-komal OS Corner-(JWM MN) OS, 28th july - Page 2

lovely os nicely written suited mayur perfectly loved it very much 😃 gr8 work 👏 👏
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Hiii guyss,

An 'Arti' OS specially for Ash dee (ashmayur)

[Arjun loves Rati but afraid of telling her as it can ruin their friendship'He is in love with her from so long but never dare to tell her.]

Now the story begins'''

[Rati & Mohit are talking at the sets of MJHT'Arjun came and join them]

Arjun: What you guys are talking about?

Rati: Nothing just me and Mohit is discussing about the whole link up things.

Mohit: I read something in the article that me and Sanaya are dating. Its funny na that I'm the one who is dating her and I don't have any idea about that.

[They laughed]

Rati: So true sometimes some rumour left us in shock. Hey by the way where is Sanaya?

Arjun: She had given her shots that's why she left early.

Mohit: Oh''..

Rati: You know people say to me 'oh you and Arjun are not dating? That's strange" everyone know that we are just good friends, I can never date him.

Arjun: Why? (felt bad)

Rati: What?

Arjun: You know why cant you date me?

Rati: What is there any problem with my comment?

Arjun: No-no'no''..

Rati: Hey Arjun wanna grab a bite after the shoot?

Arjun: Sure''.

[Director enters''..]

Director: Arjun-Rati come the shoot is ready.

Arjun: Coming. Lets go.

Rati: Yeah. Mohit stay here wants to talk to you.

Mohit: Ok.

[The director is telling them the scene.]

Director: Mayank and Nupur had a fight but in between that they get close to eachother. Ok?

Rati: Ok.

Director: Now see the scene is that Mayank will go close to Nupur and touch her hand and will kiss her on the cheeks and when he will move forward but Nupur will move away her face. So Arjun ' Rati first you guys will have an eye contact then Arjun you'll touch Rati's hand and her cheeks and will kiss it. And then as I told. Get it? Any problem?

Rati: No.

Director: No?

Arjun: No''.

Director : Ok lets begin then.

[Everyone took their positions'']

Director: Light, camera and action.

[Arjun moved forward to Rati as Mayank. He touched her softly. First he teases her hand, Rati is giving her expressions as Nupur but for Arjun it is all him not Mayank the expressions, the heat, the attraction is what Arjun feeling. Then he touched her cheeks softly and then kissed her in those few seconds Arjun was in heaven. Then he moved forward as he was told to kiss her Rati moved her face away and then the director says 'cut'. Though director have said cut but Arjun is keep looking at Rati.]

Director: Brilliant shot''Rest of the shoot we will continue tomorrow for now pack up.

Rati: Nice shot.

[She left. Arjun was happy to be the only one who is so close to her but also sad that he share the closeness as Mayank not Arjun.]

Rati: Mohit wanna join us for dinner?

Mohit: Sure.

Arjun: Mohit also??

Rati: Yup is there any problem?

Arjun: No I thought only we are having dinner together but Mohit also'..Ok great.

[Arjun didn't like the idea of Mohit joining them]

[They all are at Rati's apartment'.Eating their meals and chatting']

Mohit: Hm Rati yaar the food are delicious.

Rati: Thank you- thank you.

Arjun: Ratz you know tumhare haath ka khana mujhe mom ke haath khane ki yaad dila deti hain.

Rati; Oh Arjun. That's means a lot. You always appreciate my work doesn't matther it is bad or good.

[They had an eye contact''..]

Mohit: Guys if we done sentimental things , can we talk about something else?

Rati: Yeah sure. MrNon-sentimental.

Mohit: Oh i love my nick name.

[They done eating'Now they are looking at some old pics']

Arjun: Look Mohit how good you and Sanaya look together.

Mohit: Yeah but Me and Rati look more good. (kidding)

Arjun: No you guys don't (seriously).

Mohit: I know yaar I was just kidding. Hey look at this pic.

[I n the photo Rat isi shouting.]

Rati: Mohit how can you show him that pic?

[Arjun laughing madly'''..]

Arjun: Why you are shouting?

Mohit: Let me tell you she is not in that condition (laugh) I enter in her apartment and was carrying a ghost marks. She was sleeping I enter in her room and stood infront of her she open her eyes and shouted like a mad person.Then I took the pic.

Rati: (slap Mohit in arms) I hate you for this''..

Arjun: But this pic is realy good. I'm going to keep this.

Rati: No Arjun'.

Arjun: Yes Ratz'

Rati: I'll not talk to you if you take it.

Arjun: Ok baba here you go. Happy?

Rati: Very happy.

[Now Arjun is leaving and asked Mohit also']

Arjun: Hey Mohit lets go.

Mohit: You go I'm going to stay here for a while.

Arjun: You are going to stay??

Mohit: Yup''

Arjun: Ok bbyee''Ratz bbyee'..

Rati: Bye Arjun'.

[Arjun was feeling jealous that Mohit and Rati are spending more time together alone'..He was not able to sleep he keep on thinking about them'']

[Next day at the MJHT set''Its 11 am and they have no news of Arjun.]

[Arjun came. The director was very angry on him. He told the director that he is ill. Director told him to just shot the Mayur patch up scenes then he can go.]

Director: Ok everyone take positions. Light, camera and Action.

[Arjun moved forward to her get lost in her big beautiful eyes.]

Arjun: Nupur kya tum apne Mayank ko maaf nahi karogi? Mein janta hun maine galti maafi layak nahi ki hai par phir bhi Nupur tum toh mujhe janti ho na. Nupur'

Rati; Mayank jab tum mujh pe ilzaam laga rahe the tab tumne mere bare mein kya ek baar bhi socha? Socha ki mujhe kaisa lage ga , socha ki mein tumhare bina kaise rahungi, nahi socha na. tumhe pata hai humesha tumhara intezaar karti thi ki ab mera Mayank vaapsh aayega par aisa kabhi hua hi nahi. Tumhari yaad mein raat-raat bhar roti thi, tumhare

Arjun: Nupur main janta hun maine bohot badi galti ki hai. Par maine bhi tumhe bohot yaad kiya pal ' pal tumhare liye tarsta tha'Kya tum mujhe maaf nahi kar sakti.

[Then he get more closer to her' And this time there were no Mayur it was all Arti']

Arjun: mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hun or vada karta hun tumhe duniya ki har khushi dunga. Nupur''..

[She looked into his eyes. And somewhere Rati was getting that her Arjun is sayingf this thing not Mayank.]

Rati: I love you'Arjun'

Arjun: I love you Rati''

[The director shouted 'Cut' soon Arjun & Rati realize that they speak out their feelings. They were not able to do eye contact with eachother.]

Director: What was that? The whole scene was so perfect but happens in the end you suppose to say Mayank not Arjun and you suppose to say Nupur not Rati.

Arjun: Sorry I cant carry on im going.(looked at Rati)

[Arjun left''..]

[At 10'o clock'Rati is in her apartment. Arjun rang the bell.]

Rati: What you doing here?

Arjun: I was just passing by and thought to meet you.

Rati: Oh come in. how is your health now?

Arjun: Good.

[Both of them are very uncomfortable.]

Rati: I think I should call Mohit also.

Arjun: Again Mohit (angrily)

Rati: Is there something wrong?

[Arjun was not able to control his anger.]

Arjun: Yes can I ask you a qns?

Rati: What?

Arjun: Is there something going on between you and Mohit?

Rati: What?

Arjun: Tell me if there is something going on.

Rati: No way' Arjun how can think of that?

Arjun: I don't wanted you make me think'

Rati: Me?

Arjun: Yes whenever we spend time together you always call up Mohit also why? There is only two reason behind this either you don't take me as your friend or you and Mohit are together.Rati you don't have any idea how much it is painful for me to see you with someone else.

Rati: Why?

Arjun: Because I'(paused)I just want ot know why you ignore me everytime..why you always want to be with Mohit.

Rati: You really want to know?

Arjun: Yes.

Rati: Its because I love you.

Arjun: You what?

Rati: Yes you heard it right I love you. I love you more than anything and whenever we get alone I get afraid that I might break out and tell you my feelings which I don't wanted because I don't want to ruin our friendship at any cost.But now you know and go make fun that my co-star is madly in love with me just go.

[All in sudden Arjun came and hugged her which left Rati in shock]

Arjun: I love you Rati.

[He break out the hug]

Arjun: I love you Rati and I get jealous whenever I saw you with someone else. Its realy painful for me. I'm sorry Rati I never wanted to hurt you. Please forgive me? (looked in her eyes and smiled)

Rati: You always do this to me. First you'll hurt me and then with that sweet smile you patch up with me.

Arjun: Well that's the advantage. I love you Rati and I promise I'll never leave you. I'll give you a life time happiness.

Rati: I love you too Arjun.

[Rati's cell rang.]

Rati: Hello?

Mohit: Hey Rati free?

[Rati looked at Arjun]

Rati: Sorry Mohit I'm right now with someone special. Catch you later.

[Rati disconnected the call.]

Arjun: Someone special hmmmmmm? Why don't you tell him about us?

Rati: Because I want to announce it loudly tomorrow at the sets. Understand Mr.Bijlani? (sweetly)

Arjun: Yes Mrs.Rati pandey Bijlani.

[They hugged each other tightly]

The End'