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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey guys I'm back. Still coughing my guts out but can' delay any longer. This is the last part, the end:

Chapter 44

Suddenly Prem gets a phone call, all the family look at him. He looks very intense, when he comes off the phone Prem looks around to Prena and says "Apo*na ka pata lag gayaa"
Prerna looks over the moon.
"Go find her" says Rishab and Prem leaves the place
Prerna turns to Rishab and says "Mr bajaj my sons life is back on track"
Bjaj looks at Prerna and says "nO Prerna our sons life is back on track"
Both Bajaj and Prerna grin.

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Apo*na grins and is happy with her plan. The fools as if she would be caught that easily. She was not stupid like tanisha, and she wouldn't get caught that easily. Apo*na turns the corner and looks down, she grins again, if she was going down then no body would stay, she looks at the body under the sheet and the poison filled injection in her hand, she let out an evil laugh and pulls back the cover. She grins down at Mukti in the blanket. Apo*na was finally going to get her revenge she would kill Mukti. This in turn would kill Prem and Prerna. After everything they went to to get Mukti back. Apo*na was going to get her ultimate revenge and kill Mukti.

She put the injection forward and then we hear a toe curling scream and…Apo*na falls to the fall, she looks back a final time and sees Anurag with a police officer, the police officer had fired and Anurag was looking at her with pity in his eyes.

Everyone in the hall way came running into the room. Prerna and Mr Bajaj looked at each other, what had happened here? Anurag looks up at Bajaj and Prerna and tells them everything- about how he knew Apo*na wouldn't come out till everyone else was around so he had told the doctor to tell everyone that no one was allowed in and the he had sent Prem away.

Anurag had known that Apo*na would definitely come here, but so soon and with a that poison filled injection, he had not known that. The nurse had come and informed him and the police that a dangerous chemical had been stolen from the cupboard and immediately he thought only Apo*na would do such a thing. Then they had mad it to the floor the were too late and Apo*na was ready to strike and so the police man had fired and Apo*na was finally dead.

Prerna lookes at Apo*na's dead body and a tear came streaming down her eyes, Anurag and Baj looked at her as if she was mad and finally Prerna answered "I just can't believe that Apo*na is out of our life for good" Bajaj smiles and puts a hand on Prerna's shoulder and pulls her out of the room. Sam grins atAnurag and gives him a grin. And the nurses come in to take away Apo*na's body.

*****
Prem stands in the same place where Mukti had confessed her love to him, he was at the mandir. He prays for Mukti, and gets frustrated that he still hasn't found Apo*na. Then all of a sudden he gets a call from Anurag "Prem beta you better come to the hospital, something serious has come up" Prem remembers that Mukti is at the hospital and asks "What's happened dad?"
"I can't say" and with that Anurag puts the phone down.

Prem immediately runs down the steos and into his car and drives as fast as he can to the hospital. He gets off the floor that Mukti is on off the elevator and notices that the ward is buzzing, he hears snippets of peoples conversations "Cant believe it", "dead", "Bajaj family."

Prems heart beats faster and he runs to Mukti's room, he slows down as he gets nearer to the door and notices that everyone is in a somber mood.Rishab is standing with his eyes down., Prem asks "what is wrong?" and Rishab doesn't speak, Prem steps into the room and notices Prerna with her eyes down, he looks at the bed and it is empty, he asks "what's wrong? what happened to Mukti?" Prerna doesn't answer. Prem asks again and says "where is Mukti?" Prerna says "Beta actually…."
Prem has tears coming out of his eyes before Prerna can even say anything and then…

The door opens and in the door ways is Sam with a wheelchair and in the wheelchair is Mukti

Prem is so happy to see her and says "God Mukti you scared the life out of me! I thought that you ha…" Mukti grins and says "Nothing is ever going to happen to me, I have you after all. Just you wait and watch when I get better and I'll start walking circles around you as usual," Prem laughs and says "just you try it" He takes hold of the wheelchair and the two of then walk ot of the hospital and into the car to start their new lives.

*****
1 year later
We see that Prem and Mukti are at the hospital again, Prem is tense and so pacing the hallways. Anurag says "Calm down son"
"But how can I dad, Mukti is-"
"Mukti is only pregnant Prem. Billions of women give birth. Don't worry everything will be alright"

Then the doctor walks out and he seems to be tense, Prem walks up to the doctor and says "What happened octor is she alright?"
"Your wife is fine Mr Bajaj, she gave birth to a little girl, but-"
"But what doctor?"
"But I think she had broken my hand, good god does she have a grip" The doctor holds his hand and walks away whilst Prem laughs.
He nurse comes out and says "Mr Prem Bajaj, you can come in to see the baby. One at a time please"

Prem comes in to the room and sees beautiful Mukti holding their daughter he grins and walks over her sits on the bed near them and Mukti hand him his daughter. "So I hear you broke the doctors hand" says Prem, slyly looking at Mukti

Mukti grunts and says "He was a weakling and anyways you men wouldn't know what it's like giving birth"
"And thank god for that" Prem whispers under his breath
"Did you say something?" asks Mukti
"Nothing honey. Just thinking what we should name her. How about Rita…ummm…no Tina…ummm.."
"No Prem I've already thought of a name"
"Really? What then Basanti?!"
"No" says an annoyed Mukti and faces away
"Then what?" asks Prem
"I'm not sure I want to tell you any more" says an adamant Mukti
"Oh come on you have to tell me my daughters name" says Prem
Mukti grins and turns around and says "You mean to says that you haven't even heard the name and ready to let me name her what I want"
"Sure" says Prem kissing Mukti on her head
"Okay then pass Kangana over"
"Hold on, you haven't told me- Kangana, you want to name her Kangana?" says Prem
"Yep, for mama" says Mukti

"Sure" says Prem, then suddenly they hear "Is this my new sister" Prem and Mukti turn to look at the door and see Sameer. They grin and Mukti signals for him to come over.
"Yep this is your new sister Kangana" says Mukti
Sameer looks at the little thing wrapped up in blankets and being the child he is asks "Isn't she hot?"
Prem and Mukti grin than they hear "Nope she's not hot" they turn to look at the door to see who it is.

Sameer jumps off Mukti's lap and runs to Sneha at the door, Sneha picks him up and gives him a kiss on the cheek, behind her Arjun comes in and whispers to her "Hey! I'm your Husband and I never get so many kisses"
Sneha grins and says "Yes but my son is perfect, with that she gives Sameer another kiss"

and that's the story of Prem and Mukti. Their family grew and so did their love.
The End
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Hey guys I hope you liked it. I'm gonna miss writing this fanfic and I'm gonna miss you guys. But don't forget to check out my other fanfic kalled Kya Yeh Ishq hain (3rd link on my signature)

Jerri 😃
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
1 word...... excellent !!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
u did a great job!! i loved ur ff!
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 awsome jerri hun! i just loved your fanfic! soooo sad its over! the ending was great! it was sweet how they named their daughter kangana, and sneha and arjun got married! and finally aps is dead! it was a truely beautiful fanfic! kept us on our toes with all the suspence! so any plans of writing a new p-m fanfic??? lol well i really hope you feel better soon hun! and i will really miss you and your fanfic! good luck with everything! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
thats perfect!!!

i love the ending!! apo*na finaly died!! thank god!!!

awesome and i will miss this fanfic

but ur other one will make up for it.

😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
im going 2 miss ur FF...sniff...sniff...the ending was perfect...glad 2 c tht sameer is still alive
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thnaks guys you guys have been amazing through this fan fic and even with all my computer problems and so on you guys were really patient hope you guys can read my next fanfic and enjoy it. This time it's a fan fic about Angad and Kripa and it's called Kya yeh ishq hain, link provided with my signature, Love ya

Jerri 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
I just read the whole lot! 😳 😳
It was awesome! 👏 !
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Posted: 17 years ago
u r a good writer 👏loved the suspence till the end
nice fanfic
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Prem Mukti ff !!!!👏 Beautifulllllllllll Ending..Love it!!😳
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