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Chahat Jain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

o god..please dont write such sad endings...AR cant end up like this..they have to be together....AR are inseparable....Sid or for that matter anybody else dont fit in their love story..they are meant to be together......AR ALL THE WAY....

Edited by chahat_j - 15 years ago

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BB8Rocks

@BB8Rocks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Dhw@ni
He was walking the corridors of Sanjeevani.. She was married.. He just couldn't believe what Dr Sid had told him.. ! His Riddhima was no more his.. ? All those memories rushed into his mind.. And filled his heart with an agony that was hard to describe.. His eyes filled with tears and his lips quivered.. He just shut his eyes and opened them again.. Is this a dream? If it is than its the worst dream he's ever had, he thought.. Worse than those nightmares he'd had in the asylum where he could see nothing but darkness.. And sometimes too much light.. He recollected those times when he felt like a trapped soul with machines all around him.. When he wanted to go back to his happy life but all he could recollect was blurred memories.. And the shock therapy he was tortured with daily.. When he wanted to scream but his mouth was gagged.. This dream was worse..

He passed the Fire Escape.. It was 'their' fire escape.. he peeped in through the door that was slightly ajar.. He knew he shouldn't enter.. It would be wrong to enter now.. It was too late to enter now.. He shouldn't.. He just shouldn't.. But one last time? Just one last time?

He slowly entered.. He heard his own footsteps.. It felt so lonely and dreadful in here.. Without her.. And now it would always be lonely.. and dreadful.. His knees felt too weak.. He was tired.. Suddenly too tired to even stand.. And so he just sat..

Sitting there on the steps he stared into the white wall in front of him.. Staring blankly for hours.. And the realisation hit him..

Hopelessly, he put his head in between his hand..

And began to cry..

He crumpled his hair.. Wanting to pull them out of his skull..

And cried..

He bit his knuckle hard..

But this was not a dream..

So he just cried..

And no one was around to lend a shoulder..

This is so beautifully written👏👏

Armaan is going to be in a lot of pain regardless of anything Riddhima says or does now because the fact is that she has moved on and married someone without waiting for him like he did😭

I hope though that Riddhima is the first one to break this to him and I hope he doesnt find out from someone else:(

Edited by tina786 - 15 years ago