Viddu, that was such a cute scene...welcome to the gang
Loved it..
'Hmmm' to tumhara sabse fav dialog he - 😃 don't we know that - ek din to hum sab pagal ho gaye the is hmmm se 😃
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Viddu, that was such a cute scene...welcome to the gang
Loved it..
'Hmmm' to tumhara sabse fav dialog he - 😃 don't we know that - ek din to hum sab pagal ho gaye the is hmmm se 😃
**FICTION -3 **
BY LIFEZ _BEAUTIFUL
OKK.. nw this is smdng i wrote almst 3 yrs bk 4 smothr charctrs.. bt thot it fits prida.. bt well since it was one of my oldest attempts.. it is mre worse dan the latest ones !😕😆😆 so plzz pardn the nonsense excesiveness n horrible spellings[jus 2 lazy 2 edit !] !! 😕 😕 this is jus a small scne.. a bit Filmy isshstyle.. sowie aint half bit nice as wat othr FAb wrtrs write here.. bt jus thot i wil post it here..😊.. so me rdy 4 all da Fhaate hue jhoothe !! 😕😆
The scene opens... its a beautiful dai outside... its spring time.. all the blooms r in their full glori...
in a sprawling mansion in manali... the stilish n unique house shaped name plate outside read..
Mr.Prithvi saxena & Mrs.Damini Gujral Saxena..
n above this a special golden plaque... simpli read..." our jannat.. u r welcome ..."
this simple name plate jus gives an insight to the ppl who reside in this huge ..posh mansion... In da foot hills of Manali...a beauty so serene n placid.. It was their favourite chill out place.. It was close by 2 da house Prithvi n his bros grew up..Bt since prida dint hv a separate haven of their own, unlike sameer n avni.. N in GM they lived happily wth both their mothers..n varun n roshni..They decided 2 build a love nest of their own in his favourite manali.. They luvd 2 visit da place wen evr they got sm freetym.. Jus 2 spend sm quality ALONE tym wth each othr..
Then as we enter... passing along the aestheticalli arranged rums.. further inside... a secluded rum was there.... it was quite huge... simple white walls... adorned wth nly a few chimes ...... at one side of the room... there was a huge window.... Wch opened into a special private garden...
now the window sill was adroned wth a bed wch fit cozli into that space.... it was adorned wth a simple white bed sheet... mani small pillows... all black colors...
n there ....
we see a smart ...extremeli handsome young man... in a simple white shirt n white tracks... leaning his head on the wall n lying on that bed....... but .. he isnt alone... the is smbodi sitn along wth hm.. leaning the back of her head on his chest...n her bodi leaning entireli on his... his chin was touchin her hair... jus as a small child wud ly leaning on smbdi.... she too was in a white sleeveless top n a simple white cotton pyjamas...
there was innocence in both their eyes... there was an emotion.... a bond... sparkling in their eyes... thei simpli sat there...gazing at the garden outside... the garden... which the ladi of the house wth her belovd.... cherish to luk after... it was their common passion...all the blooms there were like their babies... wch thei caressed n nurtured.. wth utmost dedication n luv...
her haIr jus rubbed on his chin n he was gentli caressing her beautiful lucsious hair...she... she was the most beautiful person ani1 cud have evr seen... her beauti wasnt so physical... but her inner beauti radiated onto her face... which made her luk ...no less than an angel.... her beautiful ...deep black eyes...were one wud get lost in their depths... her sweet pink small lips... which were alwais arched in a smile... her rosy cheeks... Wch wud turn beet red evrytym he caress her... she was an angel in disguise on this blessed earth 4 him..... Our Prithvi..
he gentli caressed her hair.... n was cuddling his damnee like a babi.... her eyes occasionalli lukd at the person above her head... n gave a loving smile... n he returned it n plants a sweet peck on her cheeks... wch turn 4m mild pinkish hue to a deep pink...n raises her head ...turns...n touches his cheeks wth her sweet lips.... wch then moves onto his lips....n thei pour their luv into that passionate kiss...
n ater dat small interlude... thei luk into each others eyes wth passion.... he then simpli smiles..n sez..." damini...i often keep thinking... wat was i dng all those years b4 i met u .. were was i ....wen u were rite here...
i was wandering in darkest deserts of life... wen u were rite here...as my oasis..
why was i lost in the deepest trenches of the oceans... wen u were rite here... as my safest shore....
whi dint i meet u b4 getting lost in the oblivion ... wen u were rite here as my horizon....".... he wud have continued...hi poetic verses... but a tear 4m her eyes...made him melt... he knew those wrent tears of sadness but of love.... saing dat u cud sai ur feelings in these verses... but I dont even hv words...to sai ...wat u mean to me... those eyes were sipmli yelling...... dat .... u r mi soul... there is nthng above u ... nthn beyond... nthn other than u in this whole wide... world ... n nothng wthout u ...in this heart...in this life... forever....n 4ever...
on seeing this he simpli hugs her thightli.... letting his tears fall freeli on her shoulder.... it was an hug which told her ... no ... nt even fate can do us apart.... i will b alwais there 4 u...nt jus 4 nw .. nt jus 4 2mrw... but 4 infinity....
EDIT :
and then it startd drizzling outside.. weather in manali was unpredictable..bt wats life if its predictable.. nw who wud hv evr predicted..a handsome lad 4m manali wud end up wth a beautiful gal in mumbai all by chance ?! or .. was it ?! any1 who knew their story wud agree.. it was PRE DESTINED.. they were meant 2 be wth each other.. they belongd 2 each other n no1 else..evr ..
n there they sat nestled in each others arms gazing outside as the beautiful drops danced their way dwn 2 their beloved earth 2 quench their eternal thirst... jus like their eternal thirst 4 each other.. therz nower else she cud evr b than in his arms..n thers nowerelse he cud find solace expct in her eyes ........
now in the next scene ..
we hear pri shouting 4m the bathroom....to damini... for his bath towel .... Damz who is wearing a black nite suit ..n standing at the balconi... jus gazing at the lawns below... dreamili... hears this n starts to smile.... jus sez to herself .." yeh pri bhi na.....har bar yehi karte hain... par.... n blushes n continues...... par.. mein uski inhi aadon-mein tho hi marthi hoon... n as she smiles n blushes... goes to take his towel 4m his cupboard n come... b4 dat... SHE saw pri..peeping slightli 4m the bathroom hidden behind the door.. shouts mockingli "damnee dear... woh towel ... itni bhi bhari nahi hai... thoda jaldi de do na... mai tho thand se mara jaa raha hoon ...!!!!! "....... Damini after reaching the cupboard.. finds out that.. the towel he usualli uses isnt der... n den she understands that he was jus playin a trick on her... but well...she smiles at his naughtiness n still goes der takn another towel 4m the cupboard.... seeing her smile pri too had understood dat she had found abt his trick... but both knew... thei still wud pretend not to knw... coz fun in life comes 4m such sweet nothings....
she the went der n wth a sweet smile handed it over to him as he was stertching his hand out... wen she kept the towel on his hand he pulled her inside ... she was yelling to leave her... that yell was the one filled wth love..." Pri chiii yeh kya kar rahe ho... main poori gili ho gayi ab...tum bhi na...."'
pri:" arre maine kya kiya... apni khud ki biwi ko ek hug bhi nahi kar saktha... kya zulmi duniya hai ye!!"grinning...
she then ran out of there n he followed her... n caught her again.. she" mujhe chodo na... dekho tumhari towel loose ho rahi hai... mujhe chodo aur usse pakdo !!" she said teasingli.... pri continuing to hold her tightli.." mujhe tho koi problem nahi hai uski loose hone say... mujhe tho sirf tab problem hogi jab tum mujhse loose ho jaogi !!"... winking n laughing ... she the laughed at his witti answer n at the same time managed to come out of his hold which was weakened nw.... or to say he had let her go... she the ran to the door n shouted 4m there.. "main jake ke dress badlke aati hoon..." n on this he told... "this is totalli unfair !! sare gharon mein... ek hi rum-mein miya biwi dono ke kapde ..ek hi cupboard mein hote hain... magar... jus bocoz ye ghar bada hai... sigh... tumhari ek aur seperate room hai aur jab bhi mein tumse romance karne ke liye aata hoon tum wahan baag jathi ho!! not fair !!! ...he was shouting cuteli... jus like a small kid denied of a chocolate n so protesting 4 it...!!
"she laughing 4m the doorside...shaking her head in disbelief.." tumhe tho har time sirf romance hi sujtha hai na...sham ke 5 baje hai..mere sweeto !!... waise bhi iske baad bhi tho hum ek romantic dinner ke liye hi tho jaa rahe hain.... tho mein chali..mere room ko... aur tum na...yehi baitke ke aahein baarthe raho!!...." gave a teasing smile n tuk... off... leaving his eyes fixed on his beautiful ..beloved wife wth an adoring luk... n jus two words came to his lips..." haye haye !!"...a beutiful smile escaping his lips.. he knew.... he jus dotted on her... she was more like a kid n he jus luvd to play few tricks at times wth her...coz these light moments r the true esence of a beautiful n content life.........
Luv NIKi..😊 [ well i m nw rdy 4 jhoothe as promisd b4 !! 😕😆]
PS: thnx Mazz .. 4 ur support ! 🤗