MN & SG FF: Kyun? Promo @ Pg 139 - Page 58

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey daksha....gret updt
finally all r trying 2 be happy!!
but mayu's dad is still the same evil..
hope when MaJan will meet will understand
n hope nothing bad will haappen 2 nups
continue sooon
love yaaaa
muuuaaahhh
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey daksha..nice part..
Gunjan talked it out with Samrat..n they both were happy abt this marriage..nice.
Mayank gave Nupur a surprise..n she was really happy that things were goin the right way..when nupur hugged him, he felt weird?..
mayank burned gunjans photo's..n so did she..it was hard for both of em..but they had to do it..
MayUr slept on the same bed..n he gazed at her photo..now thats a change..
Sam told gunjan to tell mayank what happened..n she did agree..good..
Mayank's dad wants nupur to get killed, now?..wth. i hope that doesn't happen..he's sending mayank also away..now she's in more danger!..
thnx 4 d pm
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago

Gunjan was packing her bag to leave for Mumbai'..after she finished it she came out of the room. Samrat took the bag from her hand and they left for bus stand'.

Samrat bought the tickets and gave it to Gunjan'.

"I am sure tum Mayank ko face kar logi'.wo zaroor samjhega'..All the best" saying this Samrat smiled'.

Gunjan too replied with a smile'.

Mayank was in his room packing the bag'' Nupur was also taking out his things from the almirah'

"Ye tumhaara towel, kapde aur''aur ye rahi files jo saath jaani hain" saying this Nupur looked up at Mayank who was watching her and her activities'.

"Kya hua" she asked

"Kuch nahin'dekh raha hoon ki jab patni aa jaati hai toh wo saara kaam apne kandhon par le leti hai" Mayank replied and smiled with satisfaction

Nupur too smiled back'.

It was Mayank's dad talking on the phone'.

"Hum jaa rahe hain'.ghar mein koi nahin hoga'tum log raat mein aakar chupke se kaam khatam kar dena'..kisi ko pata bhi nahin chalega aur ghar ka saamaan bikhra dena taaki lage ki chori karne aaye the'..samajh gayye theek hai'.ab main phone rakhta hoon"

After few hours Mayank and his Dad left for Delhi'..

In the house Mayank's mom is talking to Nupur "Beta, Gupta Ji ki beti ki shaadi hai'.tum chalogi."

"Nahin maa'.aap jaaiye mera mann nahin kar raha main ghar main rehna chahti hoon" Nupur said

"Theek hai beta jaisa tum chaho" saying this Mayank's mom left for the banquet hall'..

In the house Nupur was alone watching TV in her room'..

Those men who came to kill Nupur arrived from the back of the garden into the house''

Bus of Gunjan also departured at Mumbai'..she stepped down and looked at the buildings'it was her city but not now''

Nupur saw that Mayank has left his file "Mujhe pata tha ki wo file bhool jaayega'..haath mein di thi usse'. sirf bag mein rakhni thi tab bhi bhool gaya"

Saying this Nupur called Mayank

N: Mayank

M: Haan bolo Nupur meri yaad aa rahi thi itni jaldi

Mayank's dad looked at Mayank as if how is he talking like that she is not his wife

N: Yaad'.yaad tumhaari file ko aa rahi hai tumhaari'..bhool gayye ho issko ghar pe'.

M: Oh freak'.file ghar par hai'..accha main abhi aata hoon'..

Mayank then cuts the phone and instructed driver to go back to the house

Mayank's Dad interrupted "Kya hua beta"

Mayank said "Dad file ghar par rah gayyi hai'.hum 10 min mein pohonch jaayenge"

Mayank's dad was in tension'.what to do'.if they would reach there Mayank will find out the whole plan''

He was just thinking and they reached to their house'.

Mayank stepped down from the car'..his Dad tried to stop him but he left and ran towards the staircase''He called Nupur''he was breathing heavily as he came up running''.when he took breath he saw Nupur lying on the floor and blood coming out of her head''.

Actually the goons heard the footsteps of Mayank and they jumped out of the window from where they came in''.in the hand fight of Nupur with goons she collided with the bed and fell on the floor''

Mayank went near Nupur

"Nupur'.nupur" He shook Nupur so that she can gain consciousness'.

Mayank's Dad saw his men leaving the house''he took the car from driver and went behind them''the moment he left Gunjan arrived to Mayank's house in auto'..she saw the door was open and she went inside the house'.she moved up to Mayank's room'..she saw Mayank picked up Nupur in his arms and placed her on the bed''he sprinkled water on her face'..

"Nupur wake up" he patted on her cheeks'..

Gunjan was looking at the whole proceedings from the side of the door'.her gaze also stopped at the side table at which there was a photo frame of Mayank-Nupur's marriage'.

Mayank was moving in tension calling the doctor on the phone'..

Gunjan hid behind the door so that Mayank could not see her'..she was thinking "I think Mayank has decided to move on in his life'. Main ab usske saamne jaaungi toh pata nahin kya ho sakta hai'.. I know Samrat chahta hai ki main Mayank ko sab sach bata doon'.par aisa na ho ye sach sunkar wo poori tarah toot jaaye'.kissi bhi haalat mein ab main Mayank ke paas dubaara nahin jaa sakti'.toh main kyun usse pareshaan karun'"

She was thinking all this when doctor arrived and Mayank became busy with doctor inside the room and Gunjan quietly came out of the house'..without wasting any time she reached the bus stop and boarded the bus for Delhi''.

Doctor cleaned up Nupur's wound and puts the bandage over it'..

He said to Mayank "Inhein kisi bhaari cheez se takkar lagi hai'.jaldi hi hosh aa jaayega'.ye medicines prescription ke according de deejiyega"

"Ji doctor" Mayank said and went to see off the doctor'

Then only Mayank's mom came back from the banquet'..

She saw Mayank and they came inside "Hayye raam'.ye ghar ki kya haalat ho gayi hai'.sab theek toh hai na beta'tu yahaan kaise aur tere Dad kahaan hain"

"Dad ka mujhe nahin pata'.main toh jab andar aaya toh ghar ki ye haalat thi'Nupur upar behosh padi thi'abhi doctor gayye hain usse dekhkar" He said

"Kya hua Nupur ko" she asked and they went upstairs

Mayank's mom went nearby Nupur'.. she caressed her head and said to Mayank "Ab tu isska poora khaayal rakhna'.samajh gaya'pata nahin humse logon ka kya baer hai jo tum donon ke saath hi aisa hota hai"

Saying this Mayank's mom came out of the room''

Whole night Mayank was sitting beside Nupur'.looking at her serene face'.thinking how much she has suffered in her whole life'' In a blink he felt asleep sitting on the chair''

In the morning'..Gunjan reached back to Samrat's house'..

Samrat loked at her asked "Itni jaldi aa gayin'.Mayank se milli"

Gunjan downed her eyes and nodded her head in "Yes"

Samrat smiled and asked "Kya kaha Mayank ne"

Gunjan looked up into his eyes and said "Maine Mayank se baat nahin ki'.."

"Kya'par kyun Gunjan" Samrat asked curiously

"Main nahin chahti thi ki wo mujhe dekhkar puraani baaton ko yaad kare'. Wo Nupur ke saath khush hai'. Aur meri wajah se wo phir se toot jaata'.Samrat mujhe samajhne ki koshish karo'.abhi Mayank ye jaankar bohot pareshaan hota" saying this Gunjan ran towards her room'.

"Gunjjj'." Samrat called her but she went'..

"Theek hai Gunjan jaisa tum chaho'. I know Mayank tumhein zaroor samjhega" Samrat said to himself and went to his work'..

Thanks for your wonderful comments.....keep commenting because they help me to write better....one more thing now I will update the story once a week....because now I have three FF's to write....I hope you will cooperate with me....Thanks and I am waiting for your comments...

Edited by .Daksha. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Haay ram Daksha.. yeh Mayank ke papa Nupur ki jaan lene par itne kyun tule hain? aur MAyur Romance... Pyaar ki yeh kahani suno... ek ladka tha.. ek ladki thi..

Beautiful update!!!
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow beautiful update .... loved how mayank was taking care of her
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nie update.............i m glad Mayank saved Nupur...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hay nic updt
thank god nothing happen to nups
thanks 4 ur pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow lovely update daksha wonderful part and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Daksha..
Nice part... thank God Mayank forgot the file and had to come back for it warna pata nahi Nupur ka kya haal hota. Uff i hate Mayank's dad.. kaise baap hai.. he doesn't wanna see his son happy.. 🤢
The cutest parts were Mayank watching Nupur getting his stuff ready and on the phone when he says to Nupur about her remembering him.. So cute how Mayu was looking after her.. hope there are more scenes like this which help to bring them closer.. 😊
Glad Gunjan didn't speak to Mayank but i hope that they don't meet again till both couples are in love and secure in their relationship warna bohot problems ho jayega..
And plzzz Daksha iss dad ka kuch karo.. i really hate him.. 🤢
Continue soon. 😃

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