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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
😛myyyyyyyyyy gawwwwwwwd..its tooooooooo good shruti...
can't wait to read more.😊
as if I am watching eveything infront of my eyes😊😊😊
Daya smiles & leave..
aha..jaise maine use haste huye dekh liya..😳😳
Its totally aweeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssomeeeeeeeee....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks Suchi.. will put more tomorrow.. for now I am mizing 2 scenes together for u to read !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Scene 7
Daya was really stuck! He read the file thouroughly. The file said that Abhi reported a businessman to be at the place of trade but when Daya investigated about it, the businessman was in hospital for over a week. Some 10 days back, two men on bike fired at the man when they failed to get money out of him. There was a proper Police record of the same. But how was this possible.

Daya decided to go to the hospital himself and find out.

He went to the Mala Jeevan Hospital which was owned by a friend of the businessman - Bansilal, the exporter or furniture goods.

Daya entered the hospital and went to the reception. He held out his batch and said - "Main CID Senior Inspector Daya. Mujhe Bansilal ji se baat karni hai. Wohh yahin bharti hain na?"
Receptionist - "ji sir wohh yahin par admit hain par abhi unse milne ki kisi ko permission nahi hai. Par main aapko unki family se milwa deti hoon. Ek minute... Suno ward boy"

The receptionists calls a wardboy who was passing by...

Receptionist - "ye CID officer hain. Inhe Bansilal ji ki family se milna hai. Inhe unke paas le jao."

The ward boy nods and walks away. Daya says 'thanks' to the receptionists and follows. It was quite early and so there wasnt much rush in the hospital. There were only the attendants of the patients admitted and some staff around. The attendant led Daya through long corridors and passing many wards. Daya was looking around when he saw a woman inside a room through the corner of his eye... she looked familiar and somehow he couldnt help concentrating on her...

She was muttering something which he could faintly hear like "maara... wahan... goli... Abhijeet"
The last word rang a bell... Daya stopped outside the room and opened the curtain... Shruti lay there unconciously speaking...

Daya rushed inside. Shruti was there, safe but not in senses. The wardboy came inside with Daya..

Wardboy - "sir, yahan nahi. Aage hai room."
Daya - "ye kaun hai?"
Wardboy - "pata nahi sir."
Daya - "sister ko bulao."

The ward boy went and came a lil while later with a sister...

Daya - "sister ye kaun hai?"
Sister - "sir pata nahi. Inke saath koi nahi hai."
Daya - "kya hua inhe?"
Sister - "chloroform ki overdose ho gayi hai. 2 din se behosh hain. Kisi Abhijeet ko baar baar yaad kar rahi hain. Shayad kisi hamle mein zakhmi ho gayi hain. Kya aap inhe jaante hain?"
Daya - "haan. Ye mere saath kaam karti hain. Inka jo bhi bill hai le aao. Inka yahan se jaana zaroori hai."
Sister - "par sir ye abhi theek nahi hain. Aap yahan se inhe aise hi nahi le jaa sakte. Iska police case banega."
Daya - "sister aap saare bills banwayiye. Inka yahan se jaana bahut zaroori hai. Inka ilaaj hum ache se karwayenge. Aur Police report ke liye, CID bureau se letter aa jaayega."

The sister and the wardboy went and did as Daya asked. Daya immidiately called ACP and told her that he found Shruti and that ACP should fax the required documents to the hospital for her to be out of here immidiately.
ACP was glad that Daya found Shruti and faxed the papers.

Meanwhile, Daya went to Shruti and sprinkled some water on her face... and called her name.. Only after a few attempts, Shruti gained conscious...

Shruti - "Daya... Abhijeet kahan hai?"
Daya - "Shruti aap aaram karo..."
Shruti - "Abhijeet doosri taraf se fire kar rahe the. Maine bhi 2 - 3 logoin par fire kiya par koi peeche see aaya aur mere sir par zor se maara. Uske baad mujhe kuch yaad nahi... Jab hosh aaya, toh yahan par thi... aur mere haath mein glucose ki bottle laga rakhi thi. Jab glucose chadta toh mujhe neend aa jaati. Ye log mujhe behoshi ki dava de rahe hain."
Daya - "Shruti aap pareshan mat ho. Ab aap theek ho. Dr. Tarika aapko lene aa rahi hain aur wohh yakinan aapka bahut dhyaan rakhengi."

Shruti still wanted to ask about Abhijeet but Daya asked her not to take tension now.

Soon the sister returned with the bills. The fax had come and so everything was clear. He paid whatever the amount was and then the sister asked him to take the undertaking.

Sister - "sir, aap inke kya hain? Agar aap relative nahi hain toh aap inhe nahi leja sakte."
Daya - "chinta mat kariye..."

Shruti smiled from behind and completed the sentence...

Shruti - "ye mere bhai hain."


Scene 8
Abhijeet searched the whole hospital but he couldnt find a clue about Shruti. He needed to find her at all costs but how... He walked past a ward when a sister called to him... at first he didnt respond for he was not habitual of being addressed as a wardboy but then he realised that he was disguised.
He went... The sister gave him a wheel chair to be taken for a lady who was taken out of here now. Abhi was anything but interested. He delivered the chair outside the room and then was sent to fetch clean bedsheets...

When he came back, a man in black was wheeling a lady on the wheel chair out of the room. Abhi went inside to clean the room... nothing in the room really bothered him. He wanted to clean fast enough and be out. At a real fast speed, he changed the bedsheet and threw the dirt... and then he found a ring, a chain and a pair or earrings. He picked them up for they couldnt be thrown in trash and was going to deposit them... on the way, he was just playing with the ring when he noticed something...

he looked at the ring carefully and yes, it was the very same ring that he had given Shruti for their wedding. Also the chain and the earrings belonged to Shruti...
Abhi pocketed these and realised that the lady who just went was Shruti... he ran after her to stop her but he saw a big black car go... the car belonged to CID and now he was sure that Shruti was safe. Now he could simply concentrate on the case.


Scene 9
Freddie - "dekh Vivek mujhse behas mat kar. Ab main incharge hoon."
Vivek - "Freddie sir maine kab mana kiya. Par aapko nahi lagta hume wahan jaana chahiye."
Freddie - "maine mana kiya na."
Lavanya - "par sir aap is slide par kyun nahi jaana chahte?"
Freddie - "nahi.. wahan khatra hai."

Just then ACP comes...

ACP - "haan kya hua?"
Vivek - "sir Freddie sir slide par jaane ko mana kar rahe hain."
ACP - "kyun Freddie?"
Freddie - "sir mujhe lagta hai ki uspar jaane se maut hui hai."
Vivek - "kya Freddie sir, Raj bhi toh Simran ke saath tha jhoole par. Usse toh kuch nahi hua."
ACP - "nahi Vivek... mujhe lag raha hai Freddie ne sahi kaha."

Freddie is himself surprised that he said the correct thing... Just then Freddie gets a call... he answers it..

ACP - "haan Daya. Bahut Acha.. haan tum dono ruko wahin, hum aa rahe hain."

And then ACP asks them all to leave for bureau...


Scene 10
Daya and Shruti are there in the bureau when all others come there.

ACP - "Tum theek ho Shruti?"
Shruti - "ji sir."
ACP - "Excellant. Vivek zara wohh video recording dena jo us aadmi ne diya tha."

Vivek plays it. And when it comes to the scene where Simran shouts, ACP asks to rewind and play it slowly...
And when they do, and focus it.. they see that a pin came from somewhere which hit Simran and caused her to scream.

ACP - "aajkal Freddie ki baatein badi sahi nikalne lagi hain. Kya baat hai Freddie?"

No one speaks anything.

ACP - "Vivek, tum jaakar Dr. Saluke se is pin ke baare mein pata ko. Shruti, tum aur Lavanya Simran ke parents ko bulakar unse pooch taach karo. Saath mein baki teen baccho aur unke mata - pita ko bhi bula lo. Freddie tum Kaveri ke saath jaakar wahan jhoole ke paas dhoondhoin kahan se pin aayi... aur Daya zara chalo saath mein."

ACP walks to his cabin and others set to do their jobs.. Daya follows ACP inside and Shruti is the only one who sees them go inside and follows them.

ACP - "Daya kya pata chala?"
Daya - "sir main jaise hi hospital pahuncha, Shruti dikh gayi, toh mujhe laga ki pehle inhe wahan se nikalna zaroori hai. Shruti ki baat sunkar laga ki unhe koi samay samay par neend ki dawai de raha tha. Zaroor Shruti ne kuch dekha hoga jiska unhe darr ho."
Shruti - "sir main andar aa jaaun?"
ACP - "haan Shruti aao. Daya tum jao aur mujhe batate rehna kya pata chala."
Shruti - "sir main bhi jaana chahti hoon. Abhijeet musibat mein hain toh main unki madad karna chahti hoon."
ACP - "Shruti suno. Jis tarah tumhe Abhijeet ki parwah hai, usse bhi tumhari hai. Wohh nahi chahega ki tum musibat mein pado. Mujhe mere officer par poora bharosa hai, wohh apna khayal rakh sakta hai. Aur madad ke liye main Daya ko bhej raha hoon na. Agar Abhijeet ko pata chalega ki tum khatre mein ho, toh wohh apna dhyaan kaise rakh paayega?"
Daya - "Shruti aap pareshan mat ho. Main Abhijeet ko bilkul theek le aayunga."
Shruti - "Maine kab kaha ki aap Abhijeet ka dhyaan nahi rakh sakte. Bas main bhi jaana chahti thi par kabhi kabar duty karni chahiye."

She laughed saying so and ACP and Daya smiled.

Shruti went and joined Lavanya in calling the people to the bureau and Daya went away...

Scene 11
Abhijeet wondered what he would do next as he carried helped a patient out of the lift. ABhijeet thought of a plan - he would be here as a ward boy and try to get at the businessman. He had surely seen him there during the drug deal then how could he be there in the Hospital for days?
Abhi preferred to help people critically ill as the businessman was there in VIP ward with lots of security and the only way to get there was as a member of staff. So here he was, helping people into their rooms.

As Abhi passes the businessman's room, he heard some shouting inside... someone was really loud for Abhi could he him clearly outside.

Man - "Kya? Kisne us ladki ko jaane diya? Tum sab bewakoof ho... Us ladki ne apna muh khol diya, toh hum sab musibat mein aa jaayenge. Jaante ho kaun thi woh?.."

Abhi couldnt hear more as he had to keep moving..
While going back, he wished some miracle would happen and he could go inside the business man's room and a miracle did happen. Someone from inside asked the guard outside to call a wardboy... they called Abhi and he went inside rather glad!

Abhi - "ji"

The businessman looked perfectly fine. The owner of the hospital - Vijay Singh, was also there. Both looked rather furious. 2 women were also there in the room. One of them came towards Abhi. She looked older like the businessman's wife..

Wife - "wohh doosre wardboy kahan hai?"
Abhi - "pata nahi ji. Shayad wohh kisi patient ko lekar gaya hai."
Vijay Singh - "acha tum, jao khane ke liye kuch lekar aao aur Nihal se kaho us CID officer ko lekar aaye."

Abhi nodded and left. As he was once out of sight, he gave a sigh in relief but before long, one of the guards waiting outside the room, joined him. Abhi seized his chance and grew friendly with the guard. He pretended to be one of the wardboys knowing everything and it was quite easy to get things out of the guard.

The guard told Abhi that ofcourse the businessman wasnt in hospital for long. Indeed the CID officer's wife who escaped from the hospital had injured him during the firing. He and Vijay Singh are equal partners in the drug deals. During that particular deal, Vijay SIngh was stuck in some work and so was late. When he arrived to the scene, the bullets were already firing. He saw the officer's wife shout for her husband and then fire at the businessman. Vijay SIngh, saw this and attacked her. He thought that he had seen her when he hit her head with a rod.

As they couldnt find the officer, they announced before leaving that they were taking to some building though they didnt tell that its the hospital's basement. They told a map by which he would enter through backdoor and would never figure that he was in the hospital.

Now the things were clearing in his mind. Abhi had known all he should have about what was happening. All he now needed to do was collect proper evidence and ofcourse call at the bureau. He hadnt even once called at his office in days and he knew that they were looking. He also wanted to warn Shruti that she was in danger.

Abhi thanked the guard for the story and then left to take the lunch. Nearly some 15 minutes later, as Abhi came out of the businessman's room serving him lunch, he saw Daya coming with another wardboy. Abhi tried his best to catch Daya's attention but Daya was busy trying to get something out of the wardboy's mouth. The wardboy was however mixed with the people and simply refused to speak anything... he was however surprised to see Abhi there. He knew all the staff of the hospital then who was this and what was he doing here?

Wardboy - "tum kaun ho?"
Abhi - "kya?"

Before the wardboy could speak anything, the guards outside the room asked them all to disperse and not make sounds so as to let the patient rest. Daya looked back at the wardboy who had come out of Businessman's room and he noticed that he was wearing Abhi's wedding ring... this was ABhi then!

Daya rushed to catch up and was just in time to be in lift with him. But the other wardboy was somewhere clever and came rushing too. Daya didnt care for this wardboy...

Daya - "Abhijeet?"

Before Abhi could say anything...

Wardboy - "mujhe pata tha tum yahan ke nahi ho. Main bataunga.."
Daya - "bataoge tab na jab batane layak rahoge..."

Before the lift came to a halt at the ground floor (from the 5th floor) Daya and Abhi were aiming a gun each at the man and asked him to walk quietly. He already had had Daya's dose to disobey.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
😛 Shruti..tumne isbaar quite long update kiya hai.phir bhi aisa lagta hai..ke bas parte hi chala jau😃
ittttsssssssssssssssss toooooooooooooo good😃
have read thrice....phir bhi lag raha hai aur paru😃
U have some awesome magnificent talent within you
You are a perfect writer😃
hats off to you..😃😃😃
waiting eagerly for the next update😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okie.. before anything else I post... this is hell important for all CID forum members to read -
DID you ppl chk the episode aired last friday (10 - 4 - 2009)??? If you did and if you havent please see the vid provided by Nipun...
Okie then, what I want to show you all is - there in the show, a person from the crowd hands in his cell to show the pic he took of Melina (the gal who died).. and in the story which I wrote .. I wrote something similar that a man happened to be recording the slide on which the gal died at the exact time when the gal died...
so do you see it??
There are just 2 possiblities -
1. The CID writers chk IF
2. Me and the CID writer have joint brains..
and this means only 2 things -
1. Either of the 2 possiblies above just say that I will need to keep thinking more about CID so as to get more ideas so that they can chk the ideas from here or get the same ideas
2. CID is impoving..
Guys, dont you see it??
All our voices are heard -
we said Daya luks shit in that 2 piece and he was serious and stuff and see nowdays Daya is good as gold... not that he wasnt before!!
And then, we all were angry with Shruti for abandoning Abhi and then Abhi finds Tarika.. I mean this isnt coincidence...
And then Freddie thing.. Freddie was getting bore and this time it was a change...
last but not the least..
we say that officers are reducing and we got a new takloo haha
and not to forget clothes - did u guys notice.. the CID officers are now wearing good quality clothes.. and they do look handsome too!!
Anyways, all I mean is that either they come to the forum or they can read our minds..
in either cases.. we need to think more and good about CID and keep our fingers cross and guess what I have a feeling that they will listen!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Scene 12
Everyone in the CID bureau were watching the video tape they had taken from the person Kamal from the adventure park.

ACP - "haan bas Vivek, ab dheere chalana, dekho, wohh wahan ussi jhoole par toh Simran ki maut hui."

And what CID sees shocks them all... They zoom to see it again.. when Simran is at the swing, she suddenly, holds her neck where there was a needle struck.. and so somebody at the adventure park must have planned Simran's murder.
As CID discuss this, Daya and Abhi return.

Freddie - "Dekho, Abhijeet sir aur Daya sir aa gaye."

Everyone goes and meets Abhi...
ACP welcomes him...

ACP - "tum theek toh ho na ABhijeet?"
Abhi - "ji sir."

And then ACP sees Abhi's eyes going past ACP into the very back of the room, where Shruti is standing. Everyone turns to see... Shruti didnt come to meet Abhi. She stood where she was smiling to see Abhi and Abhi couldnt help smiling back.

Five minutes later,
Shruti and Abhi sat in the canteen talking over coffee.

Abhi - "tum theek ho."

Shruti didnt say anyting, just nodded.

Abhi - "kya hua?"
Shruti - "kuch nahi."
Abhi - "kuch bologi nahi?"
Shruti - "kya?"
Abhi - "arre hamesha toh kitna bolti ho. Ab itni chup kyun ho?"

Shruti shook her head...

Abhi - "Coffee pasand nahi aayi kya? Bhaiya kaisi Coffee - "

Before Abhi could scold the person there for a bad coffee, Shruti raised her eyebrow and he stopped and laughed..

Abhi - "toh phir bolo."
Shruti - "ek vaada karoge?"
Abhi - "ek? Aur shaadi ke time jo saath vaade kiye the?"
Shruti - "Abhijeet?"
Abhi - "acha ab aur mazaak nahi. Bolo. Tumhari koi baat taali hai jo ab nahi manunga?"
Shruti - "agli baar kahin bhi jaoge, main saath chalungi."
Abhi - "Shruti tumhe toh nahi samjhane ki zaroorat na. Humari job mein in sab ke liye time nahi hai aur tum jaanti ho ye. Personal aur Professional life ko mix nahi karte."
Shruti - "jaanti hoon par isse pehle main itna kabhi nahi dari."

Shruti had a tear in her eye by now.. Abhi couldnt see that (so sweet) and so he got up (he sat opposite her) and went to sit beside her..

Abhi - "CID officer hokar darna? Kyun darti ho?"

Shruti didnt speak...

Abhi - "Arre bhai kahan jaunga? Chalo wada hum apni 60th anniversary cruise par manayenge. Tab tak hamesha tumhare saath rahunga."
Shruti - "aur uske baad?"
Abhi - "kamaal ki ladki ho. Tab tak saath ho, iska kuch nahi, uske baad ki zyada chinta hai"

Shruti had wet eyes but now she wasnt crying. Instead she was looking at Abhi, smiling through wet eyes. She raised her eyebrows for him to tell her what was on his mind...

Abhi - "well theek hai. Uske baad cruise pe kisi happening bandi ke saath bhaag jaunga."

Abhi laughed saying so and Shruti kind of was beating him with fists but that was very playful and just then Abhi's cell rang... break over and they had to be back at work.


Scene 13
CID was at Simran's home. Simran's parents, Raj, Ishaan and Tanvi were also there.

Simran's mom - "kuch pata chala ACP sir?"
Tanvi - "aapne hum sab ko yahan kyun bulaya hai?"
ACP - "pata chal jaayega sabko. Simran ki maut zeher ki wajah se hui hai. Koi usse roz zeher de raha tha."
Simran's mom - "Kya?"
ACP - "ji. Kya hum Simran ke kamre ki talaashi le sakte hain?"
Simran's dad - "zaroor."

And CID searches her room. They find nothing specific.. meanwhile Daya and Shruti are talking to Raj, Ishaan and Tanvi.

Daya - "dhyaan se, soch kar batana, Simran ki kisi se dushmani thi? Koi ladai hui ho?"
Raj - "nahi sir. Simran ko toh sab bahut pasand karte the. Mazaak mein kabhi kuch keh de toh baat alag hai, par warna toh sab uske saath ache se rehte the."
Shruti - "college mein koi baat hui ho? kisi se jhagda? Ya Kisi Professor se?"
Tanvi - "nahi maam. Tanvi toh bahut seedhi ladki thi."
Daya - "seedhi ladkiyoin ka yahin kahin khoon toh nahi hota rehta. Uska hua hai toh zaroor koi baat hogi."

Just then Vivek comes to ACP who is talking to Simran's parents.

Vivek - "sir room mein ye kuch magazines hain."
ACP - "kaisi magazines?"
Vivek - "sir college ki annual magazines hain.."
ACP - "dekho toh inmein kya hai..."
Vivek - "sir in magazines mein se ek ke kuch page phate hain..."
ACP - "dikhao"

Vivek shows the pages.. only the heading of the first page torn was seen, and it looked like the rest of the article is torn.. the heading the the page which was torn said "Simran .." (there was more to heading)

Simran's mother - "Ye toh Simran ka article hai"
ACP - "kya tha is article mein?"
Simran's dad - "Simran magazine ke editorial mein kaam karti thi. Ek din usne aur Raj ne, kuch ladko ko ek ladki ko tang karte dekha... wahan Simran ne college ke teacher ko bula liya, jinse darr kar wohh ladke bhag gaye... uske baad Simran aur Raj ne ye article diya, jismein unhone un chaaro ladko ke naam diye. In ladko ke khilaf college ne action liya aur chaaro ko resticate kar diya. Inke khilaf Police complain bhi hai."
ACP - "Raj..."

Raj comes..

ACP - "Raj is article ke baare mein kya jaante ho?"

Raj tells all the same.. he tells that the four boys were Nakul, Vicky, Siddharth and Karan... all 4 of them have now left the city...

Just thn Abhi calls ACP...

ACP - "haan Abhijeet bolo... kya.. acha.. usse pakad ke rakho... hum abhi aa rahe hain."

then to his team..

ACP - "lagta hai ab khooni pakda gaya. Vivek tum Raj ka statement le lo. Hum log zara amusement part jaa rahe hain. Abhijeet or Freddie ko wahan koi mila hai."


Scene 14
In the amusement part...

Freddie and Abhi are with a man.. he looks like a mechanic. He is scared and stuff... Just then ACP and others enter...

ACP - "haan Abhijeet, batao kya mila?"
Freddie - "sir aap humesha Abhijeet sir ko hi kyun poochte ho? Aaj maine isse pakda.."

ACP raises and eyebrow towards Abhi..

Abhi - "haan sir, aaj toh Freddie ne hi pakda isse..."
ACP - "arre wah Freddie... toh chalo tum batao kaise pakda."

Freddie gets tensed..

Freddie - "sir wohh hum dekh rahe the ki pin kahan se aayi.. aur phir.. Abhijeet sir aap bolo na. Har waqt saara kaam main kyun karun? isse pakda na. Kahani Abhijeet sir sunayenge.."
ACP - "Abhijeet chalo tum hi batao.."
Abhi - "sir, iss pole ke upar machine chupa ke rakhi hai.. jab humne yahan kaam karne wale sabhi logoin ko bulaya.. toh ye bhagne laga.."
ACP - "haanji.. ab aap sach ka raag sunayenge.."
Man - "saab maine kuch nahi kiya.. main bekasoor hoon"
ACP - "nahi nahi.. doosra wala sach.."
Abhi - "dekho seedhe tareeke se bolo warna... "
Man - "saab maine ye khud nahi kiya.. ek ladki aayi thi.. usne ye machine dee aur 5000 rupye diye. Kaha ki machine ka muh udhar kar ke laga do taki kisi ko dikhe na. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki wohh ladki khoon karegi."
ACP - "dikhti kaisi thi wohh ladki?"
Man - "pata nahi saab.. maine dekha nahi usko. Wohh burkha pehen ke aayi thi"
ACP - "yahan aayi thi?"
Man - "ji saab. Pichle hafte mangalwar ko aayi thi. Main kaam khatam kar shaam ko ghar ke liye nikal raha tha toh ek lambi gadi mein aayi aur mujhe bulaya..."
ACP - "mangalwar.. aur Simran ki maut hui shukravaar ko. Yani ki machine roz nahi chalti... ye zaroor remote se chalti hai aur wohh ladki Simran ke saath yahan aayi thi... koi Simran ka peecha kar raha tha.. acha gadi ka number yaad hai?"
Man - "nahi saab.."
ACP - "gadi ke baare mein kuch toh yaad hoga... kuch bhi.."
Man - "haan saab.. sunhere rang ki gadi thi.. lambi.. aur uspar ek bichchoo bana tha.. darwaze par."
ACP - "very good... Freddie pata karo shehar mein aisi kitni gadiyaan hai. Unke maliko ko bulao.."

Just thn Daya gets a call...

Daya picks up... "Hello.. haan.. mil gaya.. badiya hai.. nahi.. aa rahe hain.. ruk wahi tu."

Daya goes to ACP..

Daya - "sir aaj wakai bada acha din hai. Us compounder Heera ne kafi kuch ugal diya.. agar samay se pahunch gaye toh Hospital mein raid kar bahutoin ko pakad sakte hain."
ACP - "phir ruke kyun ho? Chalo.. aur wahan Police ko bhi keh do aane ko."

Scene 15

CID is outside the hospital..

Abhi - "Daya main aage jaata hoon, tum cover karo."
ACP - "nahi Abhijeet... unhone tumhe dekha hai... Vivek tum jao, Police tumhe cover karegi.. aur Abhijeet tum aur Shruti jao undergorund godown mein. Jo milta hai, pakad lo. Daya aur main dekhte hain kitne akhbaar ke chehre hum daboch sakte hain."

And all this happens..

Vivek enters the hospital and runs to the lift with 5 - 10 cops and they go to the third floor..

Abhi and Shruti have their guns out and along with 4 - 5 cops they run the length of the corridor and are back in front of the door of the godown...

ACP goes to the reception and gives instructions..
ACP - "koi bahar nahi jaayega. Hospital ka kaam jaise chal raha hai chalne do"
Sister - "par sir aap log kaun hain?"
ACP - "hum CID se hain.. sister yahan ek bahut khatarnaak khooni bhaag kar chupa hai. Par aap log dare nahi. Hum usse zaroor pakad lenge. Acha abhi aap apne register dikhayiye.. kaun kaun admit hai yahan? Daya Vivek se bluetooth par bane rehne.."
Daya - "ji sir.."

Vivek and the other cops exit the lift at the top floor all guns out.. some staff there is running here and there in hurry, they see CID and panic.. the cops catch them immidiately and then the rest of them moves towards the door.. Vivek keeps one hand on the door...

Abhi and Shruti open the door with a bang.. the room is no longer like Abhi remembered it.. it was well lit.. and the back door was open.. back door was big enough to allow a truck in and a truck was indeed there.. and a couple of people were hurried moving things in it... The cops catch them.. while Abhi talks on phone..

Abhi - "Daya.. suno yahan ye log samaan truck mein bhar ke le jaa rahe hain. Bahar Kaveri aur Lavanya se kaho pakde inhe.."

Daya - "theek hai Abhijeet.. ab tum Vivek ko cover do."
Daya - "sir wahan packing chal rahi thi.. Abhijeet ne pakda hai.."
ACP - "good..."

just then a guy comes running.. not running but walking too fast.. he is in good suit but looks too scared and wants to exit.. Daya stops him..

Man - "ye kya battameezi hai.. jante nahi main kaun hoon?"
ACP - "Kya battameezi hai Daya? Tum jaante nahi ye Bansilal ji hai... humare shehar ke jaane maane exporter... kya nahi export karte ye, aur tumne inka raasta roka?"
Bansilal - "ACP ji aap? Ye aapka aadmi hai?"
ACP - "ji nahi ye CID officer hai... par abhi tak seekha nahi.. kyun Daya?"
Daya - "sir aise logoin ke liye ek hi jagah hai.. Jail.."

And Daya gives a tight slap...

Vivek enters the room with lots of cops..
Vivek - "jo jahan hai wahin ruk jao. Hum CID se hain. Aap sab ko arrest kiya jaata hai.. hilna mat.."

one man still tries being brave and looks at the window and moves towards it and Vivek actually shoots at his knee and he falls.. there is panic in room but before anyone could realise it, Abhi has also joined the mess and the cops arrest all.. the man hurt is caught by Abhi...

Abhi - "Vivek pehchante ho inhe?"
Vivek - "nahi sir.. kaun hain ye?"
Abhi - "Vivek tum inhe nahi pehchaante? Ye hai Dr Singh.. iss hospital ke aur isme ho rahe sabhi kamo ke malik..."

Abhi and Vivek drag the doctor outside...

Scene 15
Outside the hospital, the Police has arrested all people they found suspecious.. now only the inspector, CID and the 2 main culprits where left and CID was talking to them...

ACP - "bolo.."
Bansilal - "ye sab iss Singh ki wajah se hua hai..."
Singh - "meri wajah se? Maine kaha tha kya ki business expand karte hain.. ye sab tere gande irado ki wajah se hua hai.."
ACP - "aap dono aapas mein bahas karna chod kar sach bologe.."

They both stare at each other and are quiet...

Daya - "bolte ho warna..."
Abhi - "ruko Daya.. main batata hoon... Singh sahab apne aspatal ke mareezo ki kidney nikaal kar usse bech dete the. Ek din inke dost Bansilal ji ne bataya ki kidney export karne mein zyada paisa hai. Toh dono ne kidney export firm kholi... kuch din baad inhe aur achi cheezein milne lagi export ke liye - gareeb ladkiyaan, drugs, sona - chandi.. kyun kuch kam toh nahi bola na maine..."

They both look at each other and then towards CID with an angry and loser face...

ACP - "Abhijeet pata hai in logoin ke baare mein khabar kaise mili?"
Abhi - "kaise sir?"
ACP - "Bansilal ji ke truck ki checking hui. Truck mein toh sirf kapde the par unke saath ek injection mila jismein ek aisi dava thi jo sirf dil ke mareezo ko dee jaati hai aur itni aasaani se milti bhi nahi. Wohh dava sarkar sirf kuch hospitals mein bhejti hai. Ab kapdo ke truck mein wohh dava kahan se aayi... toh pata chala kapdo ka truck kapde lane se pehle hospital mein khada tha. Bas lag gaye log in dono ka peecha karne... humare desh mein aap jaise log hona, desh ki shaan ke khilaaf hai. Aapke liye toh phasi bhi kam hogi. Inspector aap in dono ko le jaayiye. Inke upar smuggling, kidnapping, ladkiyoin ko bechne aur mere do officers par attack karne ka iljaam hai."
Abhi - "par CID officers ko pakad ke rakhna shayad inke bas ki baat nahi. Dekho na, dono hi inke naak ke neeche se bhaag gaye."
ACP - "Vivek tum inpector ke saath jao. Main baad mein milta hoon."

Vivek nods and leaves...

Just then ACP gets a call..

ACP - "haan Freddie.. bolo.. mil gayi? very good.. kiski hai? ruko hum abhi pahunch rahe hain."

ACP - "Kaveri aur Lavanya, Raj par nazar rakho."


Scene 16
CID is walking... into a house and Freddie is waiting at the gate.. while walking inside..

Freddie - "sir Mumbai mein sirf 2 gadiyaan hai jinpar bichchoo bana hai. Pehli gadi hai kisi Angad ki. Wohh Goregoan mein rehta hai."
ACP - "aur doosri?"
Freddie - "doosri gadi hai Nakul ki... "
Daya - "kya? Nakul wahi na jisko Simran ke article ki wajah se college se nikaal diya tha?"
Freddie - "ji sir."
Abhi - "yani ke khoon Nakul aur uske doostoin ne karwaya hai."
ACP - "haan par paise kisi ladki ne diye the."
Freddie - "sir Nakul ka yehi address hai."
ACP - "chalo chalkar dekhte hain."

CID goes and knocks.. after a little while a servant opens the door...

ACP - "hum CID se hain. Nakul ghar par hai?"
Servant - "nahi sir, Nakul baba toh yahan kam hi aate hain."
Daya - "toh rehta kahan hai ye Nakul?"
Servant - "Nakul baba toh Pune chale gaye. Jab kabhi aate hai toh apne mummy - daddy ke saath rehte hain. Yahan toh kabhi mahine mein ek baar aa gaye warna kabhi unki behen aa jaati hain."

Just then Abhi and Shruti were looking around the house..

Shruti - "sir..."
ACP - "haan Shruti bolo.."

Shruti had a photo frame in her hand and she showed it to ACP...

ACP - "ohh toh ye hain Nakul ki behen?"

ACP shows the pic to the servant.. its of Tanvi and Nakul together...

Servant - "ji yehi toh hain Tanvi didi."


Scene 17
CID is in the car..

ACP - "Abhijeet jaldi Raj ko phone lagao.. uski jaan khatre mein hai. Agar khoon Tanvi ne kiya hai toh wohh Raj ko bhi maar sakti hai."
Abhi - "sir Raj utha nahi raha."
ACP - "Shruti pata karo jaldi ki Raj aur Tanvi ka phone kahan hai."
Shruti - "haan sir... wohh log dhoondh rahe hain."

After a minute..

Shruti - "sir Raj apne ghar par hi hai. Par Tanvi Raj ke ghar jaa rahi hai."
ACP - "Daya jaldi Raj ke ghar chalte hain. Shruti Kaveri ko phone kar ke kaho ki Tanvi par nazar rakhe..."

At Raj's house..

Tanvi and Raj are having meals..

Tanvi - "Raj chalo na drive par chalte hain."
Raj - "par khana toh khatam kar lo."
Tanvi - "Mera mann nahi hai.. chalo na.. mujhe abhi jaana hai."
Raj - "acha phone toh lene do."
Tanvi - "nahi phone ki kya zaroorat... bakaar mein koi phone karke disturb karega.."

Just then Raj's phone rings.. it was CID...

Tanvi - "dekha abhi toh sirf jaane ki baat ho rahi hai, tabhi phone aane lage. Chodo na.. main bhi apna phone yahin chod rahi hoon. Chale"
Raj - "acha chalo..."

And Raj and Tanvi sit in the car and go.. after a second they leave, CID comes.. they see the house is left in a hurry...

Servant comes..

ACP - "Raj aur Tanvi yahin the na? Unke phone bhi yahin pade hain.."
Servant - "haan saab par wohh dono toh abhi abhi nikle hain."
ACP - "kahan gaye?"
Servant - "saab pata nahi par aksar wohh dono Juhu beech jaate hain."
ACP - "chalo jaldi.. zyada door nahi gaye honge wohh... Kaveri ko phone karo."

Now there is a chase.. not actually for Tanvi and Raj dont know that they are being followed..

Tanvi - "Raj kahan jaa rahe hai?"
Raj - "Juhu beech.. tumhari favourite jagah..."
Tanvi - "nahi aaj wahan chalo jahan jaana tumhe pasand ho..."
Raj - "baat kya hai aaj?"
Tanvi - "bas main aaj bahut khush hoon. Bhai ka phone aaya tha. Wohh agle mahine wapas aa raha hai."
Raj - "kaisa hai Nakul?"
Tanvi - "bahut acha. Main bahut dino baad usse milungi. Bahut saha hai bhai ne. Uska toh koi dosh bhi nahi tha... Par abhi Bhai ki chodo.. abhi main tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon."
Raj - "toh chalo aaj main tumhe Juhu beech ka wohh kona dikhata hoon, jo bahut logoin ne nahi dekha."

Raj takes Tanvi to a hotel in front of the beech and he asks for a particular room.. he takes her to that room and then to the balcony... he then shows her the beech.. it looked beautiful with sun shining bright.. and the view was magnificent.. you could see so much and then she could see a part where no one went...

Just the CID car comes and parks under the hotel.. Kaveri and Lavanya are waiting for them..

Kaveri - "sir dono upar gaye hain. 7th floor."
ACP - "very good well done.."
Shruti - "sir wohh rahe upar..."
ACP - "chalo jaldi. Kaveri tum aur Lavanya ruko yahan. Dekhna koi bhaage na."

But then Tanvi sees them.. she pushes Raj

Raj - "kya hua Tanvi?"
Tanvi - "Raj mujhe jaana hai."
Raj - "par hua kya?"
Tanvi - "rasta chodo..."

and she pushes him and rushes out and up the stairs towards the terrace... Raj comes out of the room calling her.. and then CID comes the same moment up... they see Raj

ACP - "Raj tum theek ho?"
Raj - "ji sir kyun?"

But the same moment, he starts vomitting and goes a little pale..

ACP - "Freddie Raj ko jaldi hospital ke jao. Raj Tanvi kahan hai?"

Raj points towards the terrace.. Abhi looks up and he sees Tanvi looking down at them..

Abhi - "sir Tanvi wohh rahi."

CID rushes up and now they are at the terrace.. Tanvi entered the terrace and locked the door behind her..

ACP - "Daya, tod do darwaza."

and Abhi and Daya start breaking the door.. it breaks off and Tanvi is no where to be found...

ACP - "dhoondo usse.. bahut door nahi gayi hogi."

At the backside of the roof.. Daya and Shruti were searching and then Shruti spots her.. Tanvi was trying to climb down by the pipeline...

Shruti - "Daya ye rahi."

Daya comes and sees...

Daya - "ruk jao Tanvi, tum bhaag nahi sakti..."

Shruti goes and gets a rope lying nearby

Daya - "ladki mein jaan toh hai. (looks at Shruti) Tum ye kya kar rahi ho??"
Shruti - "Daya rassi pakdo.. aur kas ke pakadna."
Daya - "par ye kya kar rahi ho?"

Shruti handed one end of the rope to Daya and tied the other around herself nicely, ensuring that she wont fall and then she climed the wall and just then ABhi and ACP come that side..

Abhi - "Shruti"
Daya - "sir Tanvi yahan hai."

Abhi rushed to help...

Shruti had already left support.. Daya was holding the rope tightly and not to let her fall.. Abhi came and helped.. and so did ACP... Shruti did something good then.. she went down just to get a little under Tanvi and then tied the rope around Tanvi and then asked Daya to pull...

ACP, Abhi and Daya pulled the two girls up...

ACP - "well done Shruti. Lagta hai Daya aur Abhijeet ko tumse training dilani padegi."

Shruti smiled at Abhi and Daya.. Daya looked amused but Abhi looked so tensed.. and confused!


Scene 18
In the bureau..
Raj is also there, Simran's parents are also there, Ishaan and Tanvi's parents are also there... Tanvi and a boy is sittin on a chair each and crying...

ACP - "kyun maara Simran ko?"
Tanvi - "uski wajah se mere bhai ko college se nikaal diya. Mere bhai ki zindagi kharab ho gayi."
ACP - "tumhara bhai ek ladki ke saath battameezi kar raha tha. Wohh aur uske dost bachchoin ko drugs supply karte the..."
Tanvi - "toh kya hua? Kisi ka khoon toh nahi kiya na usne... Ek din mujhe Vicky mila.. Vicky apne dad ke dost ke office mein engineer ban gaya par abhi bhi ye Simran se nafrat karta hai. Isne wohh machine dikhayi. Remote ka button dabate hi usmein se sui aayegi aur jisko wohh sui lage, wohh toh gaya.. maine Adventure park jaane ka programme banaya.. socha tha ki ek ke baad ek dono Simran aur Raj ko wahi khatam kar dungi... par Simran kuch jaldi mar gayi. Isiliye Raj bach gaya.. toh maine aaj usse zeher wala khana khila diya..."
Raj - "Tanvi tum aisa karogi.. main soch bhi nahi sakta tha..."
Tanvi - "aur jo tumne kiya? Bola tha na maine ki mera bhai hai.. jaane do.. par tab tumne hi kaha tha na ki mera bhai galat hai..."
Vicky - "Raj aur Simran ki wajah se hum chaaro barbad ho gaye. Humne inse kitna kaha ki hum ye nahi karenge bus ye dono article na chaape.. par ye maane hi nahi..."
Simran's mum - "isiliye tumne meri bachchi ko maar diya?"

and she starts crying and Lavanya takes her out...

ACP - "tum dono ko toh phasi hi hogi."
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Sorry Ppl.. took me too long bt now I completed it... and posted it.. I promise will be more regular frm now with these stories..

hope u ppl will like them!! and so the CID team..
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Episode 2

Case of the Jinxed Necklace

Daya is in his home.. humming and then the bell rings... he goes and opens the door and there is a boy.

Daya - "ji?"
Boy - "aap CID inspector Daya hain?"
Daya - "haan par tum kaun ho?"
Boy - "main Vishal hoon. Richa Aggarwal ka neighbour. Richa ne kaha ki ye main aapko deta jaun."
Daya - "Richa Aggarwal?"
Vishal - "Richa ne bataya ki wohh apke saath college mein thi..."
Daya - "ohh haan Richa.. kahan hai wohh abhi?"
Vishal - "pata nahi sir. 1 hafte pehle ek din achanak hi ek bag mein kapde daale aur chali gayi. Ghar mein sab samaan waisa hi pada hai. Aaj subah mere office aayi aur boli ki ye mein aapko de doon."
Daya - "okie thank You. Aap kuch lenge?"
Vishal - "nahi sir mujhe jaana hai.."

and Vishal leaves... Daya opens the letter and reads..

Daya,
someone is trying to kill us. I need your help. Please find me
Richa
9868765448

Okie.. Daya read the letter over and over again.. Richa hadnt mentioned anything. She just said that she wanted help.. and she didnt even tell where she was.. but she wrote her mobile number.. maybe she was hiding and didnt want to reveal her whereabout... And someone was trying to kill 'us'... who is trying to kill Richa and who is the other person in danger?
Daya called at the number but Richa never picked up.. he then realised why Richa gave the number.. he called the Mobile company and gave them Richa's number and asked for the location...


At the same hour, somewhere else in Mumbai, Shruti was sitting on the window frame.. there was little wall space and she sat there looking at the world from the 25th floor... She wasnt at her home but in a hotel.. Abhi and Shruti decided that it was time to get the house a little renovated and so there was work going on in their house, as a result, they had to shift in the hotel for a week. Shruti was looking outside smiling... and then ABhi comes from a door at the side.. he had just come out after taking a bath and has wet hair.. which he is drying...

Abhi - "Shruti kursi nahi hai kya. Neeche utaro."

Shruti looks at him.. and then looks back.. as if not hearing anything...
Abhi goes to her and looks where she was looking...

Abhi - "Utaro, gir jaogi..."

Abhi was holding her hand to pull her down and then like she looses balance, Shruti was about to fall and Abhi gets panic but it lasted only a second.. after the second.. Shruti happily jumped inside the room and was laughing...

Shruti - "tum darr gaye na?"

Abhi was silent.. he was scared... and he had to admit it.. however he remained silent... Then Shruti came to him.. and silently both of them were looking at the world outside, holding hands and then Abhi started looking at her.. but Shruti was seeing something else now.. her smile changed to a worried expression... Abhi saw it but even before he could ask -

Shruti - "Abhi... dekho wahan..."

Abhi strained to look where Shruti pointed and then he noticed... in the building opposite the road, on the 6th floor, two people were in the house... 2 girls, they seemed to be arguing... but what scared Shruti was a red light on the window.. it grew sharper but sometimes got blur.. it focused on one of the girls and then there was a bullet fired... there was no noise but the window glass broke... and the girl at the aim fell down and the other girl grew panic... she ran inside...

Abhi - "chalo.."
Shruti - "ruko dekho.. building ke neeche kaun hai - ye toh Daya hai na.. aur suno... jisne goli chalayi wohh zaroor issi building mein hoga. Main dekhti hoon koi bhaag toh nahi raha.. tum Daya ke saath jaakar dekho. Main ACP sir ko bhi batati hoon."
Abhi - "sambhal kar..."

Abhi left saying so and Shruti rushed near the stairs to see if anyone was running out and she was also checking if someone was going down the lift but that wasnt till sometime for now ABhi was in the lift..

Meanwhile, Abhi rushed down by lift ofcourse.. no one joined him entire way down... he needed to hurry... he went down, ran out of the hotel and across the road to the other building..

Daya had entered the building and he met the watchman...

Daya - "ye Richa madam kis floor pe rehti hain?"
Watchman - "kaun Richa, saab? Yahan koi Richa nahi hai."
Daya - "Richa Aggarwal.."
Watchman - "saab main sabko jaanta hoon iss building mein. Koi Richa nahi hai yahan.. aap bolo aapko kisse milna hai."
Daya - "dekho wohh ladki yahin rehti hai"
Watchman - "dekho saab kyun raat mein time paas kar rahe ho. Shareef lagte ho, chale jao warna police ko bulaunga.."

Daya raised a finger but before he said anything, Abhi had come.. Abhi placed a hand on Daya's shoulder..

Abhi - "Ye khud CID se hain aur main Senior Inspector Abhijeet. Building ke 6th floor par kisi ka khoon hua hai.. kaun kaun rehta hai wahan.. chalo jaldi.."

Now all 3 of them rush upstairs... while going up...

Daya - "Abhijeet tum yahan kaise?"
Abhi - "Shruti aur main saamne hotel mein the tab Shruti ne dikha. Kisi ne us building se aim kiya tha laser se."
Daya - "kaun kaun rehta hai 6th floor par?"
Watchman - "saab baki sab toh theek hai par ek ladki hai - Nisha madam. Ek mahine pehle unhone bahut zaldi zaldi mein ghar liye. Kuch 15 din pehle unke saath unki ek saheli Ishani madam bhi aa gayi."
Abhi - "un dono ke ghar se sadak dikhti hai?"
Watchman - "haan saab. Dikhti hai."
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more to come soon.. and ppl this will be the general story for the play too.. once i write it here in detail, I will put the main points there...

get ready to see ur Daya in love!
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shruti..yesterday I have read all your episodes..its marvelous..& the second story😃
main to imagine karna bhi shuru kar diya hai😳
man me kya kya scenes araha hai😳
jaldi post karo😳😳😳
barna behek jaungi😳
aur na jane kya kar baithungi😃

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