Short write-up.. A's reaction

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Posted: 15 years ago
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He was walking the corridors of Sanjeevani.. She was married.. He just couldn't believe what Dr Sid had told him.. ! His Riddhima was no more his.. ? All those memories rushed into his mind.. And filled his heart with an agony that was hard to describe.. His eyes filled with tears and his lips quivered.. He just shut his eyes and opened them again..
Is this a dream? If it is than its the worst dream he's ever had, he thought.. Worse than those nightmares he'd had in the asylum where he could see nothing but darkness.. And sometimes too much light.. He recollected those times when he felt like a trapped soul with machines all around him.. When he wanted to go back to his happy life but all he could recollect was blurred memories..
And the shock therapy he was tortured with daily.. When he wanted to scream but his mouth was gagged..
This dream was worse..
He passed the Fire Escape.. It was 'their' fire escape.. he peeped in through the door that was slightly ajar.. He knew he shouldn't enter..
It would be wrong to enter now..
It was too late to enter now..
He shouldn't..
He just shouldn't..
But one last time?
Just one last time?
He slowly entered.. He heard his own footsteps.. It felt so lonely and dreadful in here.. Without her.. And now it would always be lonely.. and dreadful.. His knees felt too weak.. He was tired.. Suddenly too tired to even stand.. And so he just sat..
Sitting there on the steps he stared into the white wall in front of him.. Staring blankly for hours.. And the realisation hit him..
Hopelessly, he put his head in between his hand..
And began to cry..
He crumpled his hair.. Wanting to pull them out of his skull..
And cried..
He bit his knuckle hard..
But this was not a dream..
So he just cried..
And no one was around to lend a shoulder..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Feel like crying.as i cant see him cry😭😭😭😭😭😭 u wrote his feelings beautifully
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum dhwani it made me cry
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i dont want arman to cry!
this made me cry!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhw@ni

He was walking the corridors of Sanjeevani.. She was married.. He just couldn't believe what Dr Sid had told him.. ! His Riddhima was no more his.. ? All those memories rushed into his mind.. And filled his heart with an agony that was hard to describe.. His eyes filled with tears and his lips quivered.. He just shut his eyes and opened them again.. Is thisa dream? If it is than its theworst dream he's ever had, he thought.. Worse than those nightmares he'd had in the asylum where he could see nothing but darkness.. And sometimes too much light.. He recollected those times when he felt like a trapped soul with machines all around him.. When he wanted to go back to his happy life but all he could recollect was blurred memories.. And the shock therapy he was tortured with daily.. When he wanted to scream but his mouth was gagged.. This dream was worse..

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<div>He passed the Fire Escape.. It was 'their' fire escape.. he peeped in through the door that was slightly ajar.. He knew he shouldn't enter.. It would be wrong to enter now.. It was too late to enter now.. He shouldn't.. He just shouldn't.. But one last time? Just one last time?

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He slowly entered.. He heard his own footsteps.. It felt so lonely and dreadful in here.. Without her.. And now it would always be lonely.. and dreadful.. His knees felt too weak.. He was tired.. Suddenly too tired to even stand.. And so he just sat..


Sitting there on the steps he stared into the white wall in front of him.. Staring blankly for hours.. And the realisation hit him..


Hopelessly, he put his head in between his hand..


And began to cry..


He crumpled his hair.. Wanting to pull them out of his skull..


And cried..


He bit his knuckle hard..


But this was not a dream..


So he just cried..


<strong>And no one was around to lend a shoulder..


and then yuvi n naina saw his pain n decided that AR love is stronger than compromised relationship of sidma
Edited by termi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plz cvs don't do this to our Armaan.We can't bear this.His tears rip our hearts too...............😭
We had already suffered a lot. plz not again,no more heart breaks.........I know this track is coming ...but still want Ridzi should be there by his side😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
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baut hogay yaar. rona dhona...... u actually pen down wat he would feel when he comes to know about riddhima's marriage...
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😭😭
i cant c him crying like that...... tab jab uski saath koi nahi hoo...



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: janu1610

plz cvs don't do this to our Armaan.We can't bear this.His tears rip our hearts too...............😭
We had already suffered a lot. plz not again,no more heart breaks.........I know this track is coming ...but still want Ridzi should be there by his side😕


same here
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Posted: 15 years ago
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armaan finding out the worst nightmares of his life,that he lost riddhima,coming true,..will be heartbreaking for him and all of us who love him..reading your description,brought tears to my eyes..i can't see him cry...but i think karan is gonna make the scenes memorable and wud be one of the best in dmg till date..but veryyyy sad..😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great job👏...nice depiction of Armaan's feelings, and his helplessness!!! There isn't much else he can do...Riddhima is going to have to take the initiative to bring Armaan back in her life.....lets see what happens.

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