**A benia short story**-Updt + Note pg8* - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello all.....thanks a ton for liking my previous update who ever did...it means a lot to me
here is the next one,my favorite one for sure.....hope youll like it and please commennt.

even though there are just two or three updates left,please tell me whoever wants me to me to PM them about it!

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Dia wasnt able to sleep that night,she twisted and turned and everytime she tried to shut her eyes Benji's voice echoed in her ears.
She got up starteled.She knew Benji didnt mean to hurt her,he was just being truthful.Too truthful....she thought.Maybe he shouldnt have told her.But she realised that the circumstances somewhere had forced him to.
She got up from her bed and moved towards the window,deep in thought.Things had changed so much,life had progressed from frairytale to harsh reality.Gunjan and Samrat were on the verge of a break up,despite the fact that they were still so deeply in love.
"Shyaad....woh mujhe khona nahi chahta.....",She said sadly,"Itna pyaar karta hai woh Mujhse...",she continued a tear tricking down her face.But no she couldnt say yes to him,she just couldnt.
"Main usse haan nahi keh sakti.....main usse pyaar hi nahi karti....ill be cheating on him....",She said trying to wipe her tears."Usse mujhse acchi ladki mil sakti hai......".
As she said that she felt an unexpected tugg in her heart.She looked around wondering what happened to her.Maybe she was just feeling bad for Benji.
As she looked around she spotted a photo album which Samrat had borrowed a few days back.Pink in color and consisting of around 500 neatly serail numbered pages,with the event dates etc carefully put together by Dia.She picked it up and plonked on her bed,smiling.No one knew this,but when ever Dia was happy or sad she would go though the album.
She opened the first page,and smiled.Her and Udays very first photograph-where Dia was smiling while Uday was crying beacuse Dia had just pinched him hard.As she turned the pages her smile grew wider.The current picture had Uday crying while Dia was holding her nose-a 5 year old Uday had just dirtied his diapers.Dia began to giggle,Uday and his daiper tales-how could she forget.Suddenly the incident of Benji and Uday in the daiper shop flashed befor her eyes."WHY am i thinking of him....",she said as the she turned the page.
The next picture was her kindergarten class photo,for the first time Uday was smiling and Dia was looking cross.She didnt quite remeber why,but her Dad often teased her that her place was purposely changed so that she didnt trouble her brother.In between them a new boy was made to sit.
Dia looked at the boys photo,he looked very familiar,chubby-with a big smile on his face."Yeh kaun hai?....",she thought to herself.
She continued to turn the pages,and in nearly each class photograph the boy was there.Dia started feeling weird....how come she Never noticed this Guy before.
Finally she reached her class 5 photograph and she smiled.That year she could never forget.She despite being a good student was forced to stay behind because she wasnt able to answer her exams,as she had got typoid.That very year she had met a london returned 10 yr old Samrat.
She smiled and looked down at the class photo.She was the monitor standing right next to the teacher,while Samrat the sports champion stood next to her,and next to samrat-the same familiar looking boy.
Dia looked surprised and wondered,"Yeh yaha kaise?.....",but finally remebered.That fateful year,due to a typhoid epidemic she had to stay back,but along with her another boy also had to stay back.The boy was named...
"Benji...",she said softly to herself as she looked at the photo of the boy with twinking eyes.Dia had a small smile as the remembered the lost moments she had spent with Benji.
Benji always did everything that Dia detested,not listening to her,protecting Uday,to even taking Samrat away everytime she wanted to talk to him,and being the only guy who thought Dia wasnt as specail as she thought she was..The feeling was always mutual,she hated Benji,and Benji hated her back.The only reason why they stayed together was solely for their mutual friend Samrat.
Dia looked at the page wondering,that way before Ranvijay or for that fact even Samrat,there was a Guy named Benji in her life.
Dia Suddenly got up and reached for her pen and wrote below the picture.
"Next to Sammy,the sweetest guy ive ever known Benji,"and unkowingly dotted the Benji's I with a heart.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
omg so cute! unknowingly dotted benji's I with a dot!😳 beautiful! update soon.. and with more benia scenes!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
very nice update thanks a lot ......plz pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh wow shruti just got to know about this will read and comment

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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely yaar
too good
just loved it
do continue and please PM me as i don't wanna miss any part.
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nyc update.
Pm me wen u update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow shruti i just read the entire SS and i must say i absolutely adore it. It is really sweet. I really loved all the updates and in the recent one i loved dia dotting benji's 'i' with a heart. SO cute. And the part where benji has been with dia since kindergarten is just absolutely adorable!

Really really awesome!! 🤗👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey! ur SS is amazing.... lurved it....
adde to PM list too :)
~Krati~
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this one was super cute :)
love it
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
its awesome..!!!
loved it..😊
plz pm me when u update..

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