SS on Sajan n Diel ....IMP NOTE page 14 !!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Dee.Mayur_Arti

Really nice idea and lovely part! It was really nice and loved all the interactions and convos between them. Keep it up! Waiting for the next part! 😃

thnx ......replies really boost d spirit of d writer. ......
thnx a tonne 4 replying !!!!
regs,
neeraja😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy those who want me to pm them when my updt is done plz press the like button

thnx to all 4 giving such a gr8 response to my attempt.🤗
regs,
neeraja😳
Edited by devilofkindness - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Part 1(b)

next day .....
neel is in canteen looking at menu 2 order sumthing ......problem is he does not understand a single word
neel : saand.......yahan saand banate hai ? ajeeb hai jee kuch samajh nahi aa raha
just then dia enters n sees neel confused ....she goes up 2 him
dia : hi neel how r u ? need sum help ?
neel : oh hello dia jii ....aaccha hai aaj aap sukhad hain ....varna main toh ....
dia : what ??
neel : kuch nahi jee ......jee yeh menu hai .....masahari khana banta hai jee yahan ..aap ye kaise khaati hai ?
dia : oh neel ..non veg u mean ? no no ur mistaken ......i'll explain
neel : dia jii .....pata nahi kya mangaoon
dia : sandwiches ...burgers ....pizzas ......what do u want ?
neel : jii main kuch samjha nahi
dia : theek hai ...u leave it 2 me .....(to the counter man ) excuse me .....2 sandwiches please
after sum time d sandwiches arrive
dia : lo ..aa gaye ....khao u'll like it
neel : mmmm .....itna swadisht khaana jii aaj tak nahi chakha
dia : yup i know .....excel canteen is d best
neel : jii manna padega .....hai toh bahut hi aacha
dia : heyy neel .....tum ms. tamanna ke skit mein part le rahe ho na ?
neel : jii ..skeet ....woh kya hai jee ......(after explanation) .....naatak jii .....humne morena mein kitne saare naatak shaili mein bhaag liya hai ...ram leela bhi ki hai jee
dia : oh gr8 phir toh tum isme zaroor part le sakte ho
neel : jii aur aap .....
dia : ah me ?? mujhe ye nahi aata ....
neel : no aap mein yeh khubi hai jee ...aap bhi shamil ho jayiye
dia : okay ...tum itna keh rahe ho toh .....i'll try my best .....
neel : okay jee ...yeh hui na baat .....
dia : tum bhi na ...manane mein gr8 ho .......hats off !!!
then scene shifts to sajan .......
sam is walking thru 2nd floor corridor wen he hears a female voice .....he goes into a room .....deep inside .....it is d music room
gunjan is the one wid d female voice .......sam is carried away into another world hearing her .....
gunjan's singing :
yeh zindagi khole baahen khadi
hawaa yun chali ...dil kahe toh bhi
zaraa saath aaa
kal choti si ....choti yaadon ki gali
pal mein naya ....aisa vaadon ka silsila ....
bheed mein bhi kyun lage ki ....
hum do akele yahaan .....
gunjan is facing a sode ...sam seeing her back
sam : arrey waah jee .....aap gati bhi hain ?
gunjan : oh sam ..rat ..tum ....madad chahiye thi toh mujhe bula lete ....yahaan aane ki kya zaroorat thi
sam : nahi jee yahan se guzar raha tha toh aapki aawaaz sunai padi
gunjan : oh ok ...par tum yeh baat kisiko nahi bataoge ki main gaa rahi thi
sam : gunjan jee ....kyun jee ?
gunjan : dekho samrat plzz ....
sam : jee ...yadi aap aapke hunar ko iss tarah chupa kar baithengi toh aapko aacha na lagegaa
gunjan : thats not the point samrat
sam ; nahi jee ...agar aap apne hunar ko awaaz dengi toh aap hi nahi pure college ko khushi hogi ...ki humare college mein ek sundar gaayika hai
gunjan : par samrat ...meri image ka kya hoga ?
sam : woh jee .....jo ab hai aur bhi mazboot ban jayegi .....aapki hunar aapko aasmaan tale ....suraj ki goud mein khila sakti hai
gunjan : no samrat i cant do this
sam : nahi jee ......aapko yeh karna hoga .....mere liye ....(awww)😳😳😳 .....aapko meri kasam ......aap mujhe samrat kehti hain na .....toh aap mujhe vaada kijeeye ki aap hamaari dosti nibhaayengi ......aur isliye aapko yeh karna hoga .....
gunjan : ok ...tum itna keh rahe ho toh ......
sam : jee ....aaj mere saamne ek kalakar khadi hai ......main jaakar yeh baat ms.tammana koi batakar aata hoon
gunjan : no sam please .....
sam : nahi jee meri khatir .....hum aapki gaayki ko ek surprise event ke roop mein pesh karenge .......sab khush honge .....
gunjan : ok ...nice idea .....
sam : aur haan jee aapki behen dia jee ko bhi yeh baat nahi pata lagni chahiye .....
gunjan : ok samrat maharaj !!! aur kuch ?
sam : nahi jee .....
gunjan : ok itna sab tum karva rahe ho mere se ...u promise me 1 thingy
sam : kya baat hai jee ? ek nahi do promise karungaa .......
gunjan : ok then ......talent parade khatam hone ke baad yeh mein poochoongi tumse ....
sam : aacha jee ....ab main chala .....
gunjan : bye ....samrat .....😳😳😳 main tuhaari rah dekhoongi
At d end of college :
sam n neel are leaving .....gunjan n dia pass by .....
dia : heyy neel .....going home >>>????
neel : haa jii ....
sam : champu .....yeh kaun hai ?
gunjan : hii samrat .......
neel : tu bata ye kaun hai ...(pointing towards gunjan)
dia : im dia ......n she's my sissy ginny
sam : ginny ......gunjan jee ....aapne naam badal liya ?
gunjan : no no samrat ....thats d way deeds calls me ....hi neel ...nice 2 meet u
dia : (to her ginny) u didnt like ur name na so how cum he's calling u gunjan ?
gunjan : deeds ....its okay ....waise bhi ihave 2 get used 2 it now
dia : oh ...ho .......so this is the thing ....😉
gunjan :deeds .........samrat .....mujhe tumse baat karni hai .....akele mein 😳
sam : kya hai jee ....?
gunjan : deeds u go homw i'll b bak in an hour
neel : bhavesh tu aaja ...main chalta hoon
dia : hey ..neel y dont u cum wid me ? i'll drop u home
neel : kya jee ....ok jee .....aa jaana bhavesh ..
neel n dia go in dia's car .......
now there is only sajan 😳😳😳
sam : gunjan jee ...gaana gayengi aap abhi ?
gunjan : haan samrat ..i asked u to wait coz only u know my secret .....chalo
sam ; theek hai jee ......jaisa aap theek samjhe ....
sam n gunjan go to music room ......sam gets 2 cups of coffee 4 both of them ........
gunjan starts rehearsing ....sam is just admiring her .......n has entered d world of dreams n fantasies .......
occasionally gunjan asks him for his comments .......
n sooo goes her practice ......wid sam carefully guarding her secret ....
everytime she goes into rehersal mode ...........
hi peeps so here ends my part 😊........waiting for ur wonderful comments n suggestions ........
plzzz press like button on the if u want me to pm to u wen i update next ......😉
regs,
neeraja😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Good going! Another nice update ! I'm really loving all the interactions especially between dia and nell! Keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
oh its adorable....neeleshwar and samrat echwar....its awesum...can you plz pm me wen you update it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
cute..........................................but wen will u make samrat the coool dude,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,he's mre cuter like that.......maybe gunji will helf..............ud sooon.......and pm me...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Really nice part jee....i liked non veg thing of neil jee....it was hasyaspad ji...sajan were also Gud....continue soon jee.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Awesome one again neeru....loved it....do continue soon !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
awesome yaar
beautyfull update
loved saja closenes
im really impressed wioth ur story
plz continue soon
im loving it to the core
n thanx u so so sooooo much for the pm
lots of love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Update PM List for Sajan Diel SS :

sana_sajan
ishika_sajan
-Natasha-
lucario
Dee.Mayur_Arti
shruti.nil
yasri
sharma.nat
kris97
aarthi.ramani
Kismat_sammy
SaJan_Sana4ever
-Drishti-
preety88
Shafoo
Mahiii
aashizin
sweetsonal156
Uussmann
AttractiveAdya
SaJan-SaJan
mayadika11
afshanafreen
pragya_luvsajan
charmee_sammy
*reserved*
regs,
neeraja😃
Edited by devilofkindness - 15 years ago

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