Creative writing-IMP NOTE - Page 7

I have been reading a lot of the creative writing that is being posted on the forum... Mind you.. I love writing too... But from what I have been reading in the posts about Sanraj romance, I feel that many are going over board.. Please keep it simple and pleasant and not write something that looks very cheap.. If you are going to write please try to keep in mind the psychology of the characters thjat have been potrayed... I read a post recently about Santu drinking baang and seducing DM by wearing a micro mini... come on yaar... DM would have slapped her.. and not to forget Santu would never do something so undignified... It looked like a scene from a cheap x rated magazine... Please understand, Iam criticising the writing.. not the person who wrote it. Some time back, I think it was Rakhi?? who wrote a creative piece about Sanraj relationship ( the stirrings) and how the creatives could have used their brains to come up with something like that to emphasise how a relationship between two people can blossom and she had kept the Characters on the same lines as the original. That was really a creative piece.. Kudos to her.. and ofcourse there were many such pieces like that which was truly appreciated.. Please keep creating stories but with a logical mind. I also see that most of the writings are purely based on the "making out" of Sanraj... Are we getting obsessed with SEX only?? why?? write about romance, write about love, write about relationships and write about values.... Add up all this and a beautiful story is sure to come out. The creatives could have taken the story of Bandini in the same lines. They did not need the leap. Santo cud hav taken the blame for Arjan's killing.. DM being him cud have found out about this after he comes out of his coma. Proceeded to prove in his no nonsense way that his wife is no killer and its somebody else. Birwa or any child for that matter can never keep such a secret for so long.. I know from experiences from working with children. Cud have made Arjan the brother of Sandeep . Changed the Blood reports with the help of Avinash chowdry/ virat... The blossoming of the relationship of a young girl who is mature beyond her years, but still young and innocent at heart .. The 50 + aged husband who is in love with her and his feelings of guilt regarding the age difference.. The pair spending some quality time alone in Pawahgad... Santu being kidnapped by sandeep toi exact revenge on DM.. his despair on being unable to save her from the kidnappers.. The ideas are endless.. But as we all have repeatedly said.. Creatives are useless.. they are beating around the same bush time and again. And even now, we see that they have run out of ideas and are trying desperately to do something new but come out with hands empty... But my point is that we do not have to be like them, do we?? So please keep your creative juices flowing and entertain all of us who look forward to such posts. Thank you

Excellent piece of writing and thought provoking Janardhana. I am extremely inclined to agree with every word of what you have said about the creative writings and fan fictions. On a personal front i am of the staunch opinion that titillation should not become the corner stone of any story since the onus of a relationship is a delicate balance of the emotional with the physical. We do not need portrayals of extremely complicated scenes which utilize bawdy meanderings to depict a relationship.

i just want to say that i totally agree with you - i mean adding new charcters creating a story is fine but when potrayign sanraj scenes i think it is best to keep it simple - haan include some romance but not like overboard - because i peronsalyy have included one or two scenes inclduign some romance but i dont think i have crossed the line - and like the exammple you have given, the skirt example - it jsut ruins the chacarters image (im not pin pointing or nor am i criticising the writer) its just that if u do include romance then include it in sanraj way!

Originally posted by: s000

i just want to say that i totally agree with you - i mean adding new charcters creating a story is fine but when potrayign sanraj scenes i think it is best to keep it simple - haan include some romance but not like overboard - because i peronsalyy have included one or two scenes inclduign some romance but i dont think i have crossed the line - and like the exammple you have given, the skirt example - it jsut ruins the chacarters image (im not pin pointing or nor am i criticising the writer) its just that if u do include romance then include it in sanraj way!

and like u said we all should write about romance, love, relatinships value etc (its actually funny because my previous scene i had said the same thing and now im reading your post)

i respect and appreciate every FF writing as i know how diff it is to write and the time u spend on writing it!!

but totally agree with your point !!

and again im not outcasting or pin oiting anyway - jsut given my opinion to the orginial post!

For some reason i read this "no ahem" story of yours with lovely pictures today and i must say i enjoyed it so much.

thank you chalia much appreciated🤗 - i keep my sanraj scenes simple and realistic as poss and the pics help to potray that and the pic side is my uniqueness to my FF!

Originally posted by: s000

i respect and appreciate every FF writing as i know how diff it is to write and the time u spend on writing it!!

but totally agree with your point !!

and again im not outcasting or pin pointing anyone - jsut given my opinion to the orginial post!

Originally posted by: chalia

s000, i agree with you that a lot of effot goes into writing up an FF but i do feel that the end product should be worth the effort and time.

If something leaves an undesirable feeling after having read the FF, then i think it just rankles rather than entertains.

And i do agree with Janardana for seeing an obsession with the "physical" in many FFs that are being put out. It just kills the sensitivity in the story.

exactly!!

An extremely stupendous way of expressing your view!! I completely agree with your opinion and understand your sentiments. And I must say your post came at the right time. And Chalia, couldn't agree more with you!!

to be honest I am not much of a romantic person nor am I much into the ahem ahem .
I only know how to rant 😆
I prefer smart , humourous, sarcastic and to the point writing.
But to each is their own.