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heyy guys,,,,,,, i know its quite late update,,,,,,, but still....... i tried my best to make it as you want.......

here is the update ....... enjoy..

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d: arrey maa............. mein aaj bahut khush hoon..... yeh log at last date pe jaa rahe hai............
mm: aur nahi to kya,,,,,, itne din tym pass kiya,......... accha beta mein rakhti hoon...... shaayad mayyu aa gya,,,,,, uski khichaai bhi to karni hai,,
d: ee maa......... bye..
she cut the phone.....
n: tujhe kese pata mein mayank ke sath jaa rhai hoon.?? aur yeh aunty ko kyu phone kiya?
d: obviously di..... tum aur mayank hi date pe jaa rahe ho......... aur aunty ko bataaya kyuki,,,,,, kyuki bas bata diya........
n" par tu...
d: par war kuch nahi......... chalo aapke liye dress select karte hai...........
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
and dia takes nupur with her to select a dress.......
n: nahi dia mein yeh dress kese pehen sakti hoon.......... yeh bhaut.......
d: acchi hai......... bas aap yehi dress pehenegi....... and its final.......
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wen mayank reached home..........
m: maa mein kya pehnoo?
mm: kyu> kahiin jaa raha hai??
m: maa plz..
mm: matlab assume kar tu nupur ke saath date pe jaa rha hai...
m: haan assume karne mein kya jaata hai..... to kya pehno,.,,
mm: hai mein mar gyi...... mera beta date pe jaa raha hai.....
m: maa assume kar rahe hai......
mm: par beta tu date pe jaa raha hai na,,,,,,
m: nahi mein diner pe jaa raha hoon,.,,
mm: wohi to date pe dinner,,,,,,,,,
m: nahi dinner,,,,,,,
mm: date
m: dinner,,
mm: date..
m: dinner,,,
mm: dinner pe date..
m: date pe dinner..........
silence,,
mm: dekha,,,,,,,
m: mein kyu aapse baat kar raha hoon>...........
and he leaves..
mm: koi baat nahi bacchu ,,,,,,,, shaadi ke apprrooval ke liye to mere paas hi aayega na,.,,
mayank was waiting out of nupur's house......
m: yeh nupur bhi na kitni der laga rahi hai............
and he started moving here and dere.......... wen dia cums.......
d: hey bhaiya.....
m: hii dia....... wo tum.....
d: wo kya hai na di aapke saath aaj nahi aa sakti.......
m: kyu,,,,,,, wo thik to hai na......
d: arrey mein to mazaak kar rahi thi...... wo aa rahi hai............ lo aa gyi.....
and nupur came......... she was wearing a damn hot dress........ white color........ it was a mini skirt and a tight top......... with boots.......... red embroydree,,,,,,,,, showing her feminine curves,,,,,,, and high heeled boots........
mayank was looking at her........ gazing her,,,,,,,,, and his jaw dropped,,,,,,,,,,
d: bhaiya mooh band karo....... makkhi ghus jaayegi,.,,
he closes his mouth,,,,,,,,,,
d: ok bye,,,,
she leaves...
m: nupur,,,,,,,,, yur looking......
n: beautiful??
m: no,,
n: awesome???
m: no.......
n: great,,??
m: no.....
n: to mein kya lag rahi hoo?
m: sexy,,,,,,,,,,,,,
now nupur is blushing hard,,,,,,,, all red...... wat did he say,,,,,,,,
m: ab chale......
n: (not able to meet his eyes) hm........
in the car,.......
n: hum kahaa ja rahe hai??
m: umm...... date pe.......
n: kahaa?
m: dinner pe.......
n: mayank.......
m: ab dekho tum ne aise kapde.. (looks at nupur from down to up) pehne hai to................. kisi bade restarant mein hi jaana padega,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
n: shut up mayank........
m: but seriously yur looking hot..........
wen they hear sumthing.....
m: wat was this sound??
mayank takes out his mobile........ it was benji's name written,,,,,,,,,, it was on..... that means benji was hearing everything,,,,,,,
bush,,,,,,,,,
m: hello.............
b: finally bhaiya aapko pata chal gya ki mein aur dia aapki baatein sun rae the,,,,,, (laughing hard)
m: par yeh kese.......
b: wo kya hai na jab aap nikal rahe the to mene aapke mobile pe phone kiya phir uthaaya aur aapke pocket mein daal diya,,,,,,,, (laughing)...........
m: shut up benji,,,,,,,,,
b: but bro.......... aap kitne bade flirt ho aaj pata chala.......... sexy,,,,,,,, hot............
m: good byemmmm'
he cuts the phone,.,,
mayank is fuming in anger,,,,,,,,,,
and nupur is smiling with embarrasment......
m: iss benji ko to mein,,,,,,,,
n: mayank.........
m: chalo,,,,,,,,
they go to the restaurant,,,,,,
their is no body in the restaurant,,,,,,, only mayank and nupur,,,,,,,,,, mayank booked the whole hall.........
have their seat,,,,,,,
m: nupur.......
n: haan...........
m: i love you,,,,
n: i love you too.........
m: to yeh tumhaara gift......
he takes out a necklace....... of diamonds.......... and goes to the back of nupur seat and make her wear that.........
n: mayank iski kya zarurat thi.......
m: sh......... (puts his finger on her lips) ab mera gift.....
now mayank is sitting beside nupur.....
n: wo mein to bhool.........
m: par tum to laayi ho,,,,,,,
n: mein kahaa........
m: ek kiss,,,,,,
nupur blushes,,,,,,,,,
m; accha cheeks pe bas............
n: okk...........
nupur moves forward to his cheeks....... but clever mayank puts his lips in front and accidentally nupur gives a small gentle peck on mayank's lips...........
nupur is blushing like a red tomato..........
wen mayank comes forward and kneels doown.........
with a ring in his hand,,,,,,
m: will you marry me???..........
n: yes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
wen it starts raining heavily,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
it is raining still....
mayur are now sitting in the car as the restraun is closed now..........
n: mayank hum ghar kese jaayeinge???
m: pata nahi.... itni tez baarish mein car nahi drive kar sakte.........
mayank starts the music player,,,,,,,,,,
its playing....... bheege hoth tere....
now it plays,,
bheege hoth tere.....
pyaasa dil mera
lage abr saa...
mujhe tan tera....
mayank and nupur are embarrased....... nupur is blushing again......... mayank is looking in every possible direction except nupur....
kabhi mere saath
koi raat guzaar..
tujhe subah tak mein karoon pyaar.........
mayank switches off the player,,,
now its silence prevailing......
mayank to remove this awkwardness says,,
m: nupur,,,,, hum shaadi ke baad yeh gaana zaroor sunenge.........
and both laugh hrd,.,,,,,
n: par ab hum kya karein........
m: kyu,,, tumhe abhi hi...........
n: shut up mayank,,,,,,,, mera matlab tha ab hum yahaan se nikalne ke liye kya kare??
m: kyu tumhe mere saath accha nahi lag raha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
n: myank..............
m" nupur,,,,,,,,,
n: mayank,.........
m: nupur,,,,,,
n: jaao mein tumse baat nahi kar rahi.......
she turns her face to the direction of the window........
mayank takes a deep breath,,,,,,,,,,,,,
m to himself: ab isse manaana padega.................
mayank moved towards nupur.....
m: tum mujhse naaraz ho,,,,,,,,
n: haan,,,,,,,,,
m: sorry,,,,,,
n: mein tumse baat nahi kar rahi,,,,,,,,'
m: nnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnn nnnnnu uuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuu uuuu uuuuuupp ppppp ppppp pppppp pppuuuuuuuu uu uuu uuuuuu uurrrr rrrrr
nupur understood he was applying her trick.........
n: hehe mayank try sumthing new.......
m: oh really........
he moved closer to her,,,,,,,
m: shall i try something new,,,,,,,,,
n: mayy,,,,
m: oh really................. (moving more closer)
n: i....... i didnot mean.....
m: i m tying sumthing new,,,,,,,,,,,,
tring tring....
mayank's cell rang.......
and mayank had his anger on the top.........
m: hello.... (he shouted)
nupur giggled..
benji: kya bhaiya,,,,,,, mera kaan fat gya.......
m: tune kyu phone kiya??
b: aap ghar nahi pahunche isliye,,,,,,, raat ke dhaai baj rahe hai........
m: benji itni tez baarish o rahi hai......... (he kept the phone on speaker)
n: aur nahi to kya,,,,,,,,, ab aise mein hum gaadi nahi chalaa sakte..........
b: oye hoye,,,,,,,, abhi se bhaiya ki side le rahe ho...... wese mene to yeh kehne ke liye phone kiya tha,,
m: kya kehne ke liye phone kiya??
b: arrey dia wo gaana konsa tha??
n: dia bhi tumhaare saath hai??
b: aur maa bhi.......... by god nuupur dii aap kya kya sochte ho,,,,
m: shut up benji......
d: aur wo gaana tha,,,,,,,, haam.....
then both dia and benji start to sing..
"""" raat ke dhaai baje koi shehnaai baje raaz khulta hi nahi koi to chaabi lage........ han haan.....
m: go to hell...........
he cuts the phone,,,,,,,,,
nupur is laughing and so do mayank......
m: haan to mein kahaan tha???
n: car mein......
n: by god mayank ab chalo baarish ruk gyi hai,,,,,,,
and they go back to their house,,,,
after 1 month,,,
benia are married now....
nupur is walking on the road,,,,,,,,,, coming back from dia's aka mayank's house.......
wen suddenly sumone stops her way.......
its none other than...
RANVIJAY......
rv: hey nupur,,,, pehchaana humme.....
n: let me go ranvijay i dont wanna talk to you.
rv: oh come on ......... hum puraani baatein bhool ke ek nyi shuruaat nhi kar sakte kya,,,,,,,,,,,,
n: nahi,,,,,,
she moves ahead,,,,,,,,,
but he holds her hand,,,,,,
and within a second she slaps him.......
n: just leave me alone.......
rv: aise kese chod dein ,,,,,,,,,, aur tumne humme yeh thappad maar kar bahut badi galti ki hai.........
rv moved his hand forward....... but b4 he cud touch nupur.... a strong hand came in between.....
m: usne koi galti nahi ki hai,,,,, and i m sure usse yeh bahut pehle kar dena chahiye tha,,,,,
n: mayank.....
she goes near him,,,,, and stands behind him and holds his shoulder,,,,,,,,
m: ab tum jaa rahe ho ya,,,,,,
rv: aaj to jaa raha hoon....... par agli baar,,,,,,,,,,,
m: agli baar kabhi nahi aayega.....
rv goes............
n: mayank........
and she hugs her tight,,,,,
and he to hugs her back,,
n: mayank aaj tum nahi aate to..
m: kese nahi aata,,,,,,,,, tumhaare liye mein hoon na humesha,,,,,,,
n: par ab mein kya karoongi....... abhi to tum aa gye par ghar pe.......... uday bhi nahi hai,,,,, aur ab to diya bhi,,,,,, wo phir se aa gya to...
m: shh,,,,,,,, wese tumne usse itna zordaar tamaacha maara hai kamsekam wo helmet pehen ke to aayega.............. tumhe uski shakal nahi dekhni padegi,,,,,,,
n: shut up mayank,,,,,,,,,
m: ab chalo mein tumhe chod deta hoon,,
n: haan,,,,,,,,
mayank brought bike this tym,,,,
nupur was sitting behind,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
wen a breaker came,,,,,,,
and nupur lost her balance and was abt to fall.......... wen mayank stops the bik and holds her,,,
m: nupur,,,,,,, tum pakad ke nahi beth sakti,,
n: pakada to hai,,,,
mayank looks at her,,,,,,,,,
then holds her hand and put them around his waist........ covering his chest,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
and then starts the bike.........
mayank is enjoying the ride while nupur is blushing,,,,,,,,
mayank cud see thru the mirror and smiling...........
wen nupur's house came......
n: andar aao na mayank.......
m: aa raha hoon......
they both enter the house,,,,,,,,,
get seated on the sofa..........
nuzzling next to each other they switch on the tv.........
mayank's hand round nupur's waist........ and nupur's head resting on mayank's shoulder,,,,,,
they watch tv for sumtym wen nupur falls asleep in mayank's arms...........
mayank takes her in his hands........ and takes her to the bedroom............
he settles her on the bed.. covers her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
then he calls his mum.........
m: hello maa........
mm: haan beta.....
m: aapke liys ek gud news hai.....
mm: kya?
m: mein kal shaadi kar raha hoon...........
mm: kya???????? kal......... itni jaldi....
m: haan maa....... aap tayyari kar lena........ aur haan ladi koi aur nahi,,,,
mm: nupur hai,,,,,,,, thik hai beta tu tension mat le........
he cuts the phone........
m to himself: mein tumhe akela nahi chod sakta nupur,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, tum mere saath hi rahogi....... aise dar darr ke nahi.............
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so guys wat do you think....... wat abt this track....... mayur married...... waiting for yur response.... aur nupur iss baat pe kese react karegi????? just wait and watch,,,,, plz comment,,,,, and do press the lyk tab,.......... love you all.... pari................

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Posted: 15 years ago
yipee...... first to comment...........




Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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can't wait for mayur marriage
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome
loved mayur
want to see how nupur will react after hearing this
plz continue soon
thanx for the pm

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