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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one plzz make the next part longer
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Chapter-10

Pratigya was resting on her bed. She was feeling a high pain in her head. Arushi was trying some cooking in the kitchen with her mother. The telephone rang. Naina ji picked up the phone. It was from Krishna's father. He had arranged a party to announce his son's engagement. Pratigya's family was also invited. Naina ji called shyam ji and asked him to return home early today as they were invited to Krishna's house for a small party. The timing given was 6:00 pm. It was nearly 5:34 in the evening. Shyam ji was at home and every one was getting ready. Suddenly Arushi came running to Naina ji and told that Pratigya is sleeping. Naina ji was confused because she never slept in the evening. She went to her room to wake her up. But Pratigya was not at all ready to get up. After a long time she got up. Naina ji asked her to get ready. But she refused. She was not in a mood of going to the party maybe because of the same reason KRISHNA.Naina ji was worried. She didn't want to leave pratigya alone at the home. So she asked Arushi to stay with her but Shyam ji said:Arushi aur Krishna ke liye hi to ye party rakhi gayi hai na?

Naina ji:Koi baat nae, hum unhe samjha len ge.

Shyam ji agreed but still not completely. Naina ji and shyam ji left. Pratigya and Arushi were alone at the house.

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Are! Shyam ji, ayi ayi,

Arushi nahi ayi?

Shyam ji:wo darasal Pratigya ki tabiyat thori kharaab thi to iss liye wo uss ke saath ghar pe ruk gai.

Lekin........

Naina ji:koi baat nae. Hum usse phir kabhi ap ke ghar le ayen ge.

He agreed and welcomed them to home. Raj varma and Amman varma were accompanying them. Everyone in the party was busy in discussing their own matters, shyam ji, naina ji, raj, amman and seeta too. They all four were talking to each other. They were discussing about Arushi's and Krishna's marriage. They all were happy with their marriage. Not a single person was having an excuse. Every one was satisfied with this marriage. Shyam ji and Naina ji were not at all bothered about how Arushi forced them for this marriage. Krishna was a nice guy and that's why they were totally satisfied with him that Arushi hasn't made a wrong choice. He is a good person. Suddenly a thought Stroke Naina ji's mind. She said: Waise Krishna to England main rehta hai na? to kya wo shaadi ke baad?..

Seeta cutting her in between said: are ap chinta mat Karen. Hum apna England wala business Amman ko sonp den ge.

Amman: haan aur waise bhi Russia wala business abhi itna zyaada nae hai wo to mera Colleague bhi sambhal le ga.

Naina ji was happy to hear that Arushi would stay in India only, after her marriage.

After few minutes Seeta said: wo dekhiye Krishna a gaya..

Everyone looked at him. He was coming downstairs.

He was well dressed. He wore a gray shirt over which he wore a Black coat. He had the perfect looks of a handsome Gentleman.

Everyone was very happy to see him. He came towards his family and touched their feet to gain their blessings. Raj varma introduced Krishna to everyone. After some time he took Krishna to the main stage and made the announcement of his Son's and Shyam ji's daughter marriage but unfortunately he didn't took Arushi's name so that Krishna could know about it. He called Shyam ji upon the stage and introduced him too. Everyone was glad to meet him. After the announcement everyone came to Raj varma and presented their congratulations for His son's marriage. They wanted to see the girl but Raj said that they could meet her later. Everything was fine and calmly going on.

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Pratigya was in the kitchen to drink water. Arushi was in her room.

After drinking water she came to the room. She was shocked with what she saw. Her eyes were opened widely to see it. She couldn't speak a word out. What she saw was:

Arushi was standing on the lengthy window's railing with two glasses in her hands and she was transferring water from one glass to the other.

Pratigya shouted loudly ARUSHI!!!

She ran to her and pulled her towards her down from the railing.

She asked? ye kya kar rahi ho tum? Pagal ho gayi ho? Gir jaati bahar to? Wo bhi itni unchaiye se!

She shook Arushi hardly from her shoulders but Arushi became unconscious and fell on the ground. Pratigya was helpless. She tried to make her conscious with many ways but everything was in vain. She got up and called at her father's number. He wasn't picking up because he couldn't hear the voice coz of lots noise. She tried again and again but there was no answer. She again went to Arushi. She took little water in a glass and sprinkled it over Arushi's face but again it was in vain. She again tried at Shyam's number but still there was no answer. She was sweating a lot. She didn't have any other way and so she took the telephone numbers diary and searched for Krishna's number. She dialed his number but he also wasn't picking up the phone. She tried thrice but no answer. Once again she tried at shyam's number but no answer then she tried at Krishna's number and finally he picked up the phone. Pratigya was speaking hardly as she kept on running to and fro and she was scared too with Arushi's behavior and then how she fell down. She told to Krishna to reach at her house as soon as possible. She didn't tell him the actual reason but asked him to reach as soon as possible. Krishna thought that it was something very serious and so he went to her house. Pratigya opened the door and in a hurry told him what had happened with Arushi. Krishna came to the room and they both took Arushi to the hospital. The doctor kept her in Theatre for the check-up, after few minutes he came out and told them that every thing is fine with Arushi now and you can meet her. Pratigya went in running and sat beside Arushi. She asked her that what had happened to her. What was she doing by standing at the railing. How dangerous it was. Arushi didn't reply because she herself didn't know what she has done. Krishna was standing beside Pratigya. Krishna told to Pratigya that he is going to ask the doctor fro her discharge. He came in after few minutes and told that she could be discharged. Krishna dropped Pratigya and Arushi at their home and left. When they both entered the house they saw naina jee and Shyam ji searching for both of them everywhere around the house. They saw them and asked them angrily where they were. Pratigya told everything to them. They didn't seem so shocked to hear what Pratigya said. Naina ji made Arushi sleep. Pratigya slept too as it was quite late. Naina ji came to shyam ji and sat beside him. He was sitting tensed. Naina ji placed her hand over his shoulder and said: humen to dur hai ke jo baat hum ne sab se saalon se chupa kar rakhi kaheen wo sab ke saamne na ajaye. Hum ne ye baat khud apne bachon yahan tak ke khud Arushi se bhi chupa kar rakhi taake kaheen us ka ane wala jeewan barbaad na hojaye. Ab humen dar lag raha hai ke ye saalon pehle dafan hui wi baat kaheen sab ke saamne na ajaye. Ye baat agar dafan hi rahe to acha hai warna ye aik baat humaare bachon ki zindagi barbaad kar ke rakh sakti hai.

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Edited by Kriar121 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
i pdated a longer chap this time for you all!!
i fulfilled my promise now its your turn to click the LIKE button if u actually liked the chap!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely chp.But Aarushi pagal toh nahi hai rite.Aisa koi karta hai kya shaadi se pehele.And oh god aaj bhi Krishna ko pata nahi chala ki he's abt to get married to Aarushi and not Pratigya.But can't wait for this suspense to be revealed.It was a very interesting chp.And thank you for the long update. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thnxx for liking dear!!! and yea the suspence will be revealed in the next chap so keep your fingers crosseD!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ah! nice update, pls reveal the suspense soon yar! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thxx for updating this time a long part
waiting for the next one
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Chapter-11

It was nine in the morning. Arushi was sleeping. Pratigya woke her up and asked her to get fresh. Arushi went to the washroom to get fresh. Pratigya was about to leave the room to help her mother in the kitchen when her mobile phone rang. She went and picked up the phone. It was Krishna's call.

Krishna: kaisi ho?
Pratigya (in a low and distressed voice): main theek hun. Ap kaise hain?Krishna: main bhi theek hun. Aur Arushi kaisi hai ab? Uss ki tabiyat to theek hai na?
Pratigya: haan theek hai ab us ki tabiyat.
Krishna: Aur baki sab ghar main kaise hain?
Pratigya: hmm. Sub theek hain.
Pratigya and Krishna were talking and meanwhile Arushi came and asked: kon hai phone pe didi?

Pratigya got scared because if she tells her that she is talking to Krishna she would ask what are you talking about and why? And if Krishna hears this he'll doubt about this marriage which pratigya didn't want to happen. She suddenly told to Krishna: main ap se baad main baat karun gi and cut the phone. Then she turned towards Arushi and told her that she was talking to her friend. Arushi knew almost every friend of Pratigya and so she asked which friend was she talking to. Pratigya knew that she knows every one so she told that it's a new friend of her and that You (Arushi) doesn't know her. Arushi just shook her head slightly in agreement and went to comb her hair. Pratigya kept the phone on the table and went to the kitchen to help her mother. She was thinking about Arushi's behavior last night. She was cutting some potatoes. She left those potatoes and went to her mother. She kept her hand on her shoulder and asked her to talk to her.

Naina ji : Kya hua pratigya?

Pratigya: kal Arushi ne jo harkat ki us ko leke hum bht pareshan. Mummy humen dur hai ke kaheen Arushi ke saath kuch ghalat na ho. Kyoun ke koi bhi normal insaan aisa nae kare ga.

Naina ji: Got scared a lot. She told to Pratigya: tumhen koi zaroorat nae hai Arushi ki fikar karne ki. Hum hain aur hum uska poora khayal rakh len ge.

Her words stroke her like needles. Pratigya got confused at her mother's behavior. But then she ignored everything and again concentrated on her work.
Arushi was in her room. Pratigya's mobile phone rang. It was again of Krishna's. He wanted to ask that why did Pratigya cut his phone in a hurry. Arushi called Pratigya once but she didn't hear Arushi's voice so she picked Pratigya's phone.
She said hello
Krishna: umm?.kon? Arushi?
Arushi: haan main hun? Tum kon ho?
Krishna: wo main Krishna baat kar raha hun.
Arushi: A............( she thought to herslef then, ab to meri inse shaadi hone waali hai phir ye formality ka ap ap kar ke baat kyoun karun) Tum?
Krishna was confused at her reaction. He said: haan, Pratigya hai?

Now Arushi was not a girl like Pratigya. She would burst out at anyone if a single thing goes against her without thinking whom she is talking to.

Arushi said: Kyoun? Tum ne unse kyoun baat karni hai? Mujh se nahi baat kar sakte?

Krishna got angry at her behavior.
He said: main ne usse kyoun baat karni hai matlab? Wo hain kahan?
Arushi: kyoun mujh se baat karke bore ho rahe ho?

Krishna was hardly controlling himself as he was very angry at her behavior infact anyone else would have been angry if someone for no reason stops to talk to someone and ask to talk to her. But he knew the manners to talk to someone at phone.

He said: Ap please mujhse Pratigya ki baat karwa den.
Arushi: jao nae karwati baat. Karlo jo karna hai. Saying this she cut the phone.

Krishna was very angry at her behavior. He thought of trying later at a time so that at least Pratigya picks up the phone.

Then he thought ke is larki ko kisi se bhi baat karni ki tameez hi nae hai. Kisi se bhi itni badtameezi se baat kaise kar sakti hai. Pratigya jaisi bahen ke hote hue bhi aisi?

But then he ignored all those thoughts and got up to sprinkle some water on his face. He was feeling tired because of the last night's party. ...........................................................................

Naina ji went to Shyam ji and said: Humen lagta hai Pratigya ko shak ho gaya hai.

Shyam: kya??

Naina: haan. Usse shak hogaya hai ke arushi ke saath kuch garbar hai. Ap to jaante hi hain Pratigya ko. Koi baat ki Halki si bhanak lag jaye to uss baat ki jab tak tha ( deep) tak nae pohanchti uss baat ka peecha nae chorti.

Shyam: Kya? Ye ap kya kah rahi hain Naina ji?

Then he took Naina ji to the room and locked the door. Then he came towards her and said: Naina ji Ap bhi jaanti hain aur main bhi Ke pratigya ko jab tak poori baat nae pata lage gi wo iss bat ka peecha nae chore gi. Humen lagta hai ke Ap ko Store room ki cheezen hata ke jala deni chahiye kyoun ke ap Pratigya ko bht achi tarhan se jaanti hain.

They talked about this and Naina ji agreed. But??.

Shyam ji closed the door, but he forgot to close the window. The window which faces the drawing room was opened and luckily Pratigya heard their conversation. She didn't knew what they were talking about because she didn't heard their Drawing room conversation. She only heard their room conversation. She didn't knew they were talking about arushi. But she knew that they were talking about something very serious and which they are trying to hide from her. Somewhere deep inside her mind she was getting the signal that they were talking about Arushi and so she decided to follow Naina ji to the store room and know what actually is happening.

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Krishna was laying down on his Bed. He was feeling tired. He kept his eyes closed. Then suddenly an uncanny thought stroke his mind. He got up from his bed and headed towards the terrace of his house. He opened the door of the terrace and stepped outside. Calm and cold wind was blewing. It was very quiet everywhere. He walked towards the railing and placed his head over it facing his righside. He closed his eyes. He was trying to feel comfortable. He didn't know what is disturbing him so but he knew how to calm down his feelings. The voice of the wind seemed to be sweet to him. His hairs moving Leftwards. The cold wind was passing through his face. He went deep inside his thoughts and got completely detached from the cruel world. He has gone in the world of his sweet thoughts. He had never felt so relaxed. His loneliness gave him sweet relaxation. Disturbing his thoughts, a slight drop of water fell on his cheek. He opened his eyes. It was drizziling. The wheather had never been so beautiful. Even if it was, it couldn't be compared to the one that day. May be even if it was not, But for Krishna it was, His feelings were saying some sweet quotes to him. He was feeling really happy.

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On one hand Krishna's life was going so calmly and on the other hand, Heavy storm had stroke Pratigya's life.

As she heard Naina ji was going to the store she decided to follow her. It was 1:30 at night. Pratigya knew that Naina ji would go to the store room at this time because everyone else was asleep or may be her daughters were asleep. But pratigya was not. Naina ji came to check once whether they were asleep or not and pratigya pretended in front of her that she was asleep. When naina ji left the room, pratigya slowly got up to follow her. She followed her till the store room quietly. Naina ji opened the door and went inside. Pratigya stayed outside was peeping inside. She saw Naina ji taking out some files which were completely covered with dust. Then she took out some X-ray reports and kept them with the files. Then she took 2 thick diaries and she took one big frame. Then she took all the collection out. Pratigya saw this all and when naina ji was about to come out she ran towards her room so that she couldn't see her. She looked through her room window. She saw naina ji going outside. She again followed her and peeped through the main door. She that Naina ji was throwing all what she collecting in a street dustbin. Pratigya went to her room and naina ji came and slept. Pratigya wanted to see what actually was in that files and all what Naina ji collected. She decided to take those files and other things tomorrow morning and see what actually was there inside.

............................................................... so it was chap 11. hope u like it. if yes then do click the like button
Edited by Kriar121 - 15 years ago
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Wow!!This was a very intriguing chp.BTW does Arushi have any sought of mental disorder??? 😕

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