That moment-fanfic Climax

Rohit is waiting in the park. Akshara comes there.
R:I was waiting for you for so long.
A:I'm sorry Rohit.I did'nt get a bus soon.
R:There is a happy news.I told mom about you.She is coming to your house to talk to your father.
Akshara is excited:Really?
Rohit smiles:Yes.I this happy occasion let us have an icecream.
They both go to an icecream parlour and have icecream.

Rohit's mother Jigyasa goes to Akshara's house.Akshara,Bani and Shamoli come to the front room.
J:My husband Aditya is out of station.That is why I came alone.
Jigyasa goes near Akshara:You are Akshara.Right?
She is surprised:You recognised me?
J:Yes,because you are the beautiful among the three sisters.I knew that my son will choose a middle class girl only if she is that pretty.
Everyone becomes dull.She talks to their father Keshu Singhania:
I don't have any problem with this relation.We can conduct their wedding.
He smiles.
J:But only on one condition.Bani ans Shamoli must get married to my brothers Jai and Kunal.
They are shocked.
K:But they are quite?
J:Hey?I know that they are too old for your daughters.But if you don't accept this demand,we will go for another girl.Rohit will get a richer girl.
All the three girls are upset.They all go inside and weep.
J:It's upto you.
Keshu is numb.

cant wait to see what will happen next!!!!!!!!!!!

~Sanju

Can't wait to see what Jigjasa will do.😆

Continue soon.

P.S. could you please put the full names of the characters instead of a letter. Thanks.😎

Akshara rings up Rohit:What is this Rohit?Your mom's demands are too much.
R:What happened?I can't understand anything.
She tells him everything.He is shocked.

Rohit talks to Jigyasa:What demand did you put mom?
J:Oh!So Akshara told you that?Yes…it is my demand.Jai and Kunal did not think of marriage when they were young.They were struggling hard for success.They were thinking of giving happiness to me and Veena.But they never thought about themselves.Now Kunal is ready for marriage.But Jai is not.But Kunal said he will marry only if Jai finds a girl.For Kunal Jai agreed for marriage.They are in their middle age.So its very difficult to find girls for them.So I thought…
R:This is too much.

Shamoli looks at the mirror.
She tells herself:People have always told me that I'm attractive.I was so beauty conscious.I always dreamt of my Prince Charming.But my beauty is not enough to get a young handsome boy?

Akshara is sad.She is in her bedroom:Dad must be very sad..i have to talk to him.
Akshara goes near Keshu:What are you thinking dad?
K:I'm confused.I don't know what to do.
A:Don't be confused.Let us drop this proposal.
K:What?But your love..?
A:I don't want my sisters to sacrifice their dreams for me to have a good married life.
Bani comes:I'm not sacrificing anything.But I'm willing to marry Rohit's uncle.
A:Bani!
B:I have never dreamt of a Prince.But I always wanted to love the person I marry.I will love my husband.God has found a man for me.Whoever it is..i have no problem.
Shamoli overhears it:Then why should I stand against your marriage?I have no problem.Because of us,you should not lose your love Akshara.
Akshara cries.
B:Don't think that we are sacrificing our happiness for you.We are happy to do this for our sister.
Akshara hugs her sisters.Keshu wipes his tears.

Akshara rings up Rohit:My sisters are ready for the marriage.They have no problems at all.
Rohit can't belive it:Are you sure?
A:Yes…it was a surprise for me also.

Rohit goes to Jigyasa:Mom,Akshara's sisters are ready for the marriage.
J:Wow!That's a good news.

Jigyasa goes to Kunal and Jai:I have found girls for you both.
K:Really?Who?
J:For you…Shamoli.A very attractive girl.
He smiles.
J:For Jai,I have chosen Bani.Rohit is also getting married.
K:Really?Who?
J:Akshara.Infact Akshara,Shamoli and Bani are sisters.
K:That's good.
J:Don't you guys want to see them?
K:Yes…
Jai:But I don't want to.
J:Why?
Jai:I told you..i'm not interested in marriage.I'm marrying only for Kunal.
He leaves the room.

Rohit meets Akshara.
A:Why did you call me?
R:What?Only if there is any reason I can call you?
She smiles:Yes…
R:What?I called you simply to see you.
A:Now onwards we should not see each other.We should wait till the wedding.
R:What?That is too much.Will you be able to live without seeing me?
She smiles:Why not?
R:Ok…so we will meet during the wedding.Bye..
A:You are going?Only on the wedding day we will be able to see each other?Befoe that no chance?
Rohit laughs:So you want to see me always.Then why did you show so much attitude to me now?
A:Simply..for a joke.But I did'nt know that you will take it serious.
R:Who told you that I took it seriously?I was making fun of you.
Akshara smiles.

Will Jai and Bani be getting married.😍

Continue soon, wnat to see what Jai will do.😉

😃 Feels good to be free - Lunna

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Kunal is in his guest house.He is going through some files.He is fed up.He takes drinks.
Shamoli is coming back from the office at night.It is raining heavily.She is drenched.
S:Oh,what to do?I'm not getting any auto also..
She sees Kunal's guest house and goes there.She knocks at the door.
Kunal opens the door.
K:Who are you?
S:Its raining heavily.I did'nt get any auto or taxi.Can I wait here till it stops raining?
K:Ok,come inside.
She gets inside.He gives her a coat.She takes it and covers herself.He gives her a towel:Dry your hair.
S:Thanks.

He goes to the front room and drinks.After some time Shamoli goes there:Still its raining.I don't think it will stop raining.So I will go now.Otherwise the whole night I will have to be here.
K:How will you go?
S:By walk..
K:Don't go by walk.You are drenched.You are shivering also.You will catch fever.So I will drop you to your house.Give me the address.
S:Thanks for everything.

Kunal and Shamoli are in the car.Heavy rain.He finds it difficult to drive.
S:You are having so much of trouble because of me.
K:Nothing like that.
They reach the house.
S:Thanks a lot.
K:Welcome…bye…
His car moves.
Akshara sees it through the window and smiles.She goes near Shamoli:Started dating your fianc?
S:What are you saying?
A:Who was with you in the car?
S:He just gave me a lift.I don't know who he is.
A:Shamoli,he is Kunal.Your fiance..
She is shocked:What?
A:Yes.

Jigyasa gives Kunal a photo:This is Shamoli.
He is surprised to see the photo:This is Shamoli?I can't believe this.
J:Yes.Why?
K:I met her today.But I did'nt realise that its her.
J:Really?Did you like her?
Kunal thinks about his moments with Shamoli and smiles.
J:From your smile I can understand that you have fallen for her.
He smiles.

Rohit-Akshara,Jai-Bani and Kunal-Shamoli's wedding …
Rohit and Akshara are happy.Jai stares at Bani before tying the mangalsuthra.She gets nervous.His face seems to be rough with anger while tying the mangalsuthra.Her tears fall down.
Kunal smiles at Shamoli while tying the mangalsuthra.She is not at all cheerful.

They all enter their house.
Somebody tells Jigyasa:Your daughter in law Akshara is very beautiful.Your son is so lucky to have her.
J:Actually Akshara is lucky to get my son.Akshara is from a background where she can't dream of entering a rich family like our's.
Akshara who hears this feels sad.A middle aged lady and a young girl go near her.
The middleaged lady:Don't get upset Akshara.Be happy that you are with a good boy like Rohit.
Akshara smiles.
She:I'm Jigyasa's sister Veena.This is my daughter Mauli.
She smiles.

Their reception party…..

Rohit and Akshara are dancing.
Kunal goes near Shamoli:Shall we dance?
S:I'm sorry….
Kunal's face is dull:Why?
S:Ah!Ok…
He smiles.He holds her hand and dances.She feels uncomfortable.

Jai goes near Bani.She smiles.
J:I came here to tell you that I'm not interested to dance with you.
She feels sad.
Veena goes neat them:Jai..dance with Bani.
J:No…
V:I know that you are shy because of your age.But don't be shy.You are a newly wed guy.Dance…
J:Veena..
V:No excuse.
He dances with Bani.He is really irritated.

Akshara enters the bedroom.Rohit pours red petals on her.She is surprised:What is this Rohit?
R:Flower rain.I wanted to surprise you with flowers in a different way which no one ekse has done.
She smiles.She throws some petals on his face.He smiles.

great parts...

so they are married...and jai is not at all interested in bani...poor bani :(

sorry i wasnt active, so wasnt able to comment...

but you will always see my comment here :)

plz cont.soon...