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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
yeh we loved ur work so far n introducing more charecters would just add on to the fun n dat too varun !!

go ahead sharu im sure we'll love it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry for taking so long,guys.
here's the next part:-
"i have to tell her",he thought to himself
"i have to tell her that i have fallen in love with her"
that flowing skirt,those dark black eyes,mesmerised him.
"thats it!i cant take it anymore"
varun got up and started writing on a piece of paper.
he wanted his note to be amusing as well as sweet.
suddenly today,no words came to his head.
he finally wrote something and pinned the note to her comp.
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chandi found a note on her comp,saying
'i want to talk to u,its very important,meet me in the lunchroom in 2 hrs'
she had a confused look on her face as she took the note and showed it to amy.
"dont worry,chandni,just go and check it out."
"ummm..i will",said chandni"
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he was waiting desperately in the lunchroom,for her to arrive.had she read his note???was she going to come???it would all be cleared soon.......
"c,mon",he thought to himself,"you are'adi',all girls go crazy over u ",trying to boost up his confidence.

the door started to open slowly......."here she is ".adi arranged his hair with his hand and was all set.the door opened.the figure in the doorway looked nervous and shocked...

"VARUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

to be continued..........
i know its very short but i'm a lil busy with my studies right now..but i promise the next part will be longer.
tell me what u thing of this part.

Edited by sharu16 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23

lol, two love stories at the same time, too cool! 👏

Keep writing!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 ..........i dun hope ....adi says his so called dil ki baat to varun in desperation .....great going ! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
ya the ending was quite funny...........two desperate guys facing each other........... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
thanx for the really good replies,guys!!!
i will definately post the new part real soon!!!
sorry for the delay!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
it's really good sharu 👏 !continue asap!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
here's the next part(finally)-
VARUN!!!!!
tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??
hhhhhey dude,tum yah kar rahe ho,yaar..mein to yaha smita se milna aaya hoon!!
adi-aur mein yah....wait a sec..SMITA!!kahin tum aur smita...????
voo..vo...mein usse bahut like karta hoon,yaar!!
man!!are u serious???
the door opens and standing in the doorway is chandni..
hi!,she said.ah..yahaan kya ho raha hai??
adi shocked by her sudden appearance,looks around for a good enough xcuse
aah..varun loves smita!!!
WWWHHAAT!!!-chandni
DUDE!!!U COULDNT SHUT UP??!!-varun
chandi closes the door and stares at varun"is this true?"
varun grins sheepishly at her
"will u help me chandni??after all, she is ur friend"
"off course,i will help u,varun.i think u and smita would be just perfect for each other"

varun was smiling practically all day!!
"i love my life",he thought to himself"chandni is goona help me and soon i will be able to tell smita,how much i love her"
but what was adi doing there???
and why did chandni come there???
comprehension dawned on his face...
was it possible that adi and chand.......????
"i have to ask adi abt this!!"

i know its not soo good but since i havent written for many days,it will take me a lil time to get the story back on track..so plz bear with me.
do tell me how u liked it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u were rite .........it wasn't good ..........
it was excellent !
i luved this particular part ........plzz continue it soon sharu ....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
too good...awesome!plz continue asap sharu! 😛

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