**A benia short story**-Updt + Note pg8*

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Radha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

awesome update..!!!

really superb..👏 👏 👏

cont soon

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kratika gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

cuttttttte!!!!! waiting 4 nest part!!! <3

~Krati~

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Jennifer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

continue soon waiting eargerly for the next part

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shruti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Sorry for the really late updat...ive been awfully busy...small but cute update hope you like it.....and PS...ive written this SS such a long time back...and the benia story is still stuck where it was!....😆enjoy!love shruti

Part5.
"Kya?....",Samrat said irritatedly as he tried to take the basketball away from Benji."Haan Dude....tumne sahi suna....",replied Benji as he tried to keep the basketball away from Samrat.Dia was standing at the corner of the Basketball court wondering what Benji and Samrat were talkng about.
"Candy ke liya surprise party....par kyun?....",Samrat looked at Benji confused.Benji,dribbling the basketball away from Samrat,was pondering over what to tell Samrat and finally said."Main Dia se pyaar karta hoon.....".
While Benji made a basket Samrat stood where he was stunned,"Benji....aur Candy?...like seriously..",he thought but then remembered how Benji had very recently started behaving weirdly-read lovey dovey towards Dia.
Benji turned behind and walked towards Samrat who now was smiling."Mujhe pata tha......",He said.Benji smiled and blushingly said,"Main usse propose karna chahta hu...",while Samrat looked at him stunned."Itni jaldi...?".
Benji put a straight face and said,"Haan aur tumhe meri madad karna hi hoga.....".Samrat wasnt quite in the mood of party when Benji threw his last card,"Arre Dude...mare dosti ka yeh sila.....tum mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte.",he said.
Samrat shrugged and said"Theek hai...main aa raha hu....bas do minute..".Samrat continued to dribble the basketball while Benji ran towards Dia.
Dia perked up when she saw Benji running towards her and thought,"Benji actually bahut cute hai....".Dia suddenly realised she was blushing and put her self together as benji approached her.
"Kya hua benji?...Sammy maan gaya....",she asked while Benji silently nodded a yes."Wow....par kya kaha tumne usee....?",Dia asked curiously.Benji looked into the other direction and said "Maine kaha....ki main tumse pyaar krata hu....".Dia looked back stunned and shyly looked down."Aur yeh bhi kaha...",continued Benji sullenly,"ki main tumhe grand style main propose karane wala hu...".
Dia shyly looked at Benji,who surprisingly looked at her sullenly."Par kay fayda.....",Benji looked at Dia who looked back at him confused,"Tumne mujhe pehle hi reject kar diya....".Dia looked at Benji hurt as Benji walked off towards Samrat.
Dia tried to keep a straight face,why shouldnt she-she didnt like Benji,she will NEVER like Benji...
"Never?....",she said to herself softly.For the first time ever she felt so weird,specailly about Benji.She held her head in confusion,being such a well organised person herself,she hated being confused.
"Dia....",she heard Gunjans voice ringing in her ears."Jab bhi koi problem aa jaye....apni Dil ki baat suno...woh kabhi bhi tumhe galat rasta nahi dikhata...."
"Dil ki suno..?",she thought to herself bitterly.The last time she had really listened to what her heart had said,Rv broke her hearts to bits.
"Ok....Dia calm down...",she said to herself and took a deep breath.She shut her eyes and tried to think about everything calmly.
"Dia....I love you...",Benjis voice echoed in her ears,then she saw all the times she spent with benji,from childhood,till adulthood flashing before her.
Dia opened her eyes starteled.Her calming technique didnt help at all,in fact she felt weird,very weird.
She felt.....happy,truly deeply and madly happy.That too happy about something,which was around her for so long,yet she didnt realise it.
"I think....I love Benji too...",she said to herself blushingly.

Edited by shruti.nil - 15 years ago

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Aneesha Kaushal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

haye!! soooo cute story shruti👏....this is the exact type of track i want for benia....dia is soo fallen for him

I luved it ...keep writting more u r better than what they show of benia in the show😳

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nada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

wow ..very nice👍🏼

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-CreativeSoul-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

hey this is a really cute ss

plese pm me for next update

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shruti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

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im feeling very very weird after writing this update-i know ive been updating after ages....but the recent circumstances made me go off writing my SS for sometime!No Benia in MJHT broke my hearts to bits.....and to top that the biggest blow of them all no Nupur....Funnily these three are important characters of this SS....Benia Didnt even get a proper ending!.....
ok....a cute update for today!!!hope you like it!!!
DEDICATED TO THE CUTEST COUPLE BENIA AND THE LIVEWIRE NUPUR.

Part6
Nupur and Mayank were hiding behind the pillar outside the music room as Benji and samrat approached the music room.
"Samrat tum andar jaa ke baitho,main bakki sab saaman lata hu..ok....",Benji said to Samrat who silently nodded a yes.Benji pretended to walk away as Samrat entered the room.
"Benji.......room lock karo",Mayank mouthed to Benji.Benji looked at him confused,and them hurriedly went and locked the door.
"Gunjan kaha hai...?",Benji asked as her approached Mayank and Nupur."Room ke andar.....aur Dia kaha hai....?",nupur asked Benji,while benji looked back at Nupur sullenlyand shrugged his shoulders.
"Dia Yaha hai...!",a voice screamed from the entrance.
Benji looked behind only to feel himself sinking in the floor.Dia Bhushan entered the lobby looking divine,in a flowing white sating dress,and her long locks left free blowing with the breeze.
While Dia had eyes only for benji,Nupur noticed that Dia was looking very diffrent today.It wasnt her dress,neither her make-up,it wasnt even her hairstyle,then what was it?,Nupur thought to herself.Suddenly Nupur realised the only reason why dia was glowing to much was...
"Benji..",mayank said and he nudged Nupur to look at benji,who was currently looking at Dia loveingly,blushing the deepest shade of Pink.
"So cute!...",Nupur whispered to Mayank who on the other hand was desperately trying to keep a straight face.
Dia came and stood right next to Benji,while Benji made a starightface again."You IDIOT...",Benji said to himself,"Tumhe usse IGNORE karna hai....Bhav nahi dena...".
"Hi Mayank!....Hi Nupur.....",Dia said smilingly,but suddnely became extreamly consious about herself."Hi Benji...",she said softly looking straight into Benjis eyes.Benji again felt himself sinking in the floor while Nupur was looking at both of them dreamily."So cute...",she said,while Mayank looked at her exhasperated.
"Toh...",Mayank said as he nudged Nupur to behave herself."Abhi bhi thoda kaam baki hai!",he said as Dia and Benji looked at him confused.
"Kya Kaam baccha hai....",Benji asked curoisly.
Nupur made a staright face again and said."Kaam baccha hai na....ho ermm...tum dono us kamre main jao...hum saaman leke aate hai ok...".
Benji was about to open his mounth to ask what 'saaman' when Nupur forcebly pushed him and Dia into the room.
"Tum dono yahi ruko...hum abhi aye....",Nupur hurriedly said as she slammed the door on Benjis face.
Nupur heaved a sigh of relief,as Mayank gave a slight pat on her back."Kya hai?..",she screamed.Mayank gave a sarcastic smile and looked at the the door.
"Oh...",Nupur said as she smiled and hurriedly went and locked the door from outside.

Love shruti😊

Edited by shruti.nil - 15 years ago

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

ph im reading this wid tears in my eyes
its awesome
awesome benia and our nupur were the best characters in mjht :0
u bring bak gr8 memories
love it
plz continue