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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: dkmystery


aishwarya = aish
this is how we react when some1 'aish karo' 😉

ohh that aish!!! Aishwaria wali aish!!😛yea ryt wo to abhisekh ki ho chuki hai!!!😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Kriar121

ohh that aish!!! Aishwaria wali aish!!😛yea ryt wo to abhisekh ki ho chuki hai!!!😆😉


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Posted: 15 years ago
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wahhhh! kriar! tussi cha gaye beta ... par lob triangle??? plz plz plzz isski ending happy hi karwaana .... !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_kriya

wahhhh! kriar! tussi cha gaye beta ... par lob triangle??? plz plz plzz isski ending happy hi karwaana .... !!

ummmm don't worry!! its ending will be happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice chp.So is it going to be a love triangle???
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Nice chp.So is it going to be a love triangle???

no the story is totally change from what you all are thinking! its not going to be a love triangle!!
dheeraj rakho dheeraj! your doubts will be cleared in chapter 5! so wait for it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
nice part...plz continue asap waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
nice chapter, im glad krishna took pratigya home safe and sound. looks like one of the sister's hearts will be broken.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Oh No! Aarushi!! Cant Wait Whats Gnna Happen!
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Chapter-5

Krishna was about to leave pratigya's house. He opened the door and was leaving when pratigya called him Krishna! Rukiye!. Krishna turned back and asked pratigya what happened. Pratigya:Krishna ap ko to humne aik baar thanks bhi nae kaha apne humaari jaan bachai hai. Thanks a lot. Krishna:thanks ki koi zaroorat nae hai. Friends main to thank you ya sorry word ki meaning nae hoti hai. Pratigya:Friends? Krishna raised his hand and asked her will you be my friend! Pratigya:of course I will. Pratigya: hum se milte rehna. Krishna nodded and left for his house.

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Krishna entered the gate of his house shouting: dad!! M back!!! Where r u ! dad!!!. Raj varma came out of his room to see him. He said: are Krishna? Tum to humesha bata ke ate ho phir aj bin bataye kaise agae? Krishna: wo bht lambi story hai! I'll tell you later waise mom kahan hain?Mom yahan hain! Seeta said.Are mom!Seeta: tum kaise bina batae?Are choren na, Krishna said.. Raj asked him to come in with him in his room. Then he made him sit on the sofa and asked for what happened. Krishna told him everything why he was in India. His father felt a little proud of him that he saved a poor girl. Krishna went upstairs into his room to get fresh. He was very tired and decided to have a nap. While he was sleeping he saw a dream.

What he saw was:

He (Krishna) was lying on the bed having a very peaceful and comfortable sleep. But then after few seconds he hears a voice of breaking glass. He gets up to see what has happened and what he see is that a girl in white anarkali and pink duppatta on it is coming towards him with a sharp knife in her hands. She comes upto him and warns him that: agar tum mujh se pyaar nae karte to main tumhen maar dalun gi. Bolo haan ke tum mujh se pyaar karte ho. Bolo haan bolo bolo bolo! When suddenly he gets up. the face of the girl which he saw in his dream was very similar to that of pratigya's. actually it was pratigya. Same dress, same voice, same face.. He was very confused with what he saw. He got up and went downstairs and then out of the house. He started his car and then drove away towards pratigya's house. Pratigya on the other side was asleep. The bell rang. Naina ji opened the door and was shocked to see Krishna standing over there. She asks him: beta kya hua?

Krishna: wo darasal agar ap ko koi aitaraaz na ho to pratigya se main ne baat karni hai kya app use thori dair ke liye mere saath bhej din gi.

Kya hua naina ji, kon hai? Shyam ji asked while coming towards the door. Are tum Krishna! Krishna repeats again to shyam ji that he wants to take pratigya out with him for a while to talk with her.

Shyam ji : lekin kahan? Krishna: yaheen paas wale park main

Naina ji: lekin beta wo to abhi soo rae hai.

Krishna: bohat zaroori baat hai bula den na plzz use. Ap fikar mat Karen main pratigya ka pura khayal rakhun gi bus 5 mint main hi usse le aun ga waapis.

Naina ji: agrees and calls pratigya. Pratigya gets ready and goes with Krishna. Krishna ask her to sit In his car and takes her to the nearby park.

They both sat on an empty bench. Krishna tells her everything about what he saw in his dream. Pratigya was also shocked to hear what all he said.

She says: Krishna ap tension kyoun le rae hain? Wo to sirf aik khwab tha na! But pratigya somewhere deep inside her heart was having a slight feeling of love for him. On the other hand, one of the person among the group of the smugglers sees pratigya sitting there on a bench. He calls His leader and tells him about pratigya. The leader was very sure on the guy who saw pratigya. Coz he haven't made a single mistake in every work given to him so the leader asks him to kidnap her and bring her here.

Krishna was busy talking to Pratigya when he says to her , Pratigya mujhe bht pyaas lag rahi hai. Main paas wali dukaan se paani leke ata hun. Pratigya says: theek hai lekin jaldi ana.

Krishna left to take the water. On the other hand that man come towards pratigya and tries to close her mouth with his hand and drag her towards his car but fortunately Krishna sees him, Krishna leaves the bottle of water there and run towards pratigya. He knew that the man was very strong. Stronger even than Krishna. So Krishna picks up a heavy stone and beat it hard on his head. He fells down on the ground. But Krishna knew that his unconsciousness was temporary and so he catches pratigya's hand and made her run very fast. He made her sit in his car and headed towards Pratigya's house.

On the other hand, Arushi started vomiting. Pratigya's family was forced to take her to the hospital. And so no one was there at her home. Krishna asks her to go and enter her house as fast as possible coz he must be following them now. Pratigya gets off the car and rings the bell but no one opens the door. Krishna sees the man coming towards pratigya from the other side. Krishna runs towards her and made her sit in his car. Krishna was forced to take her to his house. Coz no one was present at pratigya's home. He reaches at his house with pratigya. Pratigya comes in with him. Seeta who comes out of the kitchen asks Krishna who this girl is? Krishna tells him that she was in trouble and no one was present at her house so he brought her to his house. Seeta says: tum bhi pagal ho Krishna kisi ko bhi apne ghar utha ke le ate ho? Ye pata nae ab kis namuni ko road se utha ke le ae ho. Tumhen pata nae hai ye ghareeb log bare...... Krishna cuts her in between by saying Ap ko jab kisi ke bare main nae pata hota hai to mat bola Karen plzz.

Krishna takes pratigya to his room. Pratigya was very embarrassed for being at his home. She was continuously crying at the kidnapping of hers and Krishna's mother's behavior. Krishna tries to console her a lot but that all was in vain. Pratigya says to Krishna : humen ap ne ghar chordo Krishna please. Humen yahan nae rahna. Pratigya was continuously crying. Krishna says: tum fikar mat karo aur mom ki baton ka bura mat mano. Wo aise hi hain. Tum hen yahann pe koi kuch nae kahe ga, main tumhaare ghar pe call karta hun agar wo log agaye honge to main tumhen ghar chor ata hun. He called at her house but there was no reply to his call. They were still not at home. Pratigya was feeling very depressed. It was 9 at night. Pratigya was feeling very tired and sleepy. Krishna saw her red eyes as she was feeling sleepy. He asked her to rest on his bed. Krishna himself went and sat on the sofa in his room. He was still thinking about the dream he saw and on the other hand Pratigya was asleep. It was morning. Both of them were sleeping. Pratigya on the bed and Krishna was on the sofa when suddenly Krishna's mobile phone rang. It was from shyam ji's house. Krishna told him that Pratigya is safe with him and he'll be bringing her now at her house. He asked pratigya to get up. Krishna: main tumhen ghar chor ke ajata hun tum fresh hojao. Pratigya got up and got fresh and went with Krishna back to her house. Krishna didn't will to go in with her and so he left pratigya and went without coming in with her. Her family was very pleased with Krishna as he took perfect care of pratigya. They trusted on him a lot now. Naina ji asked pratigya to go and rest for a while coz she must be tired but pratigya told her that she slept at krishna's house. Naina ji : acha theek hai tum apne kamre main jao main tumhaare liye chaye leke ati hun. When pratigya entered her room, she saw Arushi staring at something, pratigya came and stood beside her, she saw Arushi was staring at a couple sitting on a bench. Pratigya asked her : arushi kya hua? Itne gor se kyounn dekh rae ho unhen? Arushi went and sat on her bed and said : wo didi kuch nae bus... pratigya: kuch nae matlab? Kaheen tumhen ......arushi cut her in between and said are didi ap bhi na. pratigya came towards her and said: koi tumhen samjhe ya na samjhe, tumhaari didi hun main, achi tarhan se jaanti ho tumhen batao kya baat hai. Arushi looked at her once and then got up and hugged her tightly and said: Didi kaise bataun....a........ap sahi samajh rahi hain....humen pyaar hogaya hai.

Pratigya was shocked and surprise too to hear this. She said: sachi? Kon hai wo bhai? Arushi: didi wo main ap ko nae bataun gi. Wo main ap ko baad main bataun gi. She said this and left. But pratigya after hearing about Arushi is in love, she started thinking about her love. Her love for Krishna was increasing day by day. She couldn't tell it to anyone. She said to herself: humen kya ho raha hai ye sab aur hum.........pata nae kya ho raha hai humaare saath. Days passed away and pratigya and Krishna started meeting almost everyday. Pratigya's love for Krishna also increased day by day. And once she decided to reveal her thots about Krishna to him and called him in a park. On the other hand Arushi was totally unaware of Pratigya's love. It was 5 at evening. The time Pratigya fixed to meet Krishna. She was waiting sitting on a bench. Krishna arrived there. A little late but still pratigya didn't mind.

Krishna: kaisi ho tum?

Pratigya: hum theekhain.

Krishna: aur baki ghar main sab kaise hain?

Pratigya: hmm..sab theek hain. A..ab.......

Krishna: waise tumne aj humen achanak kyoun bulaya?

Pratigya: A ab .......w....w.o....hum.......she couldn't tell him, she was feeling very embarrassed. She closed her eyes tightly and without thinking any thing she said : Krishna hum tumse behat pyaar karte hainn aur tumhaare bina nae rah sakte. After saying this she slowly opened her eyes.

Krishna was very shocked he suddenly got up from the bench and said: ye kya keh rae ho tum?

Pratigya hum sach kah rahe hain!!!hum tumhaare baghair nae rahsakte

Krishna: ye kya aur kyoun kah rahi ho tum. Hum ne tumhen sirf apna dost mana hai aur kuch nae. Tum mere liye sirf meri achi dost ho. Aur kuch nae. Aur waise bhi main kal waapis England jaa raha hun. Tumhen main ne ye batana tha.

Pratigya's heart shattered into thousand pieces after hearing what Krishna said. She was sitting on the bench like a lifeless person.

Krishna: tum ghar chalo aur haan mere bare main aisa khayal mat rakho Kyoun ke main tumse pyaar nae karta sirf tumhen apna acha dost manta hun. Pratigya silently got up and went with him to her house.

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so this is chapter 5. if u like it plzz tell me or click the like button
Edited by Kriar121 - 15 years ago

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