!!Bandini bani Sherni!! FINAL PARTS pg 69 & 72

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ammoos

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Epi # 9

PART 1

DM opens the album and the focus is on his face it changes when he see something. First he is surprised then doubtful, then thinking and finally determined. He closes it and comes out of the room go straight to his room and keep the album safely inside the cupboard. He come down to the hall and is worried as its very late and Santu is still not back. He is pacing and baa ask him what he is worried about, he replies nothing and come and sit on the couch.

Suraj and Santu are back and Sant ask him to go first as she doesn't want the family know that they were together. He enter first and DM sees him and ask wher is Santu. He says he doesn't know and go to his room. Sanu go up to the store room. DM senses she is back and is waiting for her. Santu enter the house after sometime. She see DM sitting there and is surprised but she ignores him and was about to eneter kitchen. DM calls stop Santudi. Santu is shocked and turns around. He ask her to come with him. Santu sense something is wrong and is worried. She follows him. He ask her to get inside the car and they reach Khodiyar maa's well. Dm comes out and toss a coin into the well and prays and again get inside the car and ask the driver to start. They reach some place and he ask her to get out. She is taken to the pool side where they had their SR. Santu is tensed.

PART 2

DM come near her and keep his hands on his waist and ask her to tell the truth. Santu is surprised and ask him what truth. He ask her to tell the whole truth that's he was hiding from him for the last 10yrs. Santu is frightened now and she doubts if he know about Arjan death. She tries hard to hide her fear and says she doesn't have anymore truth to tell and she has already told everything. She starts to leave. DM stops her by hildong her hands like he did on that D day. DM ask her if she is telling the truth then what about the evidences he got. Santu is shocked and ask him what evidence. He says hey Santudi don't try to fool me and he know that she didn't kill Arjan and was covering someone and he very well know who it is but he wanted to hear the truth from her.

PART 3

Santu is speechless and couldn't say a word. She gathers some courage and says no its not true, the truth is that she killed Arjan for her own selfish reasons and now she is back to enjoy the raaj. DM is frustrated and he pulls her to him and asks her if she thinks he is a dufford like her to take all the lies she says. He knows his Santudi more than her and he can never tolerate lie and she better tell the truth. Otherwise he will be forced to go to the police to get justice for his late son. Santu is confused whether to tell the truth or not. DM continues his blackmailing. Santu is frustrated and yells at him yes he is right and that she lied to save someone, his own dear daughter. DM just stares at her. Freezes on his face.

Edited by ammoos - 15 years ago

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tunisian

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

UMA greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat loved it soooooo much , wonder what will be DM's rection now ?

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-SilverFlames-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

Aaaaw Wow!!! Awesome!! I loved it Di!! She finally admitted it and where better than at their SR spot.. The epi was so amazing! DM blackmailing it out of Santu..👏.. Your brill!

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Soni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

Uma ji just wow, cant wait for the next part plz dont make me waitttttt👏

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Mallika113

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Uma, great job. This is the way CVs should have approached the Santu revealing truth story. Not the stupid track that they have going on now.

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ammoos

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Thank Sanju and sanrajpremika (sorry i forgot your name)..

Manel you will see it soon😉

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ammoos

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Mallika113
Uma, great job. This is the way CVs should have approached the Santu revealing truth story. Not the stupid track that they have going on now.

Thanks Malli..

Santu has to tell DM the truth..its high time...donno why the creatives are thinking the other way.

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ammoos

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Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Epi # 10

PART 1

DM is staring at Santu and she is wiping her tears and tells him the truth that it was Birwa who killed Arjan to save him and santu came there in time to see that. She only asked Birwa to keep quiet and she took the blame on her so that Birwa can have a bright future. Santu feels guilty and is not able to look at DM. He came closer and she begs him not to let the truth out or reopen the case and not to punish Birwa otherwise her whole effort will go in vain. DM gives hurt smile at her. She asks him why he is smiling. He shoos it away and ask her if she admit even now that she is the biggest dufford. Santu is confused. He ask her if there was any kind of evidence wouldn't he have look for it earlier and tried to get her out. And it was she herself who wiped the fingerprints and there was no evidence against her except for her statement. Santu says that means. DM completes, it that means there is no evidence of any kind. Santu is shocked.

PART 2

DM asks if she knows the extent of destruction her lie has made, did she see her family and did she ever think about her family. He calls her dufford. That lie was her biggest mistake, she should have confided the truth to him and he would never have let anything happen to his daughter. He asks her why she couldn't trust her husband for even once. His words were trembling and his eyes moist. He continues if she expected him to punish his daughter and let her go to jail. He again says dufford, he could have easily get her out even without involving Birwa in the case. He was both the victim and witness and what lead to Arjan's death was in defense for him. Santu lowers her eyes and looks away. Your one lie to save one life destroyed many other lives, our family is scatttered. But yes she got the punishment for her lie, but she will suffer the real punishment now, punishment for splitting the family, destroying everyone's peace and for leaving him alone. She doesn't know what loneliness is because she happily chose her but for him it was forced. Now she will bear that forceful loneliness. She will be near to him but not with him.

PART 3

DM continues now its Birwa's turn to bear the punishment, you went to jail for her and she didn't even look at you when everyone asked you to get out of the house. He regret to father a child like her and he leaves. Santu stops him and tells him that Birwa is getting her due for the crime she did. DM looks back confused. What you just heard was just the one half of the truth and the other half is even bitter. DM stares at her questioning. Santu ask him, he is going to punish her and doesn't he want to know the real truth, if he has the courage to bear that too. DM shakes her to tell the truth and is worried. Santu ask him to come with her, they get into the car and is heading towards Surat. There was thick silence all the way. DM was confused what the truth could be and Santu couldn't even look at him. By the time they reach the asylum it was already dawn. DM sees the board and is tensed and they enter Birwa's room and DM is confused to see the girl lying there. He looks at Santu asking who she is. Santu tells him with tears in her eyes, she is Birwa Dharamraj Mahiavanshi. DM is freezed and steps back.

Edited by ammoos - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#149

Paas par saath nahin dhand.. 😭 Brilliant Uma.. This is just awesome..I love how the story is progressing but DM is getting jatka after jatka..😭 Itna maat tarpao..

Edited by SanRajDeewani - 15 years ago