SS on Sajan n Diel ....IMP NOTE page 14 !!!!!

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hi peeps .......after trying my hand at an os ...here comes an ss that is ..a short story from my side .......

well so here's d plot .....
dia n gunjan are the jaan of excel college ....dia smart n gunjan one 2 die for .......
another thing ....here gunjan does not have specs ....n dresses almost like dia
sam n neel ...well here is d twist ...
sam n neel are both morena ke seedhe saadhe ladke ...
sam n neel cum to excel .....sent by their dad ....
both boys' names :
sam's name : Samrateshwar a.k.a Bhavesh
sam looks like this :
sam in background !😉
neel's name : Neeleshwar a.k.a Champu
neel looks like this :
in full rajput type clothes .....only thingy no turban !!!😃
ok here , after this brief description let me begin ......
Part 1(a)
In Morena :
SND : sam n neel's dad
SND : arrey ladkon .....kabhi toh ladkon ki tarah behave kiya karo .....ladkiyon ki tarah rote hi rehte ho
SND : aur haan bhavesh ( sam is called bhavesh by relatives n frndzz in morena ) , apne bhai champu ka khayaal rakhna mat bhoolna .....
sam : theek hai bauji ......bambai ki choti c chhat ke neeche hum dono apna kaam kar lenge
neel : th..ee..kk hai bauji ...
SND : aur tum bhavesh???
sam : hum theek se rehenge bauji ....aapki izzat mitti mein nahi milayenge
neel : haan bauji bhavesh thik keh raha hai........hum aapki izzat mitti mein nahi milne
denge
SND : shabaash !!! ab baachon jao varna train choot jayegi
sam n neel : (hugging SND n then leaving)
scene shifts to mumbai ....excel college :
dia : heyy you ....cum here n complete my work or else ....
gunjan : heyy deeds ...why r u hyping it up soo much ?
dia : ginny ( that is wat dia calls gunjan )
gunjan : oh come on deeds ....chodo na use bechara ......chal ..jaa kud bhagg yaha se
dia : ginny ..u dont know ajj kal ke people .....they are soo old fashioned ....
wen dia says dis .....sam n neel arrive at entrance of excel .......
gunjan : i know .....u know wat deeds ....i want in my life ..a cute n charming fellow ....who is always at my ghulami .....
dia : why r u bothering yourself soo much ?? if u ask me ginny .....i dont want 2 marry .....why not lead a sorrow free life ?
announcement ......all those loitering at corridors n canteens move toward ur resp. classes .....principal is on rounds ....
dia : oh godd !!! why do these princies live ??? to keep watch ???
gunjan : chal deeds lets go or else we'll hav 2 face hours of detention ....
sam n neel have come .....to obstruct lives of dia n gunjan ......
dia n gunjan head inside class .....n see that their places hae been occupied ......only 2 seats left n that 2 on opposite sides .......having no choice ....gunjan sits beside sam n dia beside neel
during shukla sir's class (yes guys it is shukla sir's class goin on )
sam : hello ji .....main samraeshwar ...mujhe sab bhavesh kehte hain ...
gunjan paying no attention ....
sam : suniye jii ....zara meri kitaab de sakti hain ? aapke pairon tale hai
gunjan : what ??? wat did u say ....?
sam : jii meri kitaab ....
gunjan : english nahi aati kya😡 ...jaane kahan se aaye ho .....
sam : theek hai jee aap shayad gusse main hai ...main hi le leta hoon 😕😕
meanwhile ....dia n neel r progressing quite well ....
dia : uhh kiske saath baithna pad rahaa hai .....zara iske clothes toh dekho
neel : aapna kuch kaha .....jee myself neeleshwar ....mujhe aap champu bula sakte ho
dia : oh hi boy ...dekho main is sab mein interested nahi hioon samjhe
neel : dekhiye ...gussa hona sehat ke liya aaccha nahi hota
dia : ok ok ....ab bas bhi karo ...hassa doge kya ??😆😆😆😆 well naam kya kaha ?? neelsh...?
neel : nahi nahi ...neeleshwar /
dia : oh too bigg a name ......ab se tum neel ho !
neel : jii ?? kya ....neel ?? thik hai jee 😳😳
here the convo for the day ends between sajan n diel (dia n neel)
some 5 days later........
gunjan is going towards canteen to meet dia ....while sam is going in the opp. direction to library ......both hit each other ......books fron sam's hand fall ......
sam is dreaming about him n gunjan ....
gunjan : heyy u .....sharam nahi aati .....ladki ko tuch karte ho
sam : jee ...maaf ki jeeye ......(he picks up his books)
gunjan : (helps sam in picking up books) heyy hi mera naam gunjan hai ...sorry tumhaari books gir gayi
sam : koi baat nahi jee ....gunjan jee
gunjan : heyy ladke ....(wen sam stands up) tumhaara naam kya hai ?
sam : jee ....samrateshwar .....
gunjan : wat ??? itna bada naam ??
sam : kya kare jee ...aap mujhe bhavesh kehkar pukar sakti hain .....
gunjan : no no mann ......too old fashioned !!
sam : jee ..kya kaha aapne ?
gunjan : aaj se tumhaara naam samrat hoga ....😳
sam : thanku jee .....mera naamkaran karne ke liye ....
then sam walks away ......gunjan goes 2 canteen where is dia is already present
dia : heyy ginny ...maine dekha u were getting too intimate with that morena guy
gunjan :heyy deeds nthin like dat !! well he's a cute guy .....long names but .....
dia .: by long names ..i remember a guy .....neel .....jus like dis one ....
gunjan : they maybe from same place ....well wats ur guy's name deeds ?
dia : my guy ??? u crazy ?? ..well not that bad ...he's neel sweet champ ....tu bata ..tere wale ka kya naam hai ...
gunjan : deeds dont act like a freak !!! he's called samrat .....pretty long name his ..i shortened it .....😉
dia : yaa ginny ....these gaon ke logg ....having sooo beegggg names .......its like studying a subject ....😆
well peeps ....here ends my first part .......more interesting thingys to cum in next ...sooo wait n watch ......
in samrateshwar language .....sabar kaa phal meetha hota hai jee😳😉
ps : please press the LIKE button if u really liked it !
all kinds of comments n cricosms welcome !!!
temme if u want me 2 continue or not ......
regs,
neeraja😊
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devilofkindness thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy this is my first attempt .....soo please don b disheartened .....
i must confess tyhat d idea came 2 my mind only yesterday n i implemented it today .......
n i must metion ..with a little help from sana ......thnx deary ......i cant pay u back 4 it ...
waiting 4 comments ......
regs,
neeraja
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaarr why no replies ????😭
is it soo bad ?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome start yaar

loved sam gunji convo
but lol sam champu type😆
anyways love it to the core
plz continue soon
n thanx u soooooo much for pm
looking forward to ur ss
lots of love
sanu😉
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it dear....it's really nice and loved their name samrateshwar 😆 do continue soon.

Edited by -Natasha- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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m waiting for ur reply sana ...coz it matters lott 2 me ....
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liked samrateshwar and neeleshawar....awesome yaar......ginny nice change.........and name to gunjan...........all characters r different......from original show......nice try keep it up.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Page Nos. For Updates

Part 1(a) : pg 1
Part 1 (b) : pg 3
Part 2 : pg 4
Part 3 (a) : pg 6
Part 3(b) : pg 8
Part 3(c) : pg 10
*reserved*
regs,
neeraja
Edited by devilofkindness - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucario

liked samrateshwar and neeleshawar....awesome yaar......ginny nice change.........and name to gunjan...........all characters r different......from original show......nice try keep it up.

thnx a tonne avi ......m delighted😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really nice idea and lovely part! It was really nice and loved all the interactions and convos between them. Keep it up! Waiting for the next part! 😃

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