love is complicated-a fanfic

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Posted: 19 years ago
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..."I'm going crazy",he thought to himself as he looked out of his glass paned office.there she was talking animatedly into her microphone,her face displaying a no. of emotions at the same time,she put her long finger to the curls in her hair,she was so beautiful,miss parandi.

he was back to reality."she is a complete wierdo",he forced himself to believe, but his heart wouldnt listen.he told himself,"she is not my type"he looked out of the glass again,there she was talking to amy.and thats when it hit him....he had been with thousands of girls,but he had never met anyone like her.she was different..there was something about her that made her so special....and for the first time,he felt emotions he had never felt before...he was lost in a new world...a world with just her...

"you are not in love",he told himself,but he could'nt bring himself to belive it."no!!i'm not in love",he couldnt take another heartbreak,not again..and his mind wandered back to those wonderful times..that face,that was the apple of his eye,that he now wanted to forget....her hands...her beautiful eyes....her pink lips...her jangling anklets...she had such a beautiful name,....

to be continued............................

this is my first ever fanfic,guys..tell me if u liked it and i will continue tomorrow

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Posted: 19 years ago
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very well described....since there's no love on screen for chand-adi....i love the fanfic. please continue.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 u gave a good start ......sharu..........plzz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oooooooooh sharu that was sooooooooo romantic.........hope they really put this scene on india calling in future......... ❤️
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's awesome too good sharu..plz continue!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Seems a very promisable one. Go on!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx a lot for the good responses,guys!!
here's the next part:-
she had such a beautiful, name..............knock!!knock!!..his thoughts were interuppted....."come in",he said,with a look of annoyance on his face,which instantly changed as he saw her standing in the doorway."adi,mujhe 1 din ki chuti chahiye"
speak up!!!,said his brain,but his mouth refused to open.she kept waiting,waiting for his answer."ok",he managed to say.
she said thanxs and turned away to leave,and all of a sudden,as if he had no control over his tongue,he said."wanna have dinner with me??".he wondered where he got the courage from??maybe it was her presence,maybe it was her persona that suddenly put him at ease.
"what??"
"aaa..,i said do you want to have dinner with me??"
"sorry,beeji is not felling well and i want to be with her"
his head grew numb!!he trembled and said..

"oh!!never mind,it was just that i was free today..maybe i'll ask kavita or smita..",trying hard not to give the impression that he was desperate
"sorry",she repeated,with a half-smile on her face.
he sat thinking after she left.."no!just because he had lost in love once,did not mean this is going to be the same.

an odd expression came on his face a look of determinance,a look of a man who had made up his mind.he knew what he wanted and he knew what he had to do.

that night,as beeji sat with her granddaughter for dinner of freashly made alu parathas,they had an unexpected guest,a guest with a small dabba and flowers in his hand.
he handed the flowers to beeji and said............................

to be continued..keep posting ur replies

Edited by sharu16 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow dis is choooooooooooooo lovely
kwel work sharu
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow this is your first time u r writing still it was very well described Sharu.U r very creative re. Great writing 👏 👏 👏 . Plzzz continue 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 very nice sharu .............plzz continue ..i lov this fanfic on adi and chand

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