*New*FF-SS-*Its all about love*update pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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waiting for sajan........ do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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why don't you do a whole gang after sajan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow its terrific shruti loved it waiting for more soon ..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwww....that was such a cute os..........plz continue soon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aweosme ss loved it do continue soon thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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chooo cute

Anjali and raj
so cute
i was thinking of KKHH
and then read your ss
funny na?
LOL
do your sajan one soon too!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

why don't you do a whole gang after sajan



i will im working on it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey shruthi...
great mayur SS...wow nupur gave birth to faternal twins..so sweet..aur yeh kya KKHH ka story..thank god aisa asal mein nehi hua....
and loved samridhi.."meri zindagi main bas ek hi chashmish hain."😆yeah!!true!!!
waiting for sajan one on Vday!!

i will be busy with my studies for next few months so i may comment late on u r SS ,,,hope u understand n wont mind..but please do send me Pms..will read when ever i get time n will try to comment,,,

good wishes!!
sri:-)
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Happy Valentines Day

Hi everyone.....firstly happy valentines day........hope all of youll have had an wesum day......ive not had one....was busy writing my FF-SS.......as promosed..this time its on Sajan......after watching yesterdays episode my mood was off big time....i guess yours must have been too.......dats why i made it a point to complete my SS on time......its a cute typr of short story on Samrat and His Chasmish....hope you like it......please give youre comments and suggestions......ive tried a new type of style....hope you like it......

Im Running out of Ideas....plz give me suggestions....


Meri Chashmish

Samrat Shergill stepped into the lobby of Excel college,smiling.Finally he was going to meet His Chashmish,after waiting for 3 whole days.He ran into all the classrooms searching for His Chashmish,not bothered with the fact that he had dashed into nearly all the proffesors,and the principal too.He just didnt care what he was doing at that point of time,he just wanted to see his chashmish.
He saw Dia,Benji and Adhiraj huddeled in a group talking near the canteen.Samart went up to them hurriedly.
Samrat(anxiously):-Candy.....chashmish kaha hai?...
Dia(smilingly):-Kuyn??usse bahut miss kar rahe ho?
Samrat(irritated):-Stop it yaar....seedhe seedhe bolo....chashmish kaha hai?
Suddenly the conversation was interrupted when Dia,Benji and ADhiraj started nudging each other.A voice came from behind...
Voice(sounding nervous):-Samrat?
Samrats ears stood up,as he heard the voice of him beloved Chashmish.He felt the back of his neck going going red.Wind began to blow at his face.He shut his eyes and took a deep breath.He didnt want to see anyone elses face,and wanted to clear his mind his mind of all things,before he saw his chahsmish's face.He smiled to himself,and slowly turned towards his beloved Gunjan Bhushan.
Samrat finally faced Gunjan and slowly opened his eyes.Only to stare back-in shock and dibelief.
Samrat looked back at Gunjan like he never knew her.He stared back at her,confused cos he didnt know who this girl was but at the same time looked for his chashmish in this girl.
There was 5 minutes of complete silence between Gunjan and Samrat as he continued to stare at her,without saying a word.Then finally Samrat walked of from there leaving a tearful Gunjan wondering what she had done so wrong that Samrat didnt even want to look at her.
***Scene swap***
Samrat sat in the canteen staring angrily at the cup of coffee that he was holding.He had never ever felt so hurt and angry in his entire life.
Suddenly everyone around him,started murmuring.He became still as he knew why all of this was happening.
Gunjan Bhushan entered the canteen,embarresed at the sudden attention she was getting.She saw Samrat sitting at a lonely corner of the canteen,and heaved a sigh of relief.
Gunjan(relived):-Samrat........
Samrat froze even more in his seat,and shut his eyes really tight,he didnt even want to look at Gunjan.
Gunjan came and stood in front of Samrat.SamratShut his eyes even tighter,but finally gave up and opened his eyes.
Samrat opened his eyes and looked at Gunjan.
Dressed in red sleveless chudidaar,with her beautiful black hair left open,which curled at the ends,Gunjan looked stunning.But Samrat still didnt want to look at her,because she had dome something her never ever wanted her to do.
Gunjan(anxiously):-Kya Hua Samrat?....tum waha se kyun chale gaye....?
Samrat(blankly):-Kya kahoon........(pauses) Gunjan
Gunjan(sounding hurt):-Tumne mujhe Gunjan bulaya....
Samrat(sarcastically):-Aur kya kahoon.......tum chashmish hi nahi rahi......
Gunjan lowered her eyes,which for the first time werent covered with her glasses.She had switched to lenses and had wanted to surprise Samrat.
Gunjan held Samrats hand tightly,when she realised what she had done.
Gunjan(Guiltyly):-Sorry Samrat....
Samrat(sounding both angry and Hurt):-Yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi?
Gunjan(softly):-main tumhe surprise dena chahti thi....
Samrat(looking straight into Gunjans eyes):-Iski kya zaroorat thi Gunjan.......tumhara yeh pyaara sa face har pal dekhne ke liye main jeeta hu....aur tumne kya kiya...
Gunjan(tearfully):-Maine socha.....main shayad tumhare liye aur acchi lag sakti hu....
Samrat(argrily):-Aur acchi........mere liye tumse zyada acchi iss duniya main koi nahi hai.....
Gunjan tried to interrupt SamratBut she couldnt.
Samrat(continuing with what he was saying):-.........and you know what chahsmish?.......tum mere liye tab bhi best rahogi jab main college ka dude hu.....aur tab bhi jab main ek akela ordinary ladka hu.........aur tab bhi best rahogi jab main 70 yrs ka budha khusat taklu budha hunga.....samjhi......
Gunjan(smiling):-Samajh gayi.......
Samrat looked at Gunjan not understanding why she was smiling so much.Then he finally remembered his last line.
Samrat(Smiling):-Oh......to finally tum samajh gyi(to which Gunjan nodded).......and dont worry tabh bhi mujh pe ladkiyan marengi...
Gunjan glared at Samrat.....
Samrat(continued to smile):-Lekin tab bhi.....main SIRF tumse pyaar karunga......chahsmish.
Gunjan smiled,and quitely removed her lences and put on her glasses again.
Samrat(smiling):-Perfect.....ab lagti ho na.....mere chashmish jaise.....
**The End**😊





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Posted: 15 years ago
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i am first one to comment...................
yipee................................................
awesome work dear...................
fantastic and fantabulous job.....................................
loved your work.......................................👏
Edited by surbhi123 - 15 years ago

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