PriDa SS: Entwined. Updated part 03 03feb10 - Page 5

hey awesome ff
both the parts r excellently written
thanks for pm
plz update soon

yaar wat are u doin!!!! why r u still here??? jaake apne scripts kisi ache director/producer ko dedo......awards toh pakka millega.. its excellent ⭐️⭐️⭐️........beautiful written.....especially the Bright white light scene its simply superb 👏👏👏 yaar tum iss main bhee ⭐️ hoo still readin gayee nahi😉

Hey Skorpion!! Just read the two updates! must say fabulous FF..! so heartbreaking!😭 loved the description of Damini's pain in the first update.. her need to reach out to Pri... superbly described!! loved the description of the white light in both the updates... and prithvi's pain was very real... the pain in his chest.. My god.. Prida are soumates in every sense of the word.. and your fic is proof of that.. beautiful really..👏 and OMG the eye contact in the end... the smiles exchanged.. crossing of the white light together... lets just say i had tears in my eyes.... cant say more then that..!! And OMG they DIED? like really DIED???😲 My God.. you are so mean yar.. but its okay.. even my fic is completely angst ridden so ill keep mymouth shut!😆 anyway looking back to the unfolding of their love story.! please pm me when you update next. Thanks! Maham

@alu5123
missed u earlier. mah bad.
thanxxX for commenting

@liv2laugh
punar janam alternate universe - now U are giving me ideas

@topsyturvy23
thanxxX for commenting

@sia88
sia sia sia. wot do i say.
encouraging words from yaa
bight lite scene... yes i am fascinated to it.
alwaz have thot abt it. do we really see one as da end nears.

@rankanrock
soulmated de sure are. we have made dem such.
aint eye contact da first thing dats happens wen *we* connect wid sumone.
it shud be da only way of communication between soulmates.
jus mah belief. no words r neccesary.
ankhon me padh lete hai hmmm unke raaz.
jus wanted to bring dat point out between PriDa.
aate jaate sab hasaate hai...
wo koi ek hi hota hai jo Hmmmhe rulaa sake n Hmmm ro padd le.


thanxxX for reading mah SS n giving me a chance to xpress my angst.
skorpion.

Skorpie, this one is for the siggy....⭐️⭐️⭐️ Chaand ko chupne mat dena - in kuch dino ke liye... 👏👏👏 Well everything depends on Chaand ...... Sorry for the off topic update ...but then where else do I get to write abt the siggys....😃

Skorpy babes ... your story moved me to tears ! Just like everyone said yeh tune kya kiya !!! But i KNOW that you'll set things right ! tumhein yeh karnaaa hii hogaa ! One more mentions : I LOVE your sigs Skorp ! Amazingly romantic and hilarious the same time ! -- Rach

Hey Skorpion 😊

Omg what u did, hope CV's not steal ur idea?

what a twist! looking forward to more!

@ rach
loved da siggyS ek
thanxxX for commenting

@ ditto100
notebook. message in da bottle. guardian. watched dem all
Nicholas Sparks writes his tragedy very well

@ muniza75
thanxxX for commenting. gonna update soon

@ adventure_gurl
twist it sure was. thanxxX for commenting.


jus wanna say'
dun be sad its getting over
be happy it was is n will be a part of ur life.
LNMDJ will alwaz rock. on-air or off-air. for us all.
skorpion.