anger on her face ) infact bad ! very bad !

Niki walked towards him in anger and went and stood in front of Abhi .

Abhi( seeing nikki, a smile came on his face): Nikki, where were you ? I was waitng for '''( before he could continue Niki started )

Nikki: you were waiting for me ?, I was waiting for you(in a loud tone ) from last 10 min I am waiting there and you were playing !

Abhi: ( getting annoyed with her loud voice, ) I was waiting for you from the last half an hour here , that doesn't mean anything huh ?

Nikki( feeling embarrassed , but she didn't want to acknowledge that): sooo '''.. I am a girl I can make you wait , but you cant!

And in the background the fighting music started.

Abhi: kyun( why) are you PM.

Nikki: PM?

ABHI: you silly , prime minister.

Nikki: who did you called silly. Huh''..( Nikki started hitting Abhi)

Abh: Nikki stop it.

Seeing this drama from last 5 min one of the kids there asked Abhi

Kid: bhaiya, she is your girl friend or wife?

Abhi and Nikki: what?( looked at the kid and then looked each other )

Nikki : NEVER! Me his GF , is my bad time come that I will make him my boy friend.

Abhi: Am I getting sinus attack, that I will make her my girl friend.

Suddenly Nikki's phone rang but both were busy in fighting. Then a child asked them to pick up the phone. And they gave a pause to their fighting and Nikki picked the phone. It was their teacher Rupa on line and she asked them about the clothes and Nikki answered she had come for that .

Nikki: I will see you later sadu, but first lets buy the clothes .

She turned towards the mall and Abhi followed behind , regretting fighting with her.

Abhi: shit , God help me .

One of the kid : don't worry bhaiya ,give her some flowers ,she will forgive you.

Abhi: sure?

Kid: 100%

Abhi( giving him a smile) thanks, bye( Abhi went behind Nikki)

After getting the dresses. They left for the college .

Abhi and nikki in the car

Niki was not talking to Abhi. And Abhi was thinking how to make up with Nikki.

Abhi: nice weather, I think it will rain, what you say ?

Nikki: ( in her mind) stupid!

Abhi( trying hard); you selected good dresses( she was still not talking)

Nikki: (in mind) I will not talk to you Mr. sadu.

Abhi stopped the car. Nikki was shocked to see this . Abhi came out of car. went toward her side and pulled her out of the car. Nikki tried to stop him. Suddenly Abhi kept a finger on her lips. They both looked into each others eye's. they were deeply lost into each other suddenly it started rained , still both were completely lost in each other.

Abhi(very softly) Nikki, I didn't want to make you wait , infact I was waiting for you for half an hour , believe me( giving a sweet look that conveyed she was important to him)

Nikki( realizing her mistake too) its okay. I know it was my fault too but I will not say sorry.

Abhi( turned his face to a side and smiled) : I know that , Miss drama queen !

Nikki( giving a stern look) Drama queen ! hah! Ok! then this drama queen wants to have an ice cream right now!

Abhi( knitting his eyebrows) ice cream ? now.? Listen Nikki its raining and ice cream is not safe you will catch a cold.

Nikki: you are so boring . it great fun to have ice-cream when it rains

And the argument continued.

Edited by mitzification - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys I have put up the next part as Richa says she wont be here. Enjoy and dont forget to thank Richa for a great ff!
Edited by mitzification - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
hope you all enjoy it.
love abhi and nikki
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's great Richa! Love it! ^^
And thans Mitzi for posting so quickly...I haven't even touched it! LOL....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
hello ppl ,
hope you liked the previous part.
iam going back to my hostel will return on 23rd of august.
so don't think that i had stopped my ff. its just a small break.
take care.
love abhi and nikki.

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