**A benia short story**-Updt + Note pg8*

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**A benia short story**


Hello...yet another boring sunday,so i thought to post my SS today itself!.This short story is dedicated to all the poeple who love benia,and yes are STILL waiting for thier love story to start.And also the way things of This SS is about how Benji and Dia come togther,and this is how i want the story to proceed.Considering that the benia story has been stuck at the same point for ages,i decided to make one for myself.This SS will consist of 4-5 parts,so its not gonna strech very long.
Hope youll like it,and ya i hope the cvs read this and get a clue of what we want!
This is with the assuption that the sajan-neil track has gone a bit further...and with the refrence that mayank has come back.

Part1
Benji sat at Pani-puri point,the very place where he and Dia were sitting the last time.He felt her tinkling laughter still echoing in his ears.But since then a lot had changed.Gunjan and Samrat who he thought would never be away from each other today faced problems,in the form of Neil.It wasnt like Neil had planned to do so,it well....just happened.He saw the pain in Samrats eyes a few minutes back and felt a painful tugg in his heart.
Samrat and Gunjan were so deeply in Love,yet thier relationship was tested so often.Then what about him and Dia?...He hadnt even told her what he felt,what if...His heart pained at the very thought...He too would have to face the pain of getting away from Dia,without Dia ever knowing what he really felt about her.
"Nahi.....main yeh hone nahi dunga.....mujhe usse batana hoga.....".
Benji phoned Dia,"Dia please Phone uthao...",he said Nervously tapping the Table.
Dia:-Hello?
Benji almost dropped his phone when he heard her Voice.
Benji:(trying desperately to control his emotions):-Dia.....woh...
Dia:-Hi Benji...kya hua?
Benji(nevrously):-Dia main tumse kuch kehan chahta hu....
Dia:-Kaho..
Benji:-Phone pe nahi...main tumse milna chahta hu...
Dia(confused):-Milna chahte ho....ermm.....Ok...kaha....
Benji:-Pani Puri Point.
Dia:-Abhi milna chahte ho...
Benji:-ha....please Dia....
Dia:-Ok Benji...im comming....5 minutes main milte hai....Bye..
Benji(Sadly):-Bye Dia....
Benji kept the phone down,his heart now filled with dread.Did he do the correct thing by Calling her?,What if she never wanted to meet him again after this?But at the same time,he knew that he had to tell her this.....even if it meant breaking his own heart in the process.
tell me what you though about it...do tell
love shruti

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Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part6
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-Nymphadora- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks anki!...didnt expect a comment so fast!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti.nil

thanks anki!...didnt expect a comment so fast!



ur welcome dear....😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww shru. this was so needed! with the lack of benia scenes.. these is what keeps us going. really nice for a 1st part. cant wait to read further!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haey..dear
Awesome start of ss,..
Continue soon

*kulsum*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey... lovely story dear.. awesome!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely story
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 start ....it was really needed !!!
glad benia are in d spotlight atleast here in d foru m
do continue .......n pm me wen u update next
regs,
neeraja
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you so much for the compliment...and yes,ill uypdate soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww!!!!!!
it's sooooooooooo cute!!😊

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