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Posted: 15 years ago
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Plzzzzzzzzz take some rest....
You can update the chapter when you are well....

Thats most imp....

Get well soon...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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No problem.Pls take care and get well soon.BTW the chp was nice. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter -7

(note: plzz avoid extra question marks. they are mistakenly written)
Humen bht dar lag raha hai Krishna, Pratigya said.

Krishna: daro mat hum tumhaare saath hain.

They were roaming in the jungle since morning but they couldn't find the way out. The sun was about set down. Reddish orange sky, high raised trees long raised grass gave a very scary image to Pratigya. They both were tired and decided to rest somewhere. They both were sitting down a Long tree. Pratigya was really scared and was catching Krishna's arm very tightly.

Krishna?pratigya humen kal subha tak ka intazaar karna ho ga kyoun ke abhi andhera ho chuka hai aur abhi hum raasta nae dhuund paye ge. Pratigya?lekin kitni dair tak hum aise hi iss jungle main rahe ge. Humen bht dar lag raha hai. Krishna daro mat hum hain na.

Pratigya stood up. Krishna?kya hua? Pratigya?kuch nae bus aise hi humen dar lag raha hai. Krishna also stood up. suddenly pratigya shouted very loudly and hugged Krishna. Krishna asked: Pratigya kya hua? Pratigya?w?.wo??s?s.ss. saanp!(snake)

Krishna took her away from there and made her sit. Then he took a thin log and hit it hard on the snake. And it finally died. Pratigya was shivering with fear. Krishna came and sat with her and then placed her head over his chest and his arms round her as if she was a child. Krishna?pratigya tum fikar mat karo?..hum hain na tumhaare saath.

Krishna made her sit?.. she was placed her head on his legs and tried to fall asleep but couldn't. she just closed her eyes in order to feel a little released. Krishna was busy in thinking something deeply. Then he said?Pratigya hum jaante hain tum hum se pyaar karti ho. Hum tumhaari feeling samajh sakte hain.

Hum ne iss bare main bht socha. Tum mano na mano tum main aisi koi baat zaroor hai jisna mujhe tumhen pehli baar main attract kar liya tha. Main kabhi kisi larki main ye nae dekha. Jab tumhen main ne pehli baar dekha tha tabhi mujhe kuch hua tha.

Lekin sach bataun to main England main humesha se akela raha hun aur mujhe pyaar vyaar ye sab sach nae lagta, balke lagta tha. Tumhen main kaise bataun ke tumhaare dil main mere liye jo feeling hai wohi mere dil main tumhaare liye bhi hai. Lekin main bht embarrassed feel karta hun ttumhen batate hue. I don't know how I should tell you.

Krishna was thinking that Pratigya had fallen asleep. But no, she wasn't asleep. She was awaken. She was hearing to everything Krishna was saying. She rose up. Krishna was shocked to see that she wasn't asleep and was hearing everything which he was saying. Pratigya?tum main itni bhi himmat nae hai?

Krishna?main shuru se akela raha hun aur mere andar kabhi aisi feeling nae ayi?? aur is liye main oyaar vyaar pe vishwas nae karta tha?. Aur jab mujhe asal main pyaar ho gaya to mujhe khud hi yakeen nae aa raha tha ke mujhe pyaar ho gaya. Main khud ye baat man ne ke liye tyaar nae tha.

Pratigya just passed a slight smile and then hugged him tightly??.Krishna tum humen chor ke mat jao??.mat jao plzzzz?.

Krishna?main tumhen chor ke jaa hi nae sakta!

Pratigya was really happy now??her stress was almost released completely??. She fell asleep being lied on Krishna's leg and Krishna placing his head on the tree.

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Pratigya's mum was really worried about Pratigya. She has been out of her home since 1 day. Shyam was worried too. They both called at every relative's house but no answer??.

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Pratigya and Krishna were trying to find the way when it was morning. They both were roaming all around the jungle but couldn't find any way. Suddenly Pratigya said: Krishna wo dekhiye, wahan koi sunsaan sa road hai. Krishna and Pratigya both went there and saw that it was a lonely road(LOL) and not even a single person could be seen there.

Krishna and Pratigya moved ahead but it seemed that they are just walking straight on this empty road and which has no end. Pratigya distressed again to find this. Krishna said not to worry they will soon find a way. They both were walking when they saw a lady with open and long hairs, who was wearing white sari. Krishna and Pratigya ran to her to ask if she could help them in any way. She told?ap log yahan se seedha jaen ge to ap ko mor nazar aye ga, wahan se mur jana, wahan pe bus stand hai?.

Saying this she went through the jungle. Krishna and Pratigya was shocked to see her behavior. But still they went through the way she told. When they reached the place the women have instructed, they saw a bus stand. Krishna went and asked for some information of the place they were in and how could they go back. Pratigya was sitting on a bench. Krishna came to her and told her that they will have to go through the following bus to their home. It was a really long route. They both entered the bus. It was really crowded. There was only one seat empty left. Krishna asked pratigya to sit there and he stood beside her. The bus started. Pratigya was busy in thinking something deeply. The lady sitting beside her got up to leave the bus. Krishna was about to sit on the empty seat but a man came and sat beside pratigya pushing Krishna away. Krishna got really angry. The man was not of a good nature. His attempt was not to have a seat but something else. He slowly raised his arm and kept on the opposite shoulder of Pratigya to him. Pratigya was feeling really uncomfortable. Krishna saw him doing so, he caught pratigya's hand and made her stand and sat on pratigya's place. Then Krishna did the same thing with the man. He kept his hand on the man's shoulder. The man got up suddenly at his behavior and left the seat. Then Krishna asked pratigya to have a seat. Pratigya:thanks Krishna. Krishna:are kya kah rahi ho? Thanks? Pyaar main thnx, sorry, in words ki koi meaning nae samjhi?

Pratigya passed a slight smile and the place her head on Krishna's shoulder.

The bus was on its way when the conductor shouted to the passengers that they have reached and asked them to leave. Krishna an Pratigya also left the bus. Krishna: Pratigya main tumhen ghar chor deta hun.

Pratigya: Krishna?.k?..krishna, Wo hum keh rahe the ke?

Krishna: haan bolo kya?

Pratigya: Wo mujhe lag ta hai humen humaare ghar waalon se baat karni chahyie.

Krishna: hmm. Theek hai. Main apne ghar walon se baat kar ke tumhaare ghar tak baat pohanch chaun ga.

Pratigya: I'll be waiting.

Krishna dropped her at her home and went to his house.

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On the other hand, pratigya's family was suffering from great tension.

What happened was, arushi was having a nap and was dreaming. Meanwhile she was whispering that she loves Krishna and naina ji heard that. They asked her about it when she got up and she was forced to tell the truth. Now the saxena family didn't have any other way but only one way.. marrying Arushi with Krishna. Because Arushi crossed all the limits and told in clear words to her family that she won't marry any other person than Krishna.

Pratigya stood like a statue after hearing their conversation.

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hope u like it😉

Edited by Kriar121 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
Amazing Yaar!!
Wonder Whats Gnna Happen Next!
Keep It Up :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
wow that was realy nice 👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
love it please do update sooon
thanx alot😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
oh no!!! looks like pratigya will sacrifice her love for her sister :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update waiting for the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh no!!don't tell me tht Pratigya will sacrifice her love now.BTW Nice chp 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter-8

Krishna, tum England nae gaye? Waapis.? hum to samjhe tum England ap tak pohanch chuke ho ge. Krishna: main abhi bht thaka hua hun baad main ap ko sab bata dun ga. Krishna went upstairs to his room and to have a nap.

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Pratigya was very distressed. Arushi came to the room and asked her what happened. Pratigya didn't reply and went to the washroom. Arushi was very happy that her parents will be gong to Krishna's house to talk about their marriage. She was like flying in skies. She was murmuring to herself that: Hum Krishna ki patni banen ge. Humara pyaar humen mil jaye ga! Hum aj bht khush hain.

Behind her stood pratigya. She was listening to what Arushi was saying. Pratigya knew now that Arushi is also in love with Krishna. Pratigya didn't know what to do. Naina ji and shyam ji decided to meet them that same evening and so they were getting ready. Pratigya was quite. Didn't open her mouth at all. Her parents tried to ask her a lot that where were she, but she kept quite after listening Arushi's and her parents conversation.

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Saxena family (naina ji and shyam ji) reached Krishna's house by asking them the address. Krishna's parents welcomed them. They had talked to them on telephone and Saxena family told them everything in advance. Krishna came downstairs. He was shocked to see Pratigya's parents. He thought to himself : maine to Pratigya ko kaha tha ke main baat karun ga, phir uss ne? wo bhi itni jaldi?

He was confused but then thought its good that she talked so early to her parents and they agreed to and that, they are here to talk about it to his parents.

Krishna was happy now, infact very happy. He came to Shyam ji and naina ji and touched their feets to get their blessings and then sat on the sofa. They were talking about the going to-be relation ship but they didn't take Arushi's name and so Krishna was thinking that theya re talking about Pratigya. Krishna's parents knew that whom they are talking about. Krishna was feeling bored between their conversation and so got up and went back to his room. Behind him, shyam ji showed the photo of Arushi to His parents and asked them that?ap ko humaari Arushi pasand to hai na.

They replied:haan haan bohat sundar hai. They were very happy to get a positive reply. But unfortunately Krishna already left. They confirmed the relation ship but krishna's parents told that they'll first show that photo of Arushi to him and if he agrees then they'll confirm it completely.

Pratigya's parents left after having a long conversation with Krishna's parents.

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Krishna's Mother went upstairs with Arushi's photo in her hand to show it to Krishna. Krishna was sitting on his Bed. His mother came and told:

Beta ye wo.. larki ki tasveer hai tum dekhlo use.

Krishna in hurry got up and mistakenly said: humne usse dekha hua to hai.

Seeta: kya.. k?kya kaha tum ne?

Krishna: ab wo kuch nae main kah raha tha ke main uss larki ki photo dekhlun ga ap yahan table pe rakhden.

Krishna's mother kept it on the table and left.

Krishna was thinking to himself : Us ski tasveer dekhne se kuch nae hoga kyoun ke uss ki tasveer to humare dil main basi hui hai. Itni khubsoorat ankhen , uske patle patle honth , us ki choti si naak (nose) wo sof se baal?uff!

Krishna was busy in thinking this deeply completely detached from the world as if he doesn't know anyone else in this world except his love Pratigya.

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Pratigya was sitting on her bed. She locked the door of her room and she was crying like she has lost every single thing in her life. She didn't know what to do. Tears were scrolling down her eyes continuously. Suddenly a thought stroke her mind. She thought to herself how selfish I am. I don't even think about my sister. Who is younger than me. I have some responsibilities towards her. I shall sacrifice my Love for her. I'll not let anyone to reveal Arushi's face to him. Let him think that he is marrying me. Let him let him!! And let me settle Arushi's life. She has loved Krishna as I do. I should understand her feelings towards Krishna because they are same as are mine now. GOD HELP ME TO DO THIS......GIVE ENOUGH POWER!!!!!!

That was Pratigya's wordless thought to herself.

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so it was chapter 8.. hope you all liked it!!!😉

Edited by Kriar121 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice chapter!! Awww... Pratigya's sacrificing her love her sister..😭 Hope Krishna finds out soon and doesnt feel betrayed, please update soon.

Edited by *angel94* - 15 years ago

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