Mayur ff love at first sight. P18:Pg47 UpdSep22nd!

hey guys i have a story for mayur its a cute romantic love story.

concept: mayank is a cool, handsome guy. girls drool over him but he is waiting for his dream girl.
he is sure that when ever his dream girl comes in front of his eyes he can notice her and for that purpose he wont even take a look at other any girl who is mad at him and his charm.
he lives in mumbai. completed his graduation in excel college two years back and now he is managing his dad's company.
nupur is a shy, caring, loving, introvert girl. studying in excel college final year .she dont know that she is beautiful and she wont even think that she is beautiful and she thinks that no guy looks at her and so she also doesnt even care to throw a look at guys who looks at her. she is afraid of her bauji but loves him a lot.
her bauji always says her that hamari khandhan ka naam roshan karna beta and kabhi aisa kaam mat karna jiski vajhe se bhushan parivaar ko ya apni papa ko sharminda hone pade. and he also keeps telling her that there should not be any love marraige in our family there should be only arranged. thats the reason nupur never looks at any guy and wont even give a chance to any guy to look at her.

and when first time mayank sees nupur he believed that she is his dream girl and he is truly deeply madly in love with nupur.

what will be the destiny of these two opposite poles. will they attract or repel and go by their ways
of course they will attract or else there wont be any ff.



Guys please do comment how do u feel it is . if u like it and if u press like tab and if u comment and want me to continue then only i will continue or else sorry for wasting ur time
with love
neetu.

part1-pg2. part11-pg28.
part2-pg4. part12-pg31.
part3-pg6. part13-pg33.
part4-pg9. part14-pg35.
part5-pg11. part15-pg38.
part6-pg13. part16-pg42.
part7-pg16. part17-pg45.
part8-pg19. part18-pg47
part9-pg22.
part10-pg24.

awesome one!

i am eager to see how the story unfolds.....

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and i loved the character sketch!

actually i like nupur a lot.........

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Hi
lovely concept
u should continue it
looking froward for ur 1st part
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nice one!

Hey guys thanks for ur support and sweet comments''..

I am very happy that u liked my concept and please do comment even after this. Ok no more bakwass. Here I go''''

Character sketch:

Mayank : cool, handsome, dedicated towards his work. Girls drool over him but he doesn't care. Studied in excel college, completed his graduation two years ago and at present he is helping his dad in his business. All he wants is to meet his dream girl. And he will get attracted to nupur and decides to marry her and only her. At any cost he is not going to lose her. Cousin of samrat.

Nupur: beautiful, studious, shy, introvert. She is very afraid of her dad and also loves him a lot. And she won't do any thing or take any decision regarding her life without consulting her dad and if he says not to do that particular thing she will definitely obey him. Loves her Cousin Gunjan a lot.

Gunjan: she is an ordinary girl just like others . No particular specifications (she is not an introvert like as she is in the show). Loves her cousin nupur a lot. And soon she is going to marry samrat. It's an arranged marriage.

Samrat : cool, handsome guy and works in sharma textiles which is managing by mayank's father. He obeys his father words and going to marry gunjan soon.

Shilpa sharma: mother of mayank and chachi of samrat. Loves his son a lot and even treats samrat as her own son. She wants her bahu to be sunder, susheel and beautiful.

Sashi bhushan: dad of nupur. Loves his daughter a lot and also loves gunjan and treats her as his own daughter. He wants his both daughters to get married to a nice family. But the marriage should be arranged one not love marriage. He is very much particular about this matter. And he keeps telling gunjan and nupur not to spoil the family reputation. (he indirectly means that 'no love marriages only arrranged')

Part-1

In sharma's mansion:

mm: beta, tujhe yaad hai na agle mahine tumhare bhai ka shaadi hai . dekh tu kisi bhi kimat par shaadi attend karega. Nahi tho mein aur samrat milkar tumhari shaadi attend nahi karenge. Yaad rakhna''''

m: mom''. Aap itni pareshaan kyu ho rahe hai . mein aaonga jaroor aaonga. Ok?

Aur vaise bhi mein itni bhi stupid nahi hoon ki mein apni hi bhai ke shaadi miss karoo'..

mm: kya karu beta tumhare upar mujhe bilkul vishwass nahi hai. Pehle padai ka bahana banathe the aur ab business ka.. isiliye warn kar rahi hoon pehle hi''..

m: ok mom mein is baar miss nahi karoonga and mujhe jaldi breakfast lagayiye mujhe jaana hai.

mm: kyu itni jaldi kyu jana hai.(while giggling) tujhe tumhari dream girl mil gayi kya?

m: nahi maa agar mil gayi tho pehle aap hi ko bathaonga' aur ab aap mujhe khana lagayiye''

mm: beta dekh' mujhe tumhari dream girl se koi matlab nahi hai . magar vo jaisi bhi ho sundar ho susheel ho aur ha vo jaroor hindu hona chahiye (sorry guys for mentioning Hindu particularly but there will be a fun track because of this condition. I hope u don't mind) aur haaaaa'' vo aaj kal ki ladkiyon ki tarah chote chote kapde nahi pehni chahiye and clubs, parties, drinking ye sab nahi karna chahiye. Thike?.........

m: mom aapke hone wali bahu ke qualities ke list itni badi hai tho aapko is Mumbai me ladki hi nahi milegi aur mujhe kisi 40's ki aunty se shaadi karna padega'.

mm: dekh beta agar mere list me se ek bhi quality miss hua na me tumhe ghar se dakhe mar kar bahar nikal doongi aur agar tujhe doodne ki capacity nahi hein tho mujhe bolo mein dundh ka laongi apni bahu ko.

m: ok my mother India ab aapki permission ho tho mein office jaa saktha hu?....

mm: tikhe tikhe itna makhan lagane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Ja sakthe ho'.

Pata nahi tumhare is dream girl ke chakkar mein kab apne bete ko dulhe ke roop me dekhkungi'.. samrat ko dekho tumse 3 mahina chota hai phir bhi apne mama papa se dekhi hui rishtha manzoor kiya hai

m: maaaaaaa sirf 3 mahina chota hai 3 saal nahi aur ha dekhna aapko aapki bahu jald se jald mil jayeegi'.. mujhe lagre hai ki vo mere aas paas hi hai pata nahi kaha hai '''''' tikhe ab mein ja raha hoon byeeeeeeee'''''..

Bhushan mansion:

g: dii aaj mein bohot hoo rahi hoon shopping karne chale?... vaise bhi shaadi ke liye shopping tho karni hai na '''. Chale?....

n: meri pyaari behna'.. tumhe bohat jaldi ho rahi hai shaadi karne ki''. Meine tho suna hai ki jaise hi shaadi ki date paas mein aate hi log bohot pareshaan aur maa baap ko chodne ke liye bohot dukhi hote hai''' especially arranged marriages mein' magar yaha tho mamala ulta hai'.. chakkar kya hai?............ don't worry tum mujhe bata sakthi ho aakhir mein tumhari best friend aur pyaari behen jo ho''.

g: heloooo koi chakkar vakkar nahi hai'.. aur mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai ghar chod kar jaane ki '' mein tho bas baite baite bore ho rahi thi '''' aur ha miss. Nupur bhushan tumhe tho mujhe thanku bolna chahiye shaadi ke liye haan karne ke liye nahi tho pehle teri band bajh jaa thi samjhi'''.. aur tu tho aapni mba thak shaadi naa karne ka pratigya jo le chukhi ho apne aap se'''.kyu? ' sahi kaha na''..

n: are are itna gussa kyu ho rahi hai'.. mein tho bas apni behen ko chida rahi thi kyu mujhe utna bhi haq nahi hai kya?.......... agar nahi hai tho bol do phir kabhi nahi karoongi'.(making a puppy face)

g: sorry di''' (smiling a bit) mein hi thoda over react ho gayi'''.. tum nahi chidaogi tho aur kaun chidaega'''. Tumhe gunjan bhushan pe pura haq hai ''.. ok

n: ok my dear behana'.. ok saying this they both share a friendly hug

g: tho chale shopping karne? Asking excitedly hoping she would accept to go out

n: nahi gunjan aaj mera mood nahi hai'''.. haaa agar tum chaho tho mein tumhe pick karne aa jaongi

g: tikhe mein tumhe force nahi karoongi''. Ha jab mein phone karoongi bina late kare jaldi aa jana''. Ok

n: ok my dear mein jaldi aa jaoongi'''

sam-mayu office:

m: hey sam what r u doing man?

S: nothing bro''.. just checking mails'.

m: checking mails or'''. Chatting with fe-mails''.(he means females)

s: shut up mayank meri shaadi teir ho gayi he'. Wo tumhe bhi pata hai'. Right.?....

m: while laughing hey chillax I was jus kidding yaar''.aur ha shaadi se baat yaad ayi' ek baat batao' tum yaha Mumbai mein ho aur gunjan bhi yahi he phir shaadi kyun us gaon mein rakha hai''.. kya naam hai''..ha marena' sorry morena''ha kyun?

s: kya batao dude'' (lazily) gunjan ki tayaji usi gaon mein rehthe hain aur vo bohut hi old types ki hai aur vo chahtha hai ki bhushan kandhan ke har ladki ka shaadi morena mein hi ho'.. ab use chodo .. kal engagement hai ''.. mere ghar mein aana zaroor'' don't be lazy and sleep at home and ya I am sure I will kill u if u do that'.. get it?..........(snapping his fingures in front of him as if he is giving a warning)

m: ok baba pehle ghar pe maa aur ab tu yaha tum log mujhe bilkul vishwaas nahi karte'' hein na?.

n: kya kare tumhare parties attend karna ka itna intrest hai jitna ki tune bachpan se lekar aaj take k bhi party nahi choda isiliye hame tumhari itni tho warning dene padthi hai''.. nahi tho maharaj mayank sharma manenge kaha''.

m: tikhe boss aaj tum jaldi chale jao mein aur benji saath hi aa jaaenge''directly to ur house'''.

In evening every body finished their work and are going back to their houses.

And here gunjan is doing shopping and is finished with it and called nupur to pick her up and nupur also started in car.

Mayank and benji came out of the office and started to go to sam's house in their respective bikes and because the ride was boring they decided to make it a race, so they were driving fast and suddenly there came a dog in between and mayank tried to save the dog by not hitting it and ended up in hurting himself''''. He was lying on the road with all blood flowing on the road and we can hear benji screaming

MAYANKKKKKKKKKK'''''''''..

Guys I know this part is quite long and even boring also''. Not quite boring' it is actually boring but what to do there are some points in this part which are important for the story to move on '''''.. and guys don't forget to comment it's the first thing u have to do after reading,,,,,,,,its just because u guys commented and pressed the like tab I have updated or else I would not have done it ''' so guys please do comment Its my sincere request''. Ok bye no more bakwaas ''''.

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