GOTW: continue the story

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi TherešŸ˜› on behalf of Bandini DT, I am posting the GOTW. Hope you like it.

GOTW: Continue the X-MAS story

It can be hilarious, romantic, crazy sad or angry. You can add one, few words, sentence, a scene or anything with the Mahivanshi. You can switch between the characters or anything. We are the Crestview's here

Example: Entering her bedroom Santu saw
1st person: DM whistling to himself and singing
2nd person: kambaqt ishq, meanwhile
3rd person: Suraj was looking for his parents, not seeing them, he decide to go up
4th person : Santu looked at her hubby, Maalik why are you singing?
and so on

Below is a story and scene with the Mahiyavanshi family in the Christmas spirit courtesy Toral, Suraj and Birwa. DM couldn't refuse the two youngest apple of his eyes especially when they have pouty faces, supported by his Santudi and Baa. Khaddu- Shanky, Megha and Rasik are also visiting, and Motiben is being a Christmas Grinch. Kanji drops in whenever he gets time off from managing the factory.

Scene

From upstairs, standing besides the pillar, DM watched his family, chatting, working and enjoying themselves in the holiday spirit. Jingle bells, jingle bells, jingle all the way, Suraj sang off-key along with the CD-player as he handed the popcorns to Ba and Champakali for the garland that would go around the huge 8ft Christmas tree that Hiten, Shashank and Maulik had brought inside the house. Toral along with Kaddu was making a list of things that needed to be done before Christmas. His friend Rasik and brother-in-law Kanji were talking and laughing about something while untangling the lights from Diwali. Motiben was in the corner grumbling and scowling like a child, as she watched everyone and made faces. "Nanaka, I will not participate in this holiday, as it's not in our culture." Toral and others' faces fell but Kanji stepped in and said:. "Taru you can watch in the corner. Don't listen to your Taru Foi. She is grumpy and sad because she wasn't nice this year, and Santa won't visit her with presents". DM smiled to himself at the way Kanjibbhai dealth with Motiben with humor and firmness.

"Chalo Birwa lets go and get some sweets made" Bapuji said and almost dragged Birwa to the kitchen before Ba could say something. In the kitchen Bapuji is telling the ladies Megha, Birwa and Santo about his childhood memories, as he munched on the warm gingerbread cookies followed by Christmas sugar cookies. "Santu go and give DM his tea and this cookie, while I help Birwa get these snacks out in the living room along with the tea." a smiling Meghna said to her friend. Ji Meghnaben, nodding her head, Santo prepared a tray for her hubby, while the trio exited the kitchen.

DM saw his wife come out from the kitchen holding a tray in her hands while walking up stairs. Suddenly, a mischievious idea formed in his brain and he headed toward his room, quickly before any one saw him.

Entering her bedroom Santu saw...........
Next person Continue the scene with Entering her bedroom Santu saw.........
Happy Story CreatingšŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
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.... a naked man sitting on her bed, clipping his toenails. He looked up and....
Edited by Rakhie_08 - 15 years ago
Piku_S thumbnail
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Santu gasped 😲 and shut her eyes.
Mallika113 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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and DM said " Yay, my priya Santudi, open your eyes!" and then Santu said------
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Santu saw Hades sleeping coz he got tired of waiting for Santu. She then goes to Suraj's room.
(i dun want Hades to get any sugar at all) šŸ˜›
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Posted: 15 years ago
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She saw suraj licking his candy cane, and gave him that parent look.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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But the candy cane was giving Santu ideas. "Hmmm," she thought. "Everybody is eating decorations and sticks."


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PS - thanks Hema for making this the fanfic sticky as well! šŸ¤— I hope everyone posts links to their fanfic here as well. I'm just going to go ahead and re-post what I said on the other link:

To start things off, here's Chalia's post:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bandini/1309260/u-me-and-hum-updated-page-7

And here is Rakhie's post which she has been updating regularly:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bandini/1303670/sanraj-moments-we-wish-for-updated-pg-49

And here is Fuzzy and my idea for a hot new love interest for Santu (relax gopikas - it's just to get DM worked up and realize that Santu isn't his puppet):

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1309260&TPN=3

If you've written something, pls post! šŸ¤—

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Santu grabs some candy canes from the basket and takes them to DM's room and shyly gives him one to eat.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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DM says: Aa shun che? What is this? Why are giving this to me? Can't you see that I am not Suraj but Suraj's father? Saav duffod che.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Santu: Malik, it is sometimes essential to become a child and enjoy oneself. Thats why i gave the candy cane to Suraj's papa and Suraj. So saying, she pops the tip of a candy cane into her mouth and savours it. DM watches her with hunger.

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