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Posted: 15 years ago
Sneha: Thank u sneha…….. 😃

Achumen : Thanks for liking the FF…. and yeah isn't "hmm" our fav dialogue too ..i land up saying hmm so many times at work also 😉

Muniza: thanks for liking it ..wil try to continue it asap 😃

Jhan: yeah always wanted these 2 in a bike……..wudnt that look really hot 😍 😍
Maz : Thanks a lot maz...... 🤗 n waiting for a new update from u too
Mru: yeah Prida makes u do crazy stuff..imagine crazy stuff and then compels the writer within us to write FF…couldn't resist.. so hd to join the gang ….. 🤗
Happinezz13;(sorry don't know ur name) Thanks a lot yaar.. 😃

Desigirl18 : Yeah I always think Sameer plays the role of cupid well..so how cud I leave him alone 😉
Niki : Our Pri is always cute…… and cares for animals too….. and yeah totally loved ur scene…… 🤗 🤗 Pri in bathroom and getting naughty ………cudnt resist but imagine Pri in a towel……… Haye…
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Niki, what was that ???? 😃

U left me grining ear to ear .......😃

Was good pl continue ...your wedding sequence was left incomplete ....or did you complete it ???

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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Beauty_niki : thnx a lot niki dear ..😳 🤗
yaa.. i was jus sayn Maz.. i wrote it loong tym bk.. i get sm bhoots in b/w.. n dat tym i guess i had dat INTERIOR designing bhoot onto me !! 😆 😆 😆

@ Fatima : aww.. thnx dear 4 liking it !! 😳 😳 n yaa thnx 4 nt thrown Jhoothe at me.. 😉 evn though i knw i desrv it !! 😆...
n yaa.. abt da pri's dialog abt Damz running away 2 anodr rm... i really like dat idea !! 😉 😆 😆

@ Mru jeeeeeeee 🤗🤗🤗.... arrey mru jee.. aapki Amma ??!! aap tho meri Nani hain !!! 😆 😆 😆 aapse bhala mera kya muqabala.. 😳 aapke woh bathrm scne padke tho mein kudh beet red ho gayi thi !! ☺️ ☺️ Hayeeeeeeeee..! aur nxt chapters... arrey i dnt thnk dat will suit prida... 😳😳...Hum tho aapke nxt chapters ke liye har raat wait karthe rehthe hain.. aap hi nahi likthi ...😭 😆



@ Muniza : thnx a lot dear... 😳😳... n yaaa.. me too missing their naughty cute nokh- jonkh !! 😳😳.. dunno wen we wil b able 2 see dat again ! ** sigh **
n abt othr scenes.. wil surely try ma best ! 😳 😳

@ ma honey bunzzzzzzzz !!🤗🤗🤗 hai wer hv u been ??! missing u loads in da forum !! 😳 n thnx a ton 4 ur appreciation dear ! it surely means a lot ! 😳 😳

@ Vidhu : haye dear... u imagining Pri in towl ??!! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️... heehheee..
thnx 4 likn it dear ! 😳😳 .. n plzz.. update urs ASAP ! me waitn 2 knw who is on da bike ??!! 😉

@ Achu : oo.. thnx a lot dear !
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n well its jus a scene dear.. had writn it ages ago.. was da startn scene of anodr FF i wrote 4 LRL.. 😳.. dnt thnk da othr scens will suit our PRIDa ..😳
n oops ! caught ! Thot evry1 wud hv 4gtn !! 😉 😆 yaa.. i hvnt cmpleted "Wedding.." actually the orgnl story has muvd so far.. dat i dnt knw wat 2 write nw ! ma track was totally difrnt.. n in addition 2 dat Im jus plain lazzy 2 write nw !!!!!!! 😕 😕😛.. will do 1 day .. n post it cntinously n finish it off..😳..




NOTE : i hv jus added few lines in B/w.. inBLUE.. plz do chk..😳 😳




-LUV Niki😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Sneha - That was really good! Loved their New Year's start 😃...

@ Vidu - That was awesome! 👏 👏... Loved the naughtyness 😃..

@ Niki - Where were you girl? And why havent I read any of ur other work before now? My mistake.. sorry ☺️.. But its beautiful 👏 👏...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey vidu...just read the part u posted....wow...that was really nice...👏👏👏loved prithvi's naughtyness and damini's jelousy thinking that prithvi gave ride to a gal😉....gud job!!!👍🏼......plzzz..continue soon..will be waiting for the next part😊.
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ NIdzzy : aww..gal thnx a lot 4 ur appreciatin..🤗🤗 really glad u liked it !! nw hw abt a scene 4m u ??!! 😃i m really waitn 2 read mre scenes here !! 😳 wanna lift ma mood 4 da crap they r shwng us ! 😕




@ Radz : thnx dalng !! 🤗..really happy dat u read n liked it ...😳

-LUV Niki
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Posted: 15 years ago
⭐️out of this world⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago

*****FICTION 1 Continued…. VIDUU*****
continued from https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/love-ne-mila-di-jodi/1272343/prida-romantic-scene-thread?pn=105

She drove like nuts like there was no tomorrow.. There was no rule on the rule book of driving which she wud not have broken today. But did she really bother…… Nah…..

Seeing Damini run so hard and start the car……. Prithvi and Sameer who were just standing there chit chatting on Sam's bike shouted :

Prithvi: Damini. Damini…………… Aab isse kya ho gaya hain .. Kaunsa naya bhoot aa gaya hain ,..joh meeting se aise bhag rahi hain……. Wooh bhi yeah speed mein

Sameer: Bhabhi………… Bhabhi. Lagta nahi unhon ne humhe dekha… Lagta hain humhe unka peecha karma hoga……. Chalo bhaiya……..

The Bro's speed their bike behind Damini's car…………
Sameer: Waah bhaiya.. Damini bhabhi toh kya gaadi chalati hain……… aapne kabhi bataya hi nahi……..
Prithvi: Nautanki aab tu yeah sab bandh karega aur bike jara tez chalayega ki nahi.,………

She swayed the car.left rht and center til she cud spot the bike. Had Mr. Mehta seen his Merc getting such a treatment from Damini .. he wud have fainted with shock.

She took a sharp U turn and braked right in front of the bike. The biker applied sudden brake which brought the girl out of her trance to face the dreadful reality in front of her…

Damz to the girl : Neeche utaron……. Kissike bike mein bhi lift leti ho…. ( giving her the stare of a lifetime)
Girl : Excuse me ma'am..he is not ur property….
Damz: Yeah he is……… and u will u mind removing ur helmet…….. Main yahan tumhare liye jagad rahi hun and tum helmet pehne… majje loot rahe ho………..

Damini Damini …She heard someone shout………
Aaab yahan kaun aaya hain mujhe dhoonte hue.. agar yeah Mr. Mehta ne apne Merc ke liye jasoos bheje hain …tu kal unki kheer nahi……….

To her astonishment .It was Prithvi and Sameer……….. She didn't know how to react……..
Damz: Tu…….mmmmmmm…. Yahan kya kare rahe ho……
Pri: Tumhe nahi lagta Damz yeah sawaal mujhe tumse poochna chahiye…. Wanting eagerly to know what she was upto
Damz: Actually na main …….woh……..
Pri: Who kya Damini……….

Sam: (laughing out loud) : Ha ha ..main samjh gaya bhabhi……… Lagta hain aab ko galat faimi ho gayi hain….aab ko laga ki us bike mein Prithvi bhaiyaa……
Damz: Shut up Sam…Isse jyaada kuch mat bolna………

The guy removes his helmet… Its Sam's frnd…Sorry bhabhi meri wajah se….aap logon ke bheech mein itna confusion ho gaya hain,,,,,,wooh baat yeh hain ki… mein aur sameer bhi aab ke peeche peeche aa gaye….. aur wahan aane par prithvi bhaiyya ne meri jacket lauta di.. I'm really sorry bhabhi…….

Damz: Its ok… I am really sorry (she turns towards the girl). Its my fault..shouldnt have said al that stuff……

Prithvi stood there dumbstruck as to what is going on. He needed some time to come to his senses and realize that Damz actually thought that he was on the bike with the girl…… He sjmply cudnt resist smiling.. which increased Damz anger to its peak…

Damz: Ismein bhi tumhari hi galti hain…..
Prithvi:Excuse me…… Galat faimi tumhe hui…… Meeting cancel karke tum aayi ho….Aise speed mein gaadi chalakar tum aayi ho……. Aur blame mujhpar…. Wow so convenient

Sam: Bhaiyya bhabhi…… kya aab hum ghar chale……….. yeah sab baatein hum ghar chalkar bhi kar sakte hain……..Avni mera intezaar kar rahi hogi…….

Damz: Sameer kya tum apne bike mein mujhe ghar pahuncha dooge….. …… ( it was less of a request and more of an order ) aur Prithvi tum Mr. Mehta ki gaadi unhe de aana…..

Damz went along with Sameer towards GM

Prithvi: Waah ……. Aaab is halat mein agar main yeah gaadi Mr. Mehta ko dunga.. toh wooh toh shock mein coma mein hi chale jayenge..Fir maa ke milne ke bahane …unhe bhi dekhna padega……….Tum bhi kya yaad karogi Damini……. Tumhare liye hum yeah bhi kar jayenge

In the meanwhile Damini reaches GM.. She is so agitated with herself and feels she has lost a point to Prithvi
Main jaanti hun aab yeah Prithvi baar baar yeah mujhe yaad karvayega…ki maine aisa kuch kiya………..Iska kuch na kuch karma padega.. taaki main uski moo bandh kar sakun……. Kya karon kya karon

Just then Sameer passes by.
Damz: Arre Sameer bahut busy ho kya…
Sameer: Nahi bhabhi.Kuch kaam tha.
Damz:Haan agar main tumse kuch karne kahun..tumhare Prithvi bhaiya ke against toh kya tum mera saat doge…..
Sameer: Bhaiyya ke against…………( He gave that shocked look to Damz)
Damz: Darro mat…… Sirf aaj ka hisab poora karna hain …….So wil u be on my side
Sam: Jaisa aap kahe bhabhi..Finally koi toh hain joh bhaiyya ko bakra banana mein interested ho………..
She shakes her hand with Sam..Just then Prithvi walks in…….
Suspiciously looking at Sam… yeah kya ho raha hain …… What prank r u upto Sam….
Sam: kuch nahi bhaiyaa…….. Bhabhi Avni ke bare mein pooch rahi thi…..Main chalta hoon……
Damz: Haan mujhe bhi stud farm mein kuch kaam hain. I'll also leave……
The partners in crime..leave the room winking at each other……..

Prithvi: Mujhe pataa karna hi hoga.In dono ka plan kya hain……….

( To be continued)
Do let me know ur views


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Posted: 15 years ago
viduu so good yaar.awesome.👍🏼
liked so much dat damini is jealous n caught red handed by prithvi n sameer.
damini n sameer-partners in crime👏.
wow dats great to see damini n sameer planning 2 make prithvi bakara. very exicted 2 see d next part.
eagerly waiting 4 ur next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Vidu

I think I found a new addiction in this forum......your fan fic....i just love it....so far you have posted only two parts that i have read but i m already hooked...i just cant help but laugh throughout the whole part......its so hilarious how sam is thinking about damini's driving skills while they are chasing her.

I am just loving this fan fic......i really wish you would make the parts longer or even make a separate thread just for your fan fic.

You rock....keep writing yaar!
Edited by Kiran1018 - 15 years ago

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