hi peeps,
here comes my next part ....
Part 3(b) :
dia n neel are rehearsing 4 d play in bhushan mansion .....
dia : aapko jab peli baar dekha tab maine aapko apna pati parmesh.........uhhh y is this line not occuring 2 me ???😕😕😕
neel : oh dia .....aise nahi .......mujhe dekho n understand ok ?
dia : fine go on
neel (saying dia's lines) : aapko jab pehli baar dekha tab maine aapko apna pati parmeshwar sweekar liya tha ...... ok this way 😃
dia : ok samjhi ......(saying lines now) ......apna pati sweekar liya tha 😳😳😳(dreaming bout neel) ....tabhi se mann mein ek chain jaag utha hai ......na jaane kab mujhe aap aapke ghar lekar jayenge .....(while she says these lines she is actually thinking bout neel n herself ........)
neel (saying his lines) : haan jii aap jaisi sarvashresht sundari ko apne ghar le jaane ke liye main kitna utavla ho raha hoon yeh mujhse behtar aur koi na jaanta devi jii
(meanwhile he is thinking bout dia n himself and dia is thinking d opposite .......awww😍)
neel n dia are in their cute little dream ..........
dia (2 herself) : heyy neel .....u don't know ......all the emotions of my character are evolved in me rite now ........ i think i have found my prince charming ......😍😍
neel (2 himself) : ohh dia .....tumhe nahi pata ki tumne mujhme wapas vahi jeene ki aas jala di hai .....ab main jeeyoon toh yeh mera nishchay hai ki sirf tumhare saath jeevan bitaoonga ......bas der hai tumse yeh baat kehne ki😳😳😳
just then like a loud fire alarm sounding ......a bigg loud noise cud b heard outside the house ........
then only dia n neel came back 2 their senses ........
dia : oh neel did u hear the noise ???
neel : haan dia ......chalo dekhte hain
dia : arrey .......yahaan toh koi nahi hai
neel : haan dia ......samajh nahi aa raha ......
just then outside the door one cud see lots of bouquets full of red roses ..........one of them had a letter attached
neel : dia yahan aao toh .....tumne phool mangaaye the kya ???
dia : wat ???? phool ??? nahi toh .....😕😕😕 maine toh bas ek flower basket maanga tha .....to decorate the dining hall ....
toh yeh sab ....woh bhi itne saare ?? i have no idea really
neel : ok ....(picks up the letter in one of them) .....see this yahan ek letter hai
dia : wat ??? letter ......i dunno y neel i don't feel good bout these flowers
neel : don't worry dia ...letter kya kehta hai dekhte hain ......
hmmm ....(reading the letter)
dear dia and neel,
this is 4 u my cutiepies .....
mujhe acche se maloom hai ki tum dono bestest friends se bhi badhkar ho isliye tumhaare is so-called-frndship ko ek aur level tak le jaane ke liye maine in phoolon ka intezaam kiya hai.
i hope tum dono is baat ko samjhoge aur apni is frndship ko ek aur bade mukaam par le jaoge.
aap dono ka chaheeta shubchintak.
dia : oh godd !!! ab yeh kaunsi nayi museebat aa gayi ???
neel : dia ...mujhe bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha .....hamari atoot dosti ko badnaam kaun kar sakta hai ???
(in his mind thinks ......waise jo bhi hai isne sahi kaha hai😳😳)
dia (2 herself) : mann .....i dunno y im feeling good after reading d letter .....whoever has done this is really a wellwisher ......and .....the person knows very well about us too 😳😳) ......thank u god .....ishaara dene ke liye
then both stop dreaming again ........dia is first 2 cum 2 senses .....naturally😆
dia : oh godd neel .....let this be now .......lets go inside n have lunch ...i know u must b terribly hungry ......coz i am too
neel : haan ok ....
they take the bouquets inside and dia is just about to go towards kitchen when ......
ahhhhh.........ouchhhhhh!!!!
neel runs towards dia ......dia has fallen down after hurting herself in nearby shelf ......
neel : diaaaaa .......tumhe lagi toh nahi .....😭😭😭
dia : ouccchhhh .......
neel : yeh dekho.....paaon mein kharoch aa gayi ...main abhi first aid box lekar aata hoon
dia : ooochhhh ......mere room mein hai
neel cums with d box ......
he is applying medicine in dia's leg ....and had carefully bandaged it .....
dia tries to get up but is unable .......
dia : ouccchhh ...neel
neel : see ma'am .....u cant walk in this condition ......im sorry i'll have to carry u
dia just doesnt utter a word ......she is obviously too happy to be in neel's arms ......
both look into each others eyes ......they are unable to do anything else at that moment ........
then eyelock .........a longgggggg eyelock .......
then the leg of dia hurts again to prove as an adchan in the cute romance ........
ouuuccchhhh ......
neel makes dia sit on the chair n also lays the table 4 lunch .....
both start eating but both of them feed each other .....and not themselves ............
(awwwww.......😳😳😳😳)
here ends this part of mine ........
hope all of u enjoyed it ....
im waiting 4 ur comments / criticisms / feedback .......as always ......u know 😳😳
AND
IMP NOTE : i expect everyone whom i have PMed to reply to the update .....share ur view
just pressing the like button will NOT do.
by the way no offence to anyone.😃
once again .....
thnx n regs,
neeraja😃
Edited by devilofkindness - 15 years ago
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