'mayur' the temptation....page 44 part 12 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i love it!!! ome mayur!!!! wow they can put lyf into any kind of story!!
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It was not at all boring , had gr8 fun reading it infact :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Pari

awwwwwsome update

Loved Mayur to the core

do continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey pari

grtt part

loved mayur very much

con't soonn

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heyy guys i m finally updating........ thanx a lot for yur support and so much appreciating comments............

thanx a lot........

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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heyy guys finally i m updating.............. i know its since very long that i have updated....... but this one quite long,,,,,,, and i m sure its not that boring,.......... the last boing part i promise kyuki next update will be a blast....

so no more bakwaas and here's the update...

m: wat happened nupur? whose at the phone?
nupur stood lyk a dumbstuck.....
wen sajan to arived....... seeing the atmosphere serious....... they too got serious...
s: wat happened?? mayank why is nupur shocked?
g: yes whats the problem?
m: i dont know....... give me the phone.....
mayank took the phone..
m: hello whos dis?
d: this is dia mayank.......
m: yes dia wat happened???? wat happened?
d: wo actually...... wo..
m: wat? tell me clearly...
d: umm,,,,,,,, yur..... yur father....... umm benji's father......
m: dad?? wat happend to dad?? wats the matter dia?
d: he....... he expired last night.............
silence.........
d: yes......... he had a heart attack.... and is dead now.............
m: wat....... dad.........
d: hmm............ thats why i called di....... yur mother want you both to be here..........
mayank cut the phone............
till now nupur came to her senses.............
n: mayank we need to go.............
m: hmm........ (still in shock)
the next scene......
mayur are in the car.......... mayank is driving,,,,,,,, nupur sitting next to him.....
wen suddenly mayank stops the car.........
n: wat happened mayank?
m: i cant go nupur,,,,,,,,,
n: why.......
silence..
n: look every one has to leave this world one day,,,,,, and and so does yur father........ just he got total peace...... dont feel depressed......
m: how will i face mom?? i cant see her broken....... she .......... she will be upset and i...... i will not be able to control myself......... (he was sobbing and tears were rolling down his cheeks)
nupur took him to her arms and was now consoling him.....
n: mayank you hav to take care of yur mother.............
m: hmm.....
n: let me drive........
now nupur was driving and mayank was sitting next to her................
wen they reached the mansion...... everyone was crying and mayyu's mom was also crying.......
after 3 months.............
now mayank had taken over his fathers business................ benia's marriage is fixed next month...... as mm did not want them to feel the sadness..... and she wanted to bring the happy moments back she agreed to the closest dates.......
all the things were going........as the tym went mayur's bonding also grew rapidly....... but their relationship was a secret and no body knew it except sajan and mm had a for sure doubt,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
one beautiful morning..........
mayank was sleeping in his room....... mm came and woke him up.......... she saw wen he was sleeping he had a big smile on his face.........
mm: sapna dekh raha tha.....
m: haaan....... (still smilin)
mm: accha sapna tha.........
m:haan
mm: koi ladki thi,.,,
m: haan....... (lost)
mm: nupur thi......
m: haan............... nahi......... maa plz tum phir shuru ho gyi..............
mm: accha bacchu...... ab to maa hi buri lagegi..
m: ma plz...
mm: chal chal ab uth jaa......... tune hi kaha tha na ki tujhe baut important kaam hai aur main tujhe utha doon......
m: are haan........ kya ma aap bhi...... baaton mein uljhaa dia.....
mayank gets up from the bed and gets ready.....
mm: wese mayank kya important kaam hai?
m: kuch nahi..... bas aise hi.... kuch khaas nahi......
mm: accha thik hai........ (smiling)
m: maa aap jesa soch rahe ho wesa kuch nahi hai......
mm: mein kaha kuch soch reahi hoon...... mein to kuch nahi soch rahi hoon.......
m: mein jaa raha hoon........
he leaves......
next scene..
mayank is standing out of nupur's house...... (i forgot to tell you now nupur is doing a job in mayank's father's company....... she is the personal assistant of mayank...... and mayank's the boss)
nupur comes..
m: kitni der kar di nupur.......
n: ab chalein.....
m: chalo........
they go to a restaurant,........
they place the order......
n: mayank aaj kitne dino baad hum saath mein lunch le rahe hai....
m: haan..... aur wese bhi ab benji ki shaadi tak hum dono bahut busy hai.........
a lady comes to them.........
lady: hey mayank.......
m: sheena??
sh: yupp......... so mujhe benji ki shaadi ka invitation mila.......
m: yes...... plz aana zaroor.......
sh: sure.... but wo to tumse chota hai na....... to tum kabb shaadi kar rahe ho.....
m: umm...... wo.....
sh: ladki nahi mili kya??? well......... yeh kon hai? (pointing nupur)
m: she is nupur..... nupur bhushan ,,,, my...
n: personal assistant........
mayank was going to say girl frnd........
m: yes,,,, personal asistant........ (looking at nupur.)
sh: okk..... gotta go nw..... enjoy....
she leaves.......
mayank also was going to leave......
n: mayank kahaa jaa rahe ho?
m: kyu?? tum kyu pooch rahi ho? after all tum to meri personal assistant ho na.......
n: mayank plz..... agar tum usse bata dete to... to wo ghar pe sabko bata deti..... aur tuhi ne mana kiya hai na ki benji dia ki shaadi tak hum kisi ko nahi bataayenge........
m: par....... par........ par to bhi........ mein tumse baat nahi kar raha.......
he goes to the car...... and
he notices that nupur is continuously gazing him...
why?
bush..... e left the keys on the table...
he goes back ,,, take the keys..... and is abt to leave..
n: mayank... (making a puppy face)
m: mein tumse baat nahi kar raha.....
n: mayank..... (making a sad face)
m: kaha na mein tumse baat nahi kar raha..,,,
n: mayank... (making a crying face)
m: dekho nupur..
n: mayank... (on the knees)
mayank noticed that each tym she said mayank her voice became louder..
m: nupur mein..
n: mayank... (loudly)
m: nupur kya,,,
n: mayank ... (very loudly)
mayank saw every one in the cafe was looking at them)
m: yhe tum...
n: mayank..... (extremely loud)
this tym mayank put his finger on her lips...
and took her to the car........... he made her sit in the car.....
m: kya hai? (angrily)
n: mayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkkk................ (shouting...... very loudly)
mayank put his hands on his ears.............
after sum tym he opened his ears...
m: nupur tum kyu chilla...
n: maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyaaaaaaaaaannnkkk (omg... she was horible)
silence......... mayank was in shock.... she was sooooooooooooo loud.... his ears were covered with his hands......
he opened them........
he looked at nupur.............. in confusion..................
he thot every tym he wud say anything she will shout........... mayank........... and once more if he heard that name being called so loudly he wud start hating his own name...
nupur was waiting for him to say sumthing.....
finally after gathering a lot of courage mayank finally spoke sumthing..
m: i .........
n: mayaaaaaaa.....
but this tym mayank came forward and put his hands on her lips......... now the scene was lyk they were in the car.......... nupur sitting next to drivers seat.......... mayank on nupur........ his one hand on her mouth and other on her waist........ they were too close............... they cud hear and feel the warmth of others body......
m: i love you......
nupur's eyes widened.......... then she started smiling.........
mayank was still not removing his hands from her lips as if afraid of may be she can shout..... mayank... but wen he saw her smiling he removed his hands from her lips...........
m: wat?
(they were still in same posture but mayank's hand was not on nupur's lips now)
n: i love you too./....
mayank was completely confsed....
m: wat did you say..?
n: i love you too......
mayank moved upwards and settled on his seat.....
m: tum thodi der ke liye paagal ho gyi thi kya?
n: nahi....... wo kya hai na kabhi kabhi tumhaare shareer mein ek sadu aur akadu ladka aa jaata
to tumhe waapis laane ke liye mujhe tumhe bulaana padta hai...
m: tum....... kitni chaalaak ho....... par to bhi mein tumse baat nahi kar raha.....
n: mayank.......
m: plz nupur..
n: m aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ...............
m: stop it...
n: maaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy
click..
mayank came forward and gave her a lip kiss............ gosh........ the scene was
mayank on nupur in the car.......... his hand caressing her waist............ and the other moving thru her neck......... no response from nupr as she is in shock.............
they are in the car and doing romace............. slowly nupur started to respond to the kiss............. it was their first kiss...... no the second one the first one they did on the dare by samrat.......... but this one was so passionate................. they dispersed wen they were out of breath.........
both breathing heavily........ mayank settled himself on his heat......... not able to meet each others eyes he started the car...............
complete silence in the car................
n: mayank...
m: hmm... (drinking water)
n: mein aaj tumhaare saath chalungi....... aunty se shaadi ki baat karni thi........
mayank spilled out the water he was in a great shock
m: kya??? tum maa se humaari shaadi ki baat karne jaa rah ho..........
nupur laughed at this..... laughed laughed and laugh..
n: mayank tum bhi na paagal ho........ mein dia au rbenj ki shaadi ki baat kar rahi thi.......
m: hush......... ohk......... chalo.....
they reached mayyu's house........
mm opened the door......
n: namastey aunty..
mm: namastey beta.......
m: hey maa.......
they entered the house........
mm: to yeh tera zaroori kaam tha mayyu.........
m: maa plz.....
n: kya?
mm: are nupur beta kese aana hua?
n: wo bas shaadi ke liye.......
mm: kya tum aur mayank shaadi kar rahe ho,,,!!!!!
and mayank was drinking juice dis tym and spilled out the juice and looked at mm in shock......... while nupur's jaw dropped...... wat did she say...... definetly mayank bilkul apni maa jesa hai........... her eyes widened........ and wen she looked at mayank's expresiion she was lyk "not again"..
n: kya..........
mm: arre tum dono to serious ho gye........ mein to mazaak kar rahi thi........
n: ahem..
mm: kher,,,,, aao mein tumhe details bataati hoon,,,,,,'
for sum tym they discussed the things.........
n: aunty mein chalti hoon.....
mm: beta khaana to kha ke jaaogi..
n: nahi aunty aaj nahi..
mm: mein tumhe bina khaana khaaye nahi jaane doongi..
n: par,,,,,,,,
mm: par war kuch nahi,,,,
n: thik hai
mm: accha beta..... mayank ko bula laao khaana ban gya hai,,,,,, (she sid it intentionally)
n: jee.......
nupur went to mayank's room.....
he was in the bathroom.....
she waited for him outside...........
he came out.......... his hair were wet....... ans he was wearing a white vest with red border........ (the one which he wore in the song jaage kaage armaan) he was looking damn hot......... and a lower of grey color (the one at samrat's farmhouse)......
n: abb.... wo maa ne khaane ke liye bulaaya hai.....,,
m: to aa raha hoon....... ab mujhe ghoorna band karo.......
she noticed she was gazing him..... and now she stopped..
m: nupur....
n haan.....
m: abhi na tum bilkul pighla hua papita lag rahi ho.....
n: kya?? mein pigla hua papita?"???? tum..... tum...... bhi ek number ke monkey lag rahe ho........ aaj anhi chodungi.....
she ran behind him..... mayank was running followed by mayank....
they moved to the hall with their tom and jerry fight,,,,,,
mm: yeh sab kya ho raha hai??
m: dekho na ma yeh nupur..... (still running)
n: mein??? aunty saari galti iski hai.... is sadu ki....
m: mein sadu.. (he stopped) to tum ungli billi.......
n: (she too stooped) mind yur language mister,,, (pointing the pointer finger to him)
m: you mind yur language miss.... (pointing his finger)
mm: arre bas..................... (coming in between) chalo khaana khaao ab......
they ate the food........
mm asked mayank to drop nupur home,,,,,,
in the car..
m: nupur....
n: hn?
m: aaj ki humaari date to spoil o gyi us sheena ki wajah se...... to ,,
n: to?
m: to kal chale,,,,,,,
n: phir se??
m: wat yaar....
n: mei ghar pe kya kahungi?
m: nupur,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
n: mayank par dia uday.,,,
m: arey waah........ tumhaari behen dia har doosre din mere bhai ko date pe le jaane ko kehti hai aur tum,....
n: tumhe kese pata?
m: kyuki enji date ke liye pese mujhse hi maangta hai.
n: par mayank......
m: tum aaj dia ko bataa dena ki tum kal date pe jaa rahi ho...... i m sure wo bahut khush hogi...... lo ghar aa gya......
n: bye,,,,,,,
m: bye...... mein kal raat 8.00 baje lene aaunga...........
n: thik hai,,,,,,,
she goes to her bed room......
dia: hey di.......
n: dia.......
dia: haan di........
n: pata hai kal mein date pe jaa rhai hoon......
d: really??????
n: yupp.........par tum kahaa jaa rahi ho??
d: plz di........ bas ek phone karna tha...
n: kise??
d: benji ki mom ko..........
she calls her.... nupur is standing next to her,,,,,,,,,,,, unable to understand wats happening.......... the phone was at speaker..
d: hello...... maa.......... finally mayank bhai ne di ko date ke liye pooch hi liya............
nupur: tumhe kese pata mayank ne,.,,,,
mm: sach............. finally................... nupur....... kahaa jaa rahe ho??
n: aunty yeh,.......
d: arrey maa............. mein aaj bahut khush hoon..... yeh log at last date pe jaa rahe hai............
mm: aur nahi to kya,,,,,, itne din tym pass kiya,......... accha beta mein rakhti hoon...... shaayad mayyu aa gya,,,,,, uski khichaai bhi to karni hai,,
d: ee maa......... bye..
she cut the phone.....
n: tujhe kese pata mein mayank ke sath jaa rhai hoon.?? aur yeh aunty ko kyu phone kiya?
d: obviously di..... tum aur mayank hi date pe jaa rahe ho......... aur aunty ko bataaya kyuki,,,,,, kyuki bas bata diya........
n" par tu...
d: par war kuch nahi......... chalo aapke liye dress select karte hai...........
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hey guys......... so there is a lot of fun waiting for you all in the next update........ as bcoz of there date and..... oops thats a secret......... and yes all will be filled with happiness and lots and lots of masti.......... seriously in the next update you guys are gonna enjoy mayur to the extreme................. and of course an update filled with romance..................

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi PAri,
u updated after long time.
hey nice part dear.
Aww maynks dad died and maynak join in his business
So nups is PA of mayank.
very good.
now they can romance more. lol
lved the cute nok-jhok scene of mayur.
Specially when nupur shputed on mayank loudly.
And myank gave her a lip kiss.
they r so sweet.
Awesome update .
waitng 4 their date
keep update.

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was fab Liked it

MM knws evrthg u knw😆 Loved the whole update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome
loved it
do continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

superb update.loved it.

mayank's dad died.but, i liked the way nupur console mayank and make him understand.
mayank ne uske dad ka buisness join kia .
loved their cute knok khok and sweet moments.
update soon dear.
sorry for late reply.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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