-komal OS Corner-(JWM MN) OS, 28th july

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Posted: 15 years ago
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In this OS corner i will describe my thoughts with words.

Here i'll represent mainly mjht couple......In every way through i'll....I'll

And i will give try to create the same magic by my writings.

I 'll try to take you guys to your fav. couples dream land........

I'll try to make you guys to imagine every single word....

Yup its only a try...Bcoz i know i'm not perfect in this...

And i know i cannot be perfect because no one is perfect...

I know there are Many great writers...whom i cant beat...

And never wantto beat because i want to be good and respect others as well.

So i'm stopping my personal bakwas here........And yeah may be later i write something on other couples of MJHT but the main focus will always be Mayur.

And Starting My OS corner by representing the Mayur ones...........

And yeah you guys can make request if you find my writing good!!!

[Mayank and Samrat is sitting and talking in the canteen]

Mayank: Yaar bohot samay hogaya Nupur ko long driv le jaye.

Samrat: Wow! Kya baat hai aaj bade romantic mood mein?

Mayank: Aise hi yaar!! Aaj bohot mann kar raha hai..

Samrat: Toh jao na roka kisne hai. Jakar apni Nupur ko pa lo.

Mayank: Hmmm mein abhi car nikalta hun...

Samrat: Hello-Hello.......

Mayank: Kya?

Samrat: Car?? Tum Nupur ko long drive pe car mein lekar jaoge?

Mayank: Or nahi toh kya bail-gaadi mein lekar jaun?

Samrat: Nahi dude....I meanh to say ki bike mein lekar jao.

Mayank: Bike mein kyun?

Samrat: Dude bike mein jo maza hai na long drive pe jaane ka woh car mein nahi hai...Jab woh tumhare piche bethe gi, tumhe pakdegi or uski zulfein hawaon mein udengi tab bohot accha lagta hai...

Mayank: Hmm experienced huh?

Samrat: Or nahi toh kya........

Mayank: Par mere pass bike thodi na hai......

Samrat: Mere pass tohhai na....Yeh lo mere bike ki keys.

Mayank: Thanks Samrat...Mein chalta hun.......

Smarat: Bye have fun....

[Mayank calls Nupur and told her to come outside....She came.]

Nupur: Kya hua Mayank?

Mayank: Chalo......

Nupur: Kaha?

Mayank: Long drive pe.......

Nupur:Long drive??

Mayank: Hmmmmmm...ab chalo.

[She saw the bike]

Nupur: Par Mayank...Bike?

Mayank: Hmmm........

Nupur: Tumhe bike chalani aati hai?

Mayank: Obviously Nupur.Ab chalo.

[Mayank starts the bike and Nupur sat on the backside and put her hand on Mayank's shoulder.Mayank smiled.]

[They are on their way.]

Nupur: Yeh achanak se long drive ka idea kaha se aaya?

Mayank: Bas aise hi socha ki apni wife ko bih khush kar dun.

Nupur: Waah kya baathai meri itni fikar?

Mayank: Tum hi toh ek jiske baare mein main fikr kar sakta hun.

Nupur: Hmmmmm........Mayank ek baat bolun?

Mayank: Bolo.

Nupur: Bike thoda tez chalao ge. I mean tum itna slow chala rahe ho ki koi cycle meinbhi humse jeet jaye.

Mayank: Tez?? thik hai.......

[He is driving with full speed now.Nupur got scared and hold him tightly.When she holdhim Mayank felt realy good.She hold him close to her body in one moment Mayank looked back to see her facial expression. She was closing her eyes and he was smiling then he slow down.]

Mayank: Sorry?

Nupur: Sorry kyun?

Mayank: Tum darr gayi thi na?

Nupur: Haan par jab tak tum ho mere saath mujhe kisi baat ka darr nahihai.

Mayank: Chalo hum pohoc gaye.

[He stopped the bike infront of a beautiful lake...The lake water was having reflection of moon.The whole view is looking so beautiful...There is a little bridge...They sat on the bridge.]

Mayank: So kaisa laga??

Nupur: By god Mayank yeh sapne jaisa hai......

Mayank: I know.

Nupur: Yeh sab kitna sundar lag raha hai... yeh thandi hawaein,yeh jheel,yeh raat or iss raat mein tumhara saath.

Mayank: Hmm Nupur bohot dino ek baad hum aisa kuch kar rahe hain na...

Nupur: Haan...

[She hold his hand and put her head on his shoulder.Mayank touched her cheeks.]

Nupur: Pata hai Mayank mein bohot khush naseeb hun ki mujhe tum mile.

Mayank: So toh hai........par mein tumse bhi zyada ki mujhe itna pyaar karne wal iwife mili.......

Nupur: Jee cah raha hai aise hi zindagi bita dun tumhari baahon mein......

Mayank: Haan........

[Mayank became naughty and got an idea.]

[He stood up and Nupur also.]

Nupur: Kya hua Mayank?

Mayank : Nupur kya tum mujhe roko gi agar mein koi pagalpan karun?

Nupur: Pagalpan?Kya matlab?

Mayank: Pehle tum batao haan ki na?

Nupur: Mein kyun rokungi.

Mayank: Thik hai toh.......

[He life her up in his arms........]

Nupur: Mayank yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?

Mayank: Bata hun (smiled with naughtyness)

[Nupur get that he's going to jump in the lake.]

Nupur; No Mayank..........

Mayank: Oh yes.......

Nupur: No-no....

[He jumped in the lake with Nupur .......They got all wet..]

Nupur: Mayank tum toh bilkul pagal ho?

Mayank: Bola toh tha ki pagal pan karne wala hun.

[They are under the water...Mayank move close to her.]

Mayank: By the way maza toh aaya na?

[Nupur smiled......]

Nupur: Haan.........Bohot maza aaya.....

[They are now again in the bridge drynig themself...Nupuri s drying her hair and Mayank is inm black vest.He is stairing at Nupur...Then move close to her.]

Mayank: Tum bohot sundar lag rahi ho..

[Nupur smiled...And then noticed a shooting star in the sky.]

Nupur: Mayank dekho tuta tara.(excitedly)Chalo wish mangte hain.

Mayank: Nupur mein inn sab baaton pe vishwas nahi karta.

Nupur: Par Mayank chodo.

[She closed her and wished 'Mein or Mayank kash humesha aise hi ek saath rahe.humare zindagi mein kabhi bhi koi pareshani na aaye" then she opened her eyes.]

Mayank: Kya maanga?

Nupur: Bata dungi toh wish pura nahi hoga.

Mayank: Nupur humare wish koi shooting stars nahi pure kare skate. Jo humare sapne ya wishes pure kar sakta hai woh hai hum khud. Agar hum ek dusre ke saath hai toh hum kuch bhi haasil kar sakte hai.

Nupur: Maine manga ki kash hum humesha aise hi khush rahen.

Mayank: Woh toh hum rahenge...kyunki bhagwaan chah kar bhi hume alag nahi kar sakte kyunki maine unse ek deal sign ki hui hai (smiled).

[Nupur also smiled]

Mayank: Kyunki humara pyaar bohot saccha hai Nupur.......

Nupur: I LOVE YOU Mayank . Mujhe chod ke kabhi mat jana...

Mayank: Tumhe chod ke kahin nahi jaunga.

[Then they hugged eachother in the moonlight..........]

The End!!!

Hope you will like the first OS of my corner........

Comment is compulsary if you like

Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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    An arti OS by ash dee.........😃(completed) Romantic Mayur OS by pebo,ayeshu,stuti dee,.........😃(completed) A Sajan OS by sana........(completed)
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Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Once again....awesome work sweety👍🏼

Loved it yaar...wish we cud get to see those scenes in MJHT😍😍
Seriously dear....loved ur OS❤️
Do write more hun😉
N im waiting 4 a mindblowing Arti OS😳
Edited by ashmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome OS komal......shooooo sweet and cute,
WOW long drive.....kaash aisa kuch show mein dikhaya jaaye,
loved mayank's pagalpan... 😍 😆
keep writing more!!!

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was awesome komal

the idea of a long drive

that also on a bike

they go to the lake

the talks

and pagalpan of mayank

arre wah

love the way u write komal

a req from me

i want a romantic mayur one😳

with some nok jhoks

love pebbzzyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!! komal di wat an os..its just amazing.....one..... 👏 ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Komz..!! great update<3

i just love what you write?! hope after mayank bk we get more mayur scenes..!! you're totally excellent..!!

keep rocks,

aisho.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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haey..komal

D os z awwesome....

Samrat ka bike pe long drive wala idea acha tha...

D long drive vz so cute n romantic...

Mayank's pagalpan vz rocking...

Lastly d hug vz cho chweet...

*kulsum*
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I was gonna ask you to make one 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Komzzz!!! Wonderful OS! Loved the lake mein jump wala part 😃

Hey, can I make a request? I would like you to write a, you now, very romantic shot 😳
Edited by 2112ization - 15 years ago

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