My Fanfic:Kangana,pg 58: Death!!!

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This is my own fanfic of prem and mukti, i've done one before of KHNK, but it's my first one of KZK😃. It carries on from where the story is at the moment, Mukti about to get married to Kul and Prem realising that he loves mukti madly😳.

Okay in my version there will be a strange turn of events and includes someone dieing🤢 and some of the inspiration of it came to me from 'Josh' the movie😛 (shah rukh, aishwariya).

As the story continues then the Josh inspired storyline will come in. It's an Ekta style storyline (i even started the drama name will K😆 and the the drama's name is gonna be signicant to the story) and watch out for the next 2 chapters cos prerna and prem are gonna have a showdown, big time. At the moment I'm gonna show the tension between prerna and anurag🤢.

Here's the chapter guide so u guys can easily see which page each chapter is on:
Chapter 1- Page 1
Chapter 2- Page 1
Chapter 3- Page 3
Chapter 4- Page 4
Chapter 5- Page 4
Chapter 6- Page 6
Chapter 7- Page 7
Chapter 8-Page 8
Chapter 9- Page 9
Chapter 10-Page 9
Chapter 11- Page 10
Chapter 12- Page 11
Chapter 13- Page 12
Chapter 14- Page 14
Chapter 15- Page 14
Chapter 16- Page 15
Chapter 17- Page 16
Chapter 18- Page 17
Chapter 19- Page 18
Chapter 20- Page 19
Chapter 21- Page 20
Chapter 22- Page 21
Chapter 23- Page 23
Chapter 24- Page 23
Chapter 25- Page 26
Chapter 26- Page 27
Chapter 27- Page 29
Chapter 28- Page 29
Chapter 29- Page 31
Chapter 30- Page 33
Summary- Page 38
Chapter 31- Page 39
Chapter 32- Page 41
Chapter 33- Page 41
Chapter 34- Page 43
Chapter 35- Page 44
Chapter 36- Page 47
Chapter 37- Page 47
Chapter 38- Page 48
Chapter 39- Page 50
Chapter 40- Page 51
Chapter 41- Page 53
Chapter 42- Page 55
Chapter 43- Page 56
Chapter 44- Page 58

This is my own fanfic of prem and mukti, i've done one before of KHNK, but it's my first one of KZK😃. It carries on from where the story is at the moment, Mukti about to get married to Kul and Prem realising that he loves mukti madly😳.

Okay in my version there will be a strange turn of events and includes someone dieing🤢 and some of the inspiration of it came to me from 'Josh' the movie😛 (shah rukh, aishwariya).

As the story continues then the Josh inspired storyline will come in. It's an Ekta style storyline (i even started the drama name will K😆 and the the drama's name is gonna be signicant to the story) and watch out for the next 2 chapters cos prerna and prem are gonna have a showdown, big time. At the moment I'm gonna show the tension between prerna and anurag🤢. So here goes and hope u guys like the 1st chapter

1st Chapter

So we fast forward to, a couple of days before Kul and Mukti's marriage, even though prem has tried to make mukti realise how much he loves her, Mukti remains quiet and constantly reminds herself that she is doing this marriage so that her choti ma can get her pyaar back, so that Komolika will tell everyone where Bajaj is.

On the other hand prerna and anurag have been fighting head to head for the their childrens khushi. Anurag decides that this is the last time he will warn prerna about this marriage going ahead " Prerna, yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti"

" Yeh shaadi ho kar rahey ki Anurag" Prerna replies
" Tum bhi jaanti ho aur me bhi, ke mukti kush nahin hain. Woh sirf aur sirf Prem ke saat kush rahay sakti hain"
" Woh Kul ke saat kush hain Anurag, who apni zindagi basanay ja rahi hain"
"Prerna tumharay paas to ab koh bahana bhi nahin hain, pehley to Komolika ne kaha ta ke woh jaanti hain ke Mr Bajaj kahan hai. Aur tumney uss ki baat maan li. Legin ab toh humay batah hain ke Komolika chut bol rahi ti!
" Anurag meh yeh sub meray liya nahin kar rahin hoin, meh yeh sab apni bachi ke liyay kar rahin hoin, meri Mukti keh liyeh"
"Legin Prem to tumhara hi beta hain na, aur uss ke saat yeh na insaafi. Prerna yeh humarah akri moka hain. Samcho tum prerna, Prem sudar sakta hain. Abhi bhi waqt hain prerna"
"Anurag woh waqt beet kaya hain" With those last parting words Prerna leaves the room, ignoring Anurag's voice calling out her name again and again.

Prerna thinks to herself 'meh kaisay sab ko bataoh keh, meh yeh sab apnay liyah nahin kar rahin hoin, mein to yeh sab mukti ke liya kar rahin hoin'
Whilst Anurag is still in the hall absorbing everything that Prerna has just told him and thinks to himself 'Meh prem ke pyaar ko zaroor kamyab honay dunga, usay merey jaisah udura pyaar nahin milay ga, Meh usay aur Mukti ko zaroor ek karon ka'

Whilst out in the hall way someone has just heard all of Anurag and Prerna's conversation, they are gobsmacked. The person turns around with tears in their eyes, and the person is…tun tun tah.

Okay hope u guys liked it😃, so who is standing and listening to anu and prerna's conversation?😕 tell me who u think it could be give me ur comments this part was a little boring but i promise the next 2 parts are gonna be rapshik (lol)😆.and guys i realise that some parts are in hindi, if u need help trabnslatin then let me know, And i'll update some promos soon😊

Precap:

Prem gets angry and yells " MERI HONA WALI BIWI ANDAR HAIN, MUJHAIN USAY ABHI DEKNA HAIN!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice fan fic...... continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo 1:

We see prem shouting " MOTHER …INDIA. MEHNEY KAHA TANA AP SEH? Mehney kahan ta, ke meray aur Mukti ke pyaar ke beech na aanah! Mehnay kahan ta ke jo humaray pyaar ke beech aay ga, meh usay nahin choru ga."
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol nice keep it goin....Iam really exicted lol 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgg its awesoomee
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plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's really interestin would luv 2 read da next chapter continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys, thanks for all the comments😃, here's the next part enjoy!

Precap: Whilst out in the hall way someone has just heard all of Anurag and Prerna's conversation, they are gobsmacked😲. The person turns around with tears in their eyes, and the person is….
MUKTI!!!

2nd Chapter

Mukti is at the garden of the hostel and is replaying the whole situation in her head,
Flash back:
Komlika telling Prerna that she knows where Mr Bajaj is and will only tell Prerna about his whereabouts if Prem gets married to Debo and then the scene when anurag and prerna fighting over Prem and Mukti and finally Anurag telling Prerna that Komolika does not know about Mr Bajaj's whereabouts and that Komolika had been lying.
The flashback is going around and around in Mukti's head and then finally she screams" PREM!!!"

Whilst somewhere else in a big mansion, someone wakes up and shouts 'Mukti!'
It's none other than our lover boy Prem (😉). He gets up immediately and flings himself downstairs and into his car all the while his heart is racing and all that he can think about is Mukti, that something has happened to Mukti

Prem reaches the hostel and immediately tries to enter the gate but the watchman tells him that he is not allowed in, it's a girl's hotel and that this is not the time for decent visits. Prem gets angry and yells " MERI HONA WALI BIWI ANDAR HAIN, MUJHAIN USAY ABHI DEKNA HAIN!!!"😆

The watch man gives Prem a strange look and so prem calm's himself down " Actually Mr, andar meri Mukti hain. Aur mujhain abhi issi waqt usay baat karnay pari gi. Bohat zaroori kaam hain, zindagi aur mott ka swaal hain" 😳
The watch man looks up at Prem and realises that it must be important otherwise which person would come here at 12.00 at night "Teek hain, meh uasay laykar ata hoin, tum idar hi rahna"
The watchman goes inside the hostel

As the watchman comes out of the hostel, he shakes his head and says " Nahi saab who toh bapas hi nahin ayi ti"
" what?" says Prem😲
" Hain legin who receptionist keh rahi ti ke unonay Mukti ko kuch waqt pehlay bahar garden me deka ta"

Prem runs around the garden and looks for Mukti, as he sits on the bench thinking to himself 'where can she go?' He looks around and notices a ring on the bench and realises that it is Mukti's engagement ring😔. He gets even more worried and decides to call dad Basu up, then he thinks about Prerna and gets angry😡

Ring, Ring
Ring, Ring
The door bell continues until everyone in the house is wide awake.🥱

"I'm coming!" Anurag shouts and runs down the stair to get the bell thinking 'who can it be? at this hour' 😕
Sam shouts from the stair "be careful Anurag"
Prerna realises that Sam must be worried so comes and stands by Sam

Anurag opens the door and looks outside, he is shocked 😲
The wind in blowing, the rain is coming down fast and suddenly a bolt of lightening. But none of this seems to matter to Prem, who is standing at the door wet from head to toe and a determined look on his face. 😡

"Prem, what are u doing here?" Anurag asks
Prem who looks extremely angry and ready to explode says nothing. He walks in to the house and looks straight at Prerna who is currently at the bottom of the stairs, he continues to walk straight towards her. 😕
What will Prem do???

Hope u guys liked it and trust me wen i say that u definetley have to read the next chapter that i post, because it's probably one of the bast scenes that i've evr written. I'll post that part soon, but for now here's the precap:

Finally Prerna shouts "Nahin pata mujain! NAHIN PATA!!!"Everyone goes quiet
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!your fanfic is absolutely amazing!cant wait for the next part!pls continue sn!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow yaar, you're really professional, it's like i'm watching a movie!
great yaar! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo 2

Mukti saying to prerna"Pyaar to menai Prem se hi kiya hain, Legin…phir Kul ka kya? Uss ka dil toot jay ga"
"Toh phir tu kya karay ki Mukti?" asks Prerna
"........ se shaadi!" Mukti replies

Okay so thats the promo, i know i'm leaving u guys in suspense not telling the name, but u guys can think about it ur selves!!! plus i love leaving ppl in suspense😈 so keep readin the fan fic and trust me there are a lot of twist and turns gonna come
Edited by starcity - 18 years ago

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