PriDa SS : Entwined (Oththancha mohor) part 02 pg 04 updated: 31jan10
PriDa SS : Entwined (Jeev guntala) part 01
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Hey yall,
jus trying out sumthing new.
Sumfink for da weekend folks.
Its mah belief dat
Behind every set of 3 smiles
der is a small drop of tear
jus waiting to stream down sumones cheek.
like i alwaz say, Kabhi khushi kabhi ghum
so after all dat Humor from mah side...
lemme try sumthing else
hence dis new project of mine.
Its a short 3 part set.
PriDa SS: Entwined (Jeev Guntala) part 01
Da ambulance moved through traffic smoothly like a snake on desert sand
Multimillion dollars worth of cars parted faster den da Red sea partition all those yrs back as de heard da blaring alarm, indicating a critical case on da way to da local hospital
It was da weekend. Chaos everywer.
Loud music cud be heard from da neigbouring cars.
Inside da ambulance all one cud hear was da beepings of a black monitor.
Beep --- Beep --- Beep.
But in such a case dat is all dat counted. the constant beepings must go on.
Every single member of the 3 team unit dispatched on hearing da 911 call was on alert.
De cud not afford to loose this case wotsoever.
De all watched HIM as he held onto her frail stark white pale hands
perhars giving away HIS life in da hope dat she lived tru
Her eyes wer closed .
He remembered, she only closed her eyes so peacefully, wen he applied sindoor
Her face had a blank xpression like she was peacefully n happily resting
He silently whispered, U cant do dis to me
U cant leave me now
His grip on her hand increased almost crushing her palm
The nurse immediately touched his arm, Sir, please. let us do our job.
But, Nurse, cant u see. she promised me, she will never leave me alone. never.
vaada kia hai hmmmne ek dusre se.
hardam saath rahenge.
kya zidd hai iski ab ye.
He turned his face n closed his eyes
White light.
All she cud see was stark harsh white light at da end of da lonesome path
A little alarm going off in da far distance
She cud hear him. HIM, her prince. her knight. her lover. her protector. her husband. her life.
She heard his sobs.
She felt his strong hold on her hands.
why was he crying now. How disturbed he felt.
All she wanted to do was console him
She wanted to let him know, she was alwaz der for him.
She wanted to cradle his head in her arms, jus like a mother wud - her baby
All da pain dat he had suffered wid da loss of his father
she wanted to make it vanish
She wanted to tell him she loved him
She wud if only da white light dimmed a little
It wud jus not let her open her eyes. She was feeling drowsy now.
Maybe if she slept it off a little
Maybe if she relaxed a little n let da harsh white light pass her by
den she wud xplain all dat to him
yes she made up her mind
she started relaxing---
The Beep beep beep on da monitor slowed down
The nurse looked up in alarm
Doctor- we are loosing her ------------------------
to be continued--
Precap-
Damnini, i swear i will join u n pull u back from werever u are
we will alwaz be together. ALWAZ. u hear me !! Dont u dare leave me !!
Doctor !! Nurse !! do something
Sameer !! Varun !! help her help me god !!
dats wen he knew da meaning of *A chest pain*
He was seeing blurry
Da beeps sounded low in volume
Da pain increased closing in on his sobs
last he heard Varun screaming near his right ear
*Sameer bhaiyya !! Prithvi bhaiyya ko bhi hum khone wale hai* 😲
alwaz *Need* feedback.
do comment.
skorpion.