*New*FF-SS-*Its all about love*update pg 3

-Nymphadora- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#1
Hey!Let me intorduce my self,Im Shruti ,im from Goa studying my bachelors in commerce and i just adore watching Tv.Some of youll may know me while some may not,im actually very shy and reserved,so i dont exactly know many people of I-F......So back to the point,im a die hard romantic,but dont tell anyone about it,its kinda like one of my secrets......besides that i visit I-f...love cooking, making creations and most importantly writing stories and scripts.I like long stories i personally love short stories.So here i am with a set of short and sweet love stories...titled.....

and as the title imples ALL the stories are romantc.....All of these stories are fans fics....mostly from the shows i watch MJHT,DMG,mahi way rishta .com etc....but this feature is specail as its based(mostly) on My favorite show MJHT.....and that too on valentines day in the show....ive currently written only one SS.....but will update whenever possoble....hope youll like it....and please comment on my work,even critisism is ok...i jsut need to know youre views......stay tunned...if you like my SS plx press the like button.

PS:- you like my stuff i wud love to know which other jodi you want a fan fic on.....ill really like to do one on request.
loads of Love
Shruti

SS#1-when you were always right besides me.....


It was the 13th of Febuary 2010,1 hour 12 minutes and 30 seconds away from valentines day.As everyone in Excel college waltzed to the tunes of Love and Romance,Dia Bhushan stood in a dark corner,for the first time ever feeling very incomplete.
Perfect make-up-Check,Perefct dress-Check,Perfect patner-Cross!....Dia stood preety at the corner of the excel lobby,while she saw all her friends dancing with thier respective patners.
Dia:-(to her self)Love is in the air.....yeah right.....mere liya to dor dor tak love dikhai nahi de raha!...
She looked towards the far left,and saw Samrat-but sammy to her and his chashmish- her cousin sister Gunjan dancing really close,lost in each others eyes.
Dia(thoughtfully):-agar Gunjan Morena se nahi aati.....toh shayad(stops for a minute).....Samrat mera boyfriend ho sakta tha...
But when she looked again at Gunjan and Samrat-who currently were trying to seperate thier chains which had got tangeled for the zillionth time,She suddenly felt very ashamed...
Dia(softly to herself)-Shayad sammy mera kabhi tha hi nahi.......(sadly)shayad hum sirf dost the.....aur shayad unhe door karne ke liye mujhe aaj saza mil rahi hai......
She looked up again and saw her second cousin-Gunjans sister,Formerly Miss Nupur Bhushan,But now Proudly Mrs Nupur Mayank Sharma.Currently Nupur was trying to force feed Mayank(her Hubby) her favorite (and his not so favorite)paneer tikka.Mayank loved Nupur so much that he could never say no to her,was meekly eating the tikkas(even though he had finished nearly 3 glasses of water trying to gulp them down).
Dia(smiling as she observed Mayank and Nupur):-I never ever thought ke yeh dono boyfiend-girlfirend ban sakte hai......par in dono ne shaadi bhi karli......
Dia continued to look at Mayank and Nupur-smiling,but deep inside her heart sank deeper and deeper,realising what she had lost out on in life.
Voice from behind:-Errmmmmm....Dia?
Dia(Stunned):-Huh??....(realising who it was)....Suhaani...tum ho....tumne mujhe dara hi diya!!.....kya hua....?
Suhaani(shyly):-Woh Dia....Main Tumhare saath Ghar nahi jaa sakti....main woh Adhiraj ke saath drive pe jaa rahi hu...(Blushes)......tum bhai ko bol dogi na....mainkaha gayi hu...bhai thoda busy lag raha hai(looking at Samrat and Gunjan,who were still trying to untangle thier chains).....Thanks Dia ...Bye....(running away swiftly before Dia cud start teasing her about Adhiraj)
Dia:-Bye Bye....Have a very Nice time...(literally screaming from the music)......(Saying softly to her self)Yeh bhi challi gayi...Ab main yaha kya karu.....(looking at her watch-there were 30 mintues left for 12 o'Clock)......i think i should go.....
Dia walked towards the entrance,absent-mindely bumping into the only other person who was leaving the party.
Dia(furiously)-What the hell!!!!dekh ke nahi chak sakte ho??.....andhe ho kya...(stopped suddenly,realsing who she was yelling at)....Benji?....
Benji stood in front of her.lookiing quite a contrast from what he looked like everyday.Out had gone his plain collared t-shirts with baggy jeans and In came a sleek black tuxedo paired with a pair of nice shiny leather shoes.Benji was smelling(literally reeking) of colonge and had looked like he had just shaved and come.
Dia Continued to stare at Benji,not quite realising that her mouth was wide open.
Benji(leaning closely to Dia):-Kya hua???........aaj pehli baar dekh rahi ho kya..(gently shutting Dias mouth).
Dia(suddenly realsing how close Benji was to her)-Benji!!!!(ginving him a tight slap on his arm).......
Benji(yelping loudly cutching his arm):-Owww!!!!.....
Dia(appologetically):-Sorry....bahut lagi kya???.....
Benji(surprised):-What?....Dia ke muh se sorry......aaj suraj kis direction se nikla?...(stopped suddenly when he realsied that Dia was Glaring at him)....sorry....
Dia(curiously):-Toh tum jaa rahe ho..???
Benji(confused):-Ha....(then curiously asked in return)Tum bhi jaa rahi ho?
Dia(exhasperated):-Obviously......darwaze ke paas khadi hu toh jaa ho rahi ho na.....kabhi kabhi tum bhi na...dodo jaise sawal poochte ho...
Benji(completely ignoring Dia's statement):-Great!!......toh saath main chaleen?....
Dia(confused):-kaha??....

Scene swap.

Dia was sitting on one of the many empty tabels in the canteen as Benji was busy russling up cofee for both of them.
Benji(comming towars Dia with two cups of steaming cofee in his hand):-Madamjee......apkee cofee........
Dia(taking the coffee from benjis hands):-Thanks Benji......
Dia put her hands around the steaming cup of cofee,for the first time feeling some warmth since she entered the party.
Benji(holding a vase in front of him like a mike,immitating a news reader):Breaking news......aaj valentines ball ki raath hai...aur college ki Diva Diya akeli hai....aaye poochte hai Diya se ke iske baare main uske kya kehna hai.....(thrusting the vase ihn front of Dia)Maam apke shudh vichar...
Dia(supressing a smile):-Benji......tum bhi na...
Benji(smiling):-aya aya aya AYA(to which Diya smiled which made Benji start singing).....dekho smile aya smile nazar aya....
Dia(smiling):-Thanks Benji.........Accha joke tha.....
Benji(pulling a chair and sitting next to Dia):-Kya hua...bade time se dekh raha hu,tum bahut sad dikh rahi ho.....
Dia(avoiding eye contace with benji):-Kuch nahi......(again she had eye contact with benji and this time she realsied that she just couldnt Lie to him)...OK fine!!!....i admit main khush nahi hu........aaj valentines day ki raat hai,and for the first time main akeli hu...
Benji(sipping his cofee):-par.....pechli baar bhi tum aleki thi....
Dia(getting irrtiated now):-Benji!tab baat alag thi,tab Gunjan aur Sammy sirf dost the,Mayank and aur Nupur ladte rehte the......aur ha us baar mera broken heart nahi tha!!!(literally screaming the last line out)
Dia,who realised that she had shouted at a rather unsuspecting Benji and continued to look down,feeling worse than ever.
Dia(softly):-Sorry......
Benji(comfortingly):-its OK......i understand......waise woh His Lowness Ranvijay thankur bada cartoon tha na?......
Dia finally gave a small smile as Benji stared imitatintg(a very bad imitation actually) Ranvijay.But then suddenly Dia remembered something.
Dia(curiously):-Benji....ermm...tum INTA taiyar ho ike kyun aye the.....?
Benji looked back at Dia ,stunned.There was two minutes silence between them.Dia secretly was cursing herself for asking Benji such a question.
Benji(thougtfully):-Actually is baar mujhe laga ki shayad aaj mujhe valentine milne chances hai....
Dia(surprised):-aaj hi kyun....aaj inta special kya hai.......
Benji(smilingly):-Simple Dia....common sence ki baat hai....jab college ke do hottest dudes booked hai,toh mere jaise looser ke bhi chances bright hai na.......?(paused for a while).....par main galat tha.....Mayank aur Samrat booked hone ke bavjood bhi....mujhe koi valentine nahi mila......
Dia(sympathetically):-Oh Benji im sorry.......Par tum kya...main bhi iss baar akeli hu....aur main collge ki so-called diva hu........i think hum dono ko algle saal shayad koi mile.....
Benji(comforted):-Really?
Dia(smiling):-Yes.....woh sari ladkiyan stupid hai....kyonki unhe yeh dikhai nahi deta ki tum world ke sabse acche aur sabse handsome ladke ho........mujhse poocho...(Dia suddenly stopped)
Dia suddenly felt very shy,while Benji had literally melted in his chair.No girl had ever given him such a complement,specailly someone as beautiful as Dia.
Dia and Benji continued to sit where they were,looking at each other from the corner of thier eyes.
Five minutes for 12 o'clock,they were suddenly disturbed by a familiar voice on the mike.
Samrat(through the micro phone):-Listen up doston....abhi Valentines Day yani ke 14th febuary ko sirf 5 minute baki hai....toh iss saal hum sab valentines day ko....ek beautiful dance ke saath welcome kare....
As Samrats voice faded away,the romantic tunes of "pyaar hua ikrar hua",replaced it(most likely the song was choosen by gunjan).Dia sat still in her place shyly ,till benji suddenly held her hand.
Benji(softly):-Dia kya tum in paanch minute ke like meri valentine banogi.....?mere saath dance karogi....?
Dia was stunned at Benjis sudden advance towards her,but shyly took his hand......Dia looked into Benjis eyes,and for the first time realsied that there cudnt be a better valentines night for her.
As the clock sturck twelve and all the love birds of excel college celebrated in gusto,Dia and Benji stood in the canteen holding thier little fingers,blushing.
Dia(blushing):-happy valentines day Benji.....
Benji(blushing even more than Dia):-ermm.....same to you....toh errmmmm......kal milte hai.....Bye..
Dia(shyly):-Bye Benji....
As Benji walked out of the canteen,slowly,looking back at Dia after every alternative step.Dia thought to herslef.
Dia(smilingly to herself):-main bhi kitni stupid hu.......duniya bhar love dhoondti rahi......when it was always right besides me......



*****THE END****
Mayur SS-tumne jo na kaha link:-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1332984&PID=27675246&#27675246
Sajan SS-Meri Chashmish:-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1332984&TPN=3&#27753423
Edited by shruti.nil - 15 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

25

Views

4.4k

Users

15

Likes

40

Frequent Posters

Mahima_13 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail A Bag Full of Love OS Contest Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#2
first to comment...........
awesome yaar......
first benia ff that i have read...........
its awesome yaar............
do continue soon and pm me when you update..........

p.s- remove your ff from the miley jab hum tum forum as it is against rules..........
clear the topic and just post the link to this page...........
SunshineGirl6 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 15 years ago
#3
Plz continue nd pm me when updated................
strings123 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#4
Is it abt sajan also? Well nice shot!
cuteangelgirl95 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#5
awesome continue soon jst loved the ff on benia do continue soon if u have pm list can u plzzz add me to ur pm list
-Nymphadora- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

first to comment...........<br>awesome yaar......<br>first benia ff that i have read...........<br>its awesome yaar............<br>do continue soon and pm me when you update..........<br><br>p.s- remove your ff from the miley jab hum tum forum as it is against rules..........<br>clear the topic and just post the link to this page...........<br>


thanks mahima....i ddint know i was supposed to do that too....ill remove it of MJHT forum as soon as possible

Ps:-all these stories are short stories so they end here itself.....the net one is on mayur....so keep watching!
dmgmjht4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#7
Loved it Shruti
you should write more stories
I really like them!!!!
I never read that many Benia OS/FF
actually...
I've never read one
well an ff
but no os
or ss
anyways
continue writing more
sushups thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#8
auu that was so shweeeeeeeet
benji aur dia ke finally taar jhud hi gaye
JATINTHAKKAR thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#9
a nice story written very well .
keep it up.
you rock!!!😉
-Nymphadora- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#10


hi!!Firstly im really very very sorry dat i wanst able to update the next story.....what happened is that i had to attend a inter collegate event so i had zero time for anything else.......but now that im finished with that im back with my story.Its about Mayank and Nupur with a guest apprearence by Samrat and Gunjan and a secret someone......who is that youll have to guess......it isnt a romance.....its something hatke.......tell me about how youll liked it....or for the fact didnt like it.......id love to know youre views......
loads of love-shruti


Tumne jo na kaha....

Mayank Sharma sat in the lounge of a Mumbai hospital,with a furrowed fore head deep in thought......
Mayank(thoughtfully):-Nupur mujhse aakhri baar kya kehna chahti thi....Kyun mujhe uske woh baat na kehne ka abhi bhi dard ho raha hai....kyun?
Mayank felt a shiver down his spine everytime he remembered the hope,the love and the fear that an semi consious Nupur had in her eyes.
*Flashback-about 1 hour ago*
Nupur Bhushan was lying on the streacher,as she was being carried to the operation theater....
Nupur(faintly):-Mayank??.....
Mayank(rushing from behind and holding nupurs hand):-Nupur.....kya hua.....
Nupur(tearfully):-tum mujhse wada karo...aagar mjuhe kuch ho jaye to tum dusri shaadi karoge...
Mayank(shocked):-Nupur!,tum itni illogical baat kaise kar sakti ho....
Nupur(weakly):-Aur mayank yeh hamesha yaad rakhna ki.......(But before nupur could complete her sentence she was put in the operation theater and the door was closed)
*return to the present*
Mayank sat thoughtfully,not realising that Gunjan and Samrat had just entered.
5 years since they had graduated from excel college nothing had changed much.Nupur and Gunjan became even more close after they got married.Samrat had taken over his fathers empire,and had married Gunjan with great pomp.
Gunjan(Tearfully):-Woh.....Mayank di.....woh....(trembling).
Gunjan had to be held by Samrat,who took over from Gunjan.
Samrat(trying to act calm while he was trying to support Gunjan from falling down):-nupur...theek to hai na.....?
Mayank(calmly):-Bharosa rakho....kuch nahi hoga meri Nupur ko........
One hour past by,still the doors of the operation theater didnt open.Gunjan was silently crying while Samrat was at the corner of the room trying to make someone understand something
Samrat(softly on the phone):-listen.....abhi isi waqt yaha aoo(listening to the what the other person was saying)....ha ha...usse bhi saath main lao...theek hai.....bye(finishing the conversation as mayank came towards him)
Mayank:-Samrat woh main yeh kehna chahta tha ki.....(abruptly stops)
The doors of the operation theater opened,Gunjan stood up -trembling.Maynak tightly clenched Samrats arm.Samrat anxiously waited.
Doctor(serious)-Nupur ka Patti.....?
Mayank stepped forward trembling.Everything seemed silent.


Doctor(Smilingly):-Congratulations!!!!!Nupur ko Judwa bacche hue.......
This news made all the tension in the atmostphere vanish as Mayank danced around the room,Samrat kissed Gunjan on the cheek,as she began calling everyone franatically to the hospital.
*Scene swap*
Nupur is lying in the bed of the hospital,with her babies lying next to her in the cradel.Till now most of the Bhushan family and Mayanks Mom had come to see the children,but Nupur allowed none of them to touch her Kids.
"Pehle Mayank",she would say each time-smilingly,much to the irritation of the family members.Gunjan was looking at the babies lovingly,like she had never seen anything more beautiful before.
Gunjan(to herself smiling):-main bekar main ro rahi.......sab kuch normal hi tha......
The door banged open and in came Suhaani and Adhiraj(now husband and wife),and in front of them the cutest baby girl one may have ever seen.
Baby(happily):-Mummmyyyy!!!!!!....
Gunjan smiled and picked up Samridhi Shergill-lovingly called Sammy Juniour in her arms.
Samridhi was the exact replica of her mother Minus the specs(Samrat-"mere life main ek hi chahsmish ki jagah hai..".)
Samridhi looked at her little cousins and pouted angrilly just like Samrat.
Samridhi(angrily):-Yeh kaun hai?
Samrat(comming from behind Gunjan and taking Samridhi in his arms in his arms):-Yeh na.....hum dono aur tumhari Mummy ke beech naye naye kabab main haddi hai....(But stopped when Gunjan Glared at him)....nahi yeh dono tumhari cousins hai...jehne aaj ke baad apni maasi ki saari attention milne waali hai...
Sammy and Samriddi looked at each other,then looked back at Gunjan making Sad faces.
Meanwhile Mayank finally managed to come and meet his wife and new born children.
Nupur had delivered faternal twins one was a girl while one was a boy(it ran in the family-Dia and Uday were fraternal twins too)
Mayank looked at both the babies-he smiled both had thier mothers beautiful eyes.While the baby girl was calmly looking around at all the hussel bussel aroung her,the baby boy was moving his arms and legs gurgling loudly-trying to get everyones attention.
Mayank(to himself):-Margyee....yeh to apne ma pe gaya hai....ek aur dramebaaz ko tolerate karna padega.....
Nupur(suspisiously):-Mayank?....kuch kaha....
Mayank(hurriedly):-Nahi to...main bas soch rha tha ki humare bacche kitne kubsurat hai...pata hai kyun.....
Nupur:-Kyun?
Mayank(now sitting next to nupur holding her hand):-Kyunki woh apni maa pe gaye hai.....
Nupur Blushed a bright pink while Mayank held Nupurs hand and kissed it gently.
Nupur(blushingly):-Mayank....thoda thoda toh control karo.....bacche kya sochenge......
Mayank looked at Nupur exhasperated,what Nupur was made out of that she could be so filmy,even though just an hour ago she had delivered not one but two kids.
Mayank(changing the topic):-accha toh hum bacche ka naam kya rakhenge.....
Nupur(smilingly):-Ladki ka-anjali sharma aur ladke ka....rahul ya raj sharma.....
Mayank(doubtfully):Kyun?......(suddenly realises)...oh......KHKH.....
Nupur (Angrily):-KHKH nahin....KKHH-Kuch kuch hota hai....
Mayank smiled wondering how and why his wife was so filmy,till suddenly he realised something.
Mayank(curiously):-Woh tum kya keh rahi thi.....tum dusri shaadi karo......
Nupur(looking slightly embaressed):-Woh........Tina ne rahul se......(suddenly being alert),tumne woh baat seriously toh nahi li na?
Mayank(acting thoughtful,as Nupur was looking at him worried):-Errmmm.......idea accha hai(Nupurs face contracted)...par nahi.....kabhi nahi....
Nupur smiled and gave Mayank a big Bear Hug.
Mayank(while hugging Nupur back):-Tum woh aur kya kehne wali thi....
Nupur looked back at him confused and then smiled.
Nupur seperated herself from Mayank.Mayank looked back confused.
Nupur(with her hand out):-I(put her hands against her chest).....Love(holding them together as a fist).......You.....(extending her hand out to Mayank).
Mayank smiled,repated what Nupur had done,and Hugged Nupur tightly as Anjali and Rahul Sharama gurgeled in the background.
**The End**

PS_i wanted to make a siggy for this-but wasnt able to find cute pics of A baby who cud lokk like a sajan ofspring-ifanyof youll have sucha photo cant you plzzz pm it to me!
cumming up next:-im cumming up with asajan onw most likely on Vday....so stay tuned!😊



Edited by shruti.nil - 15 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

1 months ago

new morning, new day.

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

6 months ago

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1 Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page. I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

4 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya and Raina ff - Love me like you do

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".