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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

At the same time when Sahil who was hiding amongst clothes hearing CID breaks in comes out… Abhi immidiately spots him. Sahil wasn't fine at all… a bullet had hit his arm and he was in pain… however he had a knife in hand and was trying to get Abhi out of the way with it so he can escape… Abhi had to be careful so as to not kill Sahil and yet arrest him…

And so Abhi backs and Sahil was running when Daya comes from behind and catches him… ACP enters the same moment and takes the knife…

In the bureau… Richa is hugging Shruti and sobbing… she points to Sahil… and is trying to say…

Richa – "isne maara… Lata ko… Ragini ko… aur ye mujhe bhi maarna chahta hai…"

ACP – "Sahil kyun maara Lata aur Ragini ko?"

And he doesn't reply and so Daya gives him a dose and then Sahil speaks it all in one go…

Sahil – "main aur Ankit milkar drugs ki dealing karte hain. In sab ameer logoin ki patniyaan hume paise deti thi… aur Ankit ka inse affair bhi tha… par kisi ne in sabko ye sab bata diya.. isiliye inko maarna zaroori tha… Ankit ke aadmi jab khoon ke baare mein baat kar rahe the toh Ragini ne sab record kar liya… ek din usne laundry room ke bahar humare aadmiyoin ki baatein bhi suni.. usse sab pata chal gaya… Ankit yahin kaam karta hai… manager tha Irfan ke naam se… usne Ragini ko maar diya… par Lata ko Ragini ke paas meri ghadi mili… wohh mujhse poochne aayi… wohh pareshaan thi.. maine usse drugs diye.. Ankit pehle usse drugs deta tha.. drugs se nikalne ke liye hi usne ghar chod diya… itne dino baad drugs usse ache lage aur dheere dheere kuch hi din mein wohh drugs ki aadi ho gayi… wohh mere liye sab kuch karti… dhamki bhare phone, khat… sab kuch par phir uska dimaag kharab karne lagi thi ye Richa.. wohh darne lagi thi.. isiliye usse maar diya… aur mujhe darr tha ki Lata ne Richa ko zaroor kuch bataya hoga… isiliye isse maarna hai…"

And Sahil looks angrily at Richa… wohh gets more scared… however Daya sees this and catches Sahil's collar….

ACP – "Daya chodo isse…"

Daya does so…

Lata's parent's – "Sahil tumne ye sab kiya? Hume toh vishwas hi nahi hota.. meri beti ko kyu maara?"

Lavanya and Kaveri take them out…

ACP – "dekha MRS Raichura, aise logoin se milne se kya hota hai?"

She nods and they leave…

ACP – "ab Sahil tum… kya mila itne khoon karke… kuch paiso ke liye tumhe kitne khoon kiye… kya tum Lata ke maa baap ko unki beti lauta sakte ho? Tumhara plan bahut acha tha par Lata ki diary ne sab bigaad diya… usne Ankit ko tumhara dost likh diya aur Ankit bahut pehle hi pakda gaya… ab jail mein tum dono drugs supply ka plan banana…"

Vivek and Freddie takes Sahil away…

ACP – "Shruti aur Richa ko chot lagi hai… inko hospital le jao…"
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

It was late in the evening. Daya and Richa were laughing about something as Shruti and Abhi entered Richa's ward in the hospital. She was perfectly fine now. The doctors had said she could be discharged the next day. It took 2 weeks for Richa to recover and one of the CID officers mostly Daya, had been beside her always to take care of her.

Richa sat up as she saw them coming…

Abhi – "arre tum dono ne hasna kyun band kar diya?"

The nurse entered after them and announced that some papers need to be filled before Richa can be discharged. Abhi accompanied Daya outside. Shruti sat besides Richa…

Shruti – "ghar jaane ke liye tyaar?"

Richa – "ji… "

There was silence… both of them had things to say but none of them knew how to say them…

Richa – "Shruti.. main aap logo ka ehsaan kaise utarungi… aap logoin ne mujhe bilkul apne parivaar ki tarah rakha."

Shruti – "koi ehsaan nahi hai… humne jo kiya wohh humari duty thi.. aur phir kya Daya ki dost humari dost nahi? Waise bhi ab toh tum hum sabki dost ho… sirf Daya ki thodi na…"

Richa – "haan.. main wahan jaakar aap sab ko bahut yaad karungi…"

Shruti – "toh mat jao"

Richa – "kya?"

Shruti – "mat jao…"

Richa – "par main ab Mumbai mein karungi kya? Mera toh yahan koi bhi nahi…"

Shruti – "tumne dhyaan se dekha? shayad koi ho?"

For sometime, everyone gathered at the bureau… afterall kaam bhi karna hota hai Lolzz… Anyways, they were all glad Richa is fine and now she is going back home to her parents. However, Daya was standing alone in a corner having a file in hand but he wasn't reading it.

Lavanya passed him…

Lavanya – "Daya sir kya hua?"

Daya didn't respond… so everyone's attention turned that way… Vivek came over and shook Daya…

Daya – "huh.. kya?"

Vivek – "sir Lavanya ne kuch poocha…"

Daya – "Kya?"

Lavanya – "sir aap theek hain?"

Daya didn't respond… Kaveri came forward…

Kaveri – "Daya sir lagta hai khush nahi hai…"

Vivek – "wohh kyun?"

Kaveri – "aaj Richa ghar chali jaayengi na…"

Daya heard this..

Daya – "Toh? Tum logoin ke paas kuch kaam nahi hai.. wohh karo"

Freddie – "sir aap Richa ji ko bahut miss karoge na… wohh kitni achi friend hain aapki."

Daya – "toh? Naukari chod doon? Dostoin ke saath rahun… CID chod deta hoon…"

Freddie gets scared listening to Daya shout and backs off… everyone sees Abhi and Shruti…

Abhi goes over to Daya.. and pats on Daya's shoulder…

Daya – "Abhijeet main theek hoon… mujhe chod do thodi der ke liye…"

Abhi – "Richa ko –"

Abhi wanted to speak but Daya cut him short…

Daya – "bas bahut ho gaya… kya Richa Richa laga rakha hai? Kaam karo…"

Abhi too went… and Daya turned away pretending to read a file… and then after a few minutes there is another pat on his shoulder… Daya gets really angry and he doesn't even turn but shouts before turning…

Daya – "agar aapko Richa se itna hi pyaar hai toh chale jao uske saath…"

And when Daya turns… all his angry sneaks out.. it was ACP Pradyuman who had patted this time.. oops!!

ACP – "kyun Daya Richa ki baat kaun kar raha hai?"

Daya gets really pissed off and walks out… ACP is confused! Abhi and Shruti explain everything to ACP that Daya likes Richa and so does Richa… ACP gets angry…

ACP – "tum sab yahan milkar Valentines Day mana lo… kaam koi aur kar lega…"

And ACP scolds everyone first but then he has a soft heart for our Daya…

ACP – "par tumhe kaise pata Richa bhi Daya ko pasand karti hai?"

Shruti – "sir wohh main keh rahi hoon na… main aap sab ko kal subah mere ghar pe saabit kar ke dikha dungi…"

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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Richa was brought to Abhi and Shruti's house the next morning. Her things were brought here and nicely packed and she was to leave in 2 hours for her home.


Richa was in her room packing when Shruti comes in with a few wrapped gifts… she silently gives them to Richa…

Richa – "arre ye kya hain?"

Shruti – "kuch nahi…"

Richa – "par iski zaroorat kya hai?"

Shruti – "har cheez ki zaroorat hoti hai kya? Tum itne din humare saath itne pyaar se rahi… ab phir jad hi milenge…"

Richa – "aap log wahan aaoge?"

Shruti – "nahi tum yahan nahi aaogi kya?"

Richa – "yahan kyun?"

And just then Abhi enters…

Abhi – "Shruti kahan ho? Chalo der ho rahi hai… kitna kaam hai…"

Abhi sees Shruti talking to Richa and stops besides her…

Abhi – "koi zaroori baat?"

Shruti – "Abhi Richa ko kisi ne invite nahi kiya?"

Abhi – "kya?"

Richa was really confused and curious now. These people had become her good friends and she liked to get along with them…

Richa – "kis baat ke liye invite?"

Abhi – "Richa waise Daya ko tumhe bulana chahiye… after all hum kaise uske function mein kisi ko bula sakte hain?"

Richa – "Daya ka function?"

Shruti – "haan… Daya ki sagaai hai…"

Richa – "SAGAAI?"

Richa had almost tears in her eyes… her mouth was wide open and she was standing up…

Abhi – "tumhe kya hua?"

Richa realised she reacted too much and so he relaxed herself…

Shruti – "tumhe sach mein nahi pata tha?"

Richa – "nahi mujhe kisi ne nahi bataya…"

Shruti – "chalo koi baat nahi… ab toh pata chal gaya hai na.. ab toh aaogi?"

Richa – "kisse sagaai ho rahi hai?"

Shruti – "Daya ke saath college mein thi.. tum toh jaanti hogi?"

Richa – "naam?"

Abhi – "acha Shruti chalo.. kaam hai…"

Shruti – "aa rahi hoon na…"

Richa – "Shruti uska naam?"

Shruti – "Richa… guestroom mein ek packet hai.. usmein uski tasveer hai.. dekh ho. Theek hai?"

And saying so, Abhi and Shruti rush out of the room… Richa first collapses on the bed shocked and then she too rushes out towards the guest room…

Abhi and Shruti hadnt gone anywhere… they were hiding behind the door and they see Richa run out…

Shruti – "dekha maine kaha tha na… ye Daya se bahut pyaar karti hai…"

Abhi – "kya pata bathroom gayi ho?"

Shruti stares at Abhi in disbelief…

Shruti – "Abhi… wohh guest room ki taraf bathroom kyun jaayegi?"

Abhi – "ye toh usse poocho…"

Shruti – "ABHI!"

Abhi – "acha maan liya… aapko sab pata hai…"

Shruti is smiling… and then she hugs Abhi… Abhi hugs back!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

When Richa enters the guest room, she sees a single small box on the bed wrapped in yellow wrapping paper… she sees no one's around and then tears it open… there wasa cardboard box and she opens it… there was a frame… and she takes it out but instead on it being a photo frame, it was a mirror and Richa saw her own face and on the mirror 'Richa' was written in Daya's hand writing… there was also a paper along and Richa opens it and it reads a sher.. beautiful 4 lines in Daya's handwriting…

"kaash hum unse keh paate ki wohh na jaaye…

Kuch pal hi sahi par ye humare sang ruk jaaye…

Dekhe bina jinhe shaam dhalti nahi…

Unke jaane ke baad hum kahin marr na jaaye"

Richa had a faint tear in her eyes and just then Daya enters the room… he sees Richa there… with HIS POETRY in her hand…

Before Daya could say anything… everyone including ACP gathers behind him… Richa stands up…

Shruti – "kyun Richa… ab toh rukne ka bahana hai na?"

Richa doesn't know what to say…

ACP – "acha chalo sab yahan se… kaam hai bahut… Richa ke parents ko bulana bhi hai aur ab in dono ko bhi baat karne do…"

And then Daya and Richa talk for hours and as we all know they get married but the episode will end when all leave and Daya and Richa look at each other and smile and then Richa comes and slightly hugs Daya…

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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
😲myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwd Shrutiiiiiiiii
its dammmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn goooooooooooooooooood
parte parte dil ka haaal aisa ho raha tha ki woh describe bhi nehi kar paungi
abhi bhi dil zor se dhadka raha hai
ufffffffff totally marvelous,
I was feeing as if I am richa😳😳😳
plssssssss dont mind buddy😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
wowwwwww. n a new begining matlab another story? 😲 😃 yayyyy
jaldi start karo naa diii pls. i wanna read :D nyeah great parts. jus like Suchi Di my heart too is beatin n i m felin k i m richa 😆 naah jus kiddin.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Well I am so glad... I am the only Shruti :P

Well a new beginning will get a new story surely bt rite now it means new start of Daya - Richa :P

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