!!Bandini bani Sherni!! FINAL PARTS pg 69 & 72 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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smart girl...letting us simmer...killing us slow with anticipations ...😵
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow, Uma, I am stunned. You have such wonderful creativity. CVs should pay you for stealing your ideas😆 You are making Santu in to a woman that we all want her to be. She has control and love and sweet discipline for everyone in the family.😃 Keep continuing, waiting for your next scene.😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hhhhmm this creatives are stealing ideas and dont give me any credit🥺

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Uma,
Excellent yaar. Ok UMA don't feel bad, Atleast they can pay us through by showing what exactly we want to see in bandini right?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi uma,i cant b able 2 read ur 2nd episode in my cel
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Posted: 15 years ago
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uma i feel like i am actually watching the serial
niceeeeee 😎
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow uma didi it's tooo gud amazing 👏 👏 👏
i love to see Santu like this in actual 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved ur 2nd edition Uma!!Its amazing!!!👏👏Kudos!👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Episode #3
PART 1

Birwa is stunned at the changed house and moti see her coming and start complaining like a school girl that Santu has done this Santu done that. Santu get frustrated and ask moti to keep quiet and stop blabbering like a kid. Santu tells Birwa to come quick as the food will be ready soon. Birwa doesn't look happy and ask Champu to send her food to her room. Santu doesn't look at Birwa and says no one will be served but have to come down to have it. Birwa marches to her room.

DM enter the mansion and is confused that he cant see the LOC and stop midway and look at the figure in salwar who is arranging the table and is again confused who that is. He calls hey chokri. Santu turns to face DM and DM is stunned at his beautiful wife and he realizes that his wife was never been so beautiful like this and he forgets himself for few moments. Santu goes up to him and touches his feet. He steps back and asks what she is doing. She says she is taking blessings from her husband. He says he is no one's father son or husband. She says oh, yes, and then break her mangalsutra with his hand. DM hesitates and just starts climb the stairs. She asks him to stop.

PART 2

DM stops and turns as if asking who isshe to stop him. She ask him to have food and go. He says he don't take food here but in his room. Santu says no, he cannot. He only said that he will not insult the Annapoorna of this house. Annapoorna is equalent to god and he can't insult god and must come for food and can't expect food to come to him. He had nothing to say and comes to table and sit on the side seat. She says no that's someone else's seat and shows him the head seat, he silently go and sit there. Baa babuji and all are happy to see DM there. All come there and they have food together. Moti makes faces and Maulik not happy and Khemi still shocked. Santu looks at moti victorious.

DM finishes his food and goes back to his room. He is shocked to see his room empty and he yells Champakali. Champu was about to go up but Santu stops her and she herself go to DM. DM comes to the steps again and ask where are his things. Santu ask him to calm down and not to speak in high voice as it gives KASHT to her. All are stunned and Moti ask her if this is how she talk to her husband. Santu says whose husband he himself is claiming to be dead and havng no relations. And she already had asked her not to interfere in her family matters. DM is shocked at this new Santu. Santu tells DM that she has shifted his things back to his old room and now onwards he will be in that room only and its an order fo this ghar ki maalkin. DM stares at Santu for a while and has a slight smile on his face as he turns to go to his room.

PART 3

DM enter their room and looks around and finds its exactly how it looked like years back and looks at Subhi's picture with a lighted diya and is smiling. Santu enter the room with a glass of chai and offers him. He says he doesn't want, she ok as you wish and just walks out of the room leaving DM speechless. She go staright up to moti's room and checks if she is ready and tells her that Kanji kaka had informed her that he will be there in another half an hour. Moti says you cannot send me out of this house she is going to talk to naanka. Santu says its your choice but once Kanji kaka is here she has to go with him. Moti is left fuming.

PART 4

Kanji comes to the mansion and he wishes baa and babuji. He ask for Santu. Santu comes and takes his blessings, he bless her to be sadaa suhaagan. He ask if Taru is ready or not. Santu says she is getting ready. Moti comes there and says she is not going anywhere. Santu says she has to go to HER hhome and her husband is there to take her with him. She says no, she will not leave and she says she is going to talk to nannka. DM comes out to look at whats going on. Moti ask naanka to stop Santudi as she is insulting each and everyone here. Santu denies this saying she has not and she has all rights to take decisions about her family. She is his wife and the maalkin of this ghar and she is doing what she feels right to her and maalik cannot deny the fact that she is still wearing the mangalsutra and sindoor of his name and looks straight at his eyes. Stills on Sanraj eyelock.

Edited by ammoos - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Uma.. I really love it.. Strong Santu through and through.. DM is proud of Santu and i can picture this scene clearly.. You have written it superbly.. Its brilliant..

Santu is also now having kasht..hehe.. great to see Santu sending Moti packing..

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