The Story Weekly... - Page 5

hey bas itna hii? 😔 butterfly in my stomach. ☺️ Daya-Richa bohot hi sweet hain :D

Daya – "Richa chalo time ho gaya…"

Richa's smile disappeared into the same fearful expression she had when Daya had seen her first two days back.

Daya – "Richa… daro mat… "

There was more Daya wanted to speak… Daya felt wordless… Richa had always been a great person to be with but having spent almost every moment with her since two days, Daya feared what if he lost another friend?

Since Abhi and Shruti got married, Daya had been very happy for Abhi and Shruti had instantly become a very important part of their family but Daya sometimes thought that he was missing something… Daya tried to distance himself from Abhi just so the newly wed would get sometime alone but doing so, Daya realised that Abhi had been the sole great friend Daya had and his absense made Daya very much alone.

Daya had visited all his others friends… talked to them all… but somehow none of them were as close to Daya as Abhi… Daya could justify it just by saying that Abhi and Daya afterall, had been together like always for some 10 – 12 years… CID often makes you be there at duty every second and all those seconds, Abhi was also there… Daya remembered all the talks and laughs they shared, how they both hid mistakes of the other from ACP, Daya also remembered when Abhi was hurt and then the times when Abhi helped Daya out of problems… These memories always spread smile across his face…

Though Daya knew that this was just a momentary phase, soon the 'honeymoon phase' would get over and then all will be back to normal but till then it was pretty quiet for Daya… and then Richa resurfaced from the past… It wasn't the case with Richa where when 2 people meet after long, have to start it all over… indeed somehow their friendship had been stronger than he remembered… Richa was just like she was and Daya got a chance to be like he was in college… years of dealing with criminals had hardened him… he liked his life but he enjoyed his 2 days back into being the Daya he had once been… Daya now feared when the case will be over… Richa will again go back into her life routine and he didn't want to loose this friend…

Daya pushed the thoughts aside and then left the chawl with Richa… his bike was there and they both went to the hotel. Freddie was waiting outside the hotel… Freddie is dressed as a waitor…

Freddie – "sir kahan the aap… main kitni der se khada hoon…"

Daya – "Freddie sab tyaar hai na?"

And while taking them to a room…

Freddie – "ji sir… main waitor hoon aur Vivek manager… pata nahi usne ACP sir ko kya patti padhai…"

Daya – "Freddie shikayat nahi…"

Freddie – "umm.. ji sir… Lavanya beauty section mein hai aur Kaveri Richa ji ke saath manager hai."

Daya – "host pahunch gaye?"

Freddie – "ji sir… Abhijeet sir aur Shruti kal raat hi aa gaye the."

Meanwhile… in a deluxe suite of the hotel Ocean waves… Abhi had put on a very fine black suit, white shirt and a black tie… somehow black complimented him a lot. He had been looking at his wrist 'golden' watch again and again and pacing.. and then he turned to the locked washroom room…

Abhi – "Shruti jaldi karo… kitna time lagega?"

Shruti – "Abhi aa rahi hoon… ek minute…"

And Abhi grows further tired of waiting… and then finally after what seemed like hours, Shruti comes out… the dress did look like made for her only.. it was a long black gown which sparkled. Abhi couldn't help staring her. Shruti walked upto him but Abhi didn't even blink…

Shruti – "kya hua?"

But before Abhi could answer… there was a knock on the door and Shruti went to see it. There was a waitor dressed in uniform with a box in his hand.

Shruti – "ye kya hai?"

Waitor – "madam ye jewellery store se aapke liye.."

Shruti takes it.. the waitor stands there… Shruti stares at the parcel and then at the waitor…

Shruti – "kuch aur bhi hai?"

Waitor – "nahi madam.. bas aap isse zaroor pehene…"

Shruti smells something suspecious… she opens the parcel and it has that same so called jinxed necklace… even though the necklace was beautiful, Shruti made a bad face…

Waitor – "koi problem madam?"

Shruti – "problem hi problem hai… kitna hi ganda set hai ye.. main ye pehenungi.."

The waitor looked worried now… Shruti rushed in and got her cell phone and she pretended to call the manager… meanwhile she clicked the waitor's pic.. and then called Vivek… Vivek was dressed as manager…

Vivek – "madam koi problem?"

Shruti – "aapke hotel mein itne kharab set hai?"

Vivek – "I am sorry madam par humare hotel mein ye sabse acha hai…"

Abhi comes…

Abhi – "kya hua?"

Shruti – "darling maine kaha tha na.. ye hotel D grade hai. They don't have proper jewellery."

Abhi – "well you don't need it either sweetheart. Abhi ke liye apni koi jewellery pehen lo, aur main nayi dila dunga. Agli baar manager se kahunga kisi ache hotel mein book kare…"

Vivek – "madam hume acha lagega agar aap humara diya set pehene…"

The waitor was a man of the killer and now he thought that so was Vivek…

Shruti – "theek hai.. par aainda aisa na ho.."

In the party…

It's a mask party. All people are wearing eye masks. All the CID members are disguised and spread except ACP and Daya… they are nowhere around.

Abhi and Shruti happily talk to the guests and it's a very natural scene as though Abhi and Shruti are the true hosts… Richa is really scared and she was sitting to one corner but then Kaveri and Lavanya keeo coming next to her and asking her to mix in the crowd. Unwillingly Richa agrees…

It was very dramatic… the CID disguised and also we had the criminal… Vivek was following the guy dressed as waitor for he would lead them to the entire gang… slowly and slowly Vivek and Freddie marked a total of 5 waitors whom they thought were suspecious…

Meanwhile.. a lot of time went by.. guests had started to leave.. and it was just like a dozen of them when a masked man approaches Richa… he lifts his mask a little so Richa sees him and Richa is glad to see him and hugs him. He asks her to come outside and Richa readily agrees… all this is viewed by Daya who was hiding somewhere in the room and he was just watching Richa…

As soon as the man is out of the hall, the suspecious waitor signals another and before the CID people could understand, a bullet brushes past Shruti's shoulder. There are some 10 men with guns and CID team takes out theirs. Freddie and Vivek hurry at finding the ones they suspected and shoot them… the others get alerted and hide and there is a lot of firing.

Lavanya and Kaveri immidiately hurried to take aside the other guests… Abhu hurries to pull Shruti aside. Shruti has her gun in hand and she had immidiately thrown off her necklace. Abhi had his gun out to and they were too firing. Slowly and slowly as Lavanya and Kaveri too joined the firing, the bad men died…

But just then they heard Richa scream… Everything had happened so quickly that actually no one had an idea what had happened… Lavanya immidiately came besides Shruti as Abhi rushed in the direction from where the scream came. Shruti was fine now… her shoulder did hurt a lot but she had pressed it against the wall and was firing with the other hand.

Soon all the 10 men were down… Lavanay and Kaveri rushed to where Abhi had gone a few minutes back… meanwhile Shruti helped the guests out safely… there was Police here by now and they helped Shruti…

((sorry ppl... a very late.. jus writing the ending and will post it at most by tomorrow))

Hope u all like it

woww itni jalddi ending? 😔
i hav a req to Suchi Di n Shruti Di, pls write more fictions on Daya - ? n Abhi - Shruti. pls 😃

waiting eagerly shruti for you update😳

why dont u wanna see Daya and Richa happy??? and together?? well yea its ending... bt for a new start

At the same time…

Richa had been called out by Sahil. He had asked her if she was fine and wanted to talk to her and so she readily agreed to go to a less crowded place.

Daya was at the same time hiding behind the pillar watching Richa all the time and just a minute back ACP had called informing Daya about who was the murderer… ACP was very much in the hotel… he had Lata's diary and was reading it and reconstructing all he could going from one place to another and eventually he had found out… as soon as he did, he called Daya to warn him… It all fitted… there was only one person who was connected to Lata and Richa and only he knew where they were headed to. How could they all miss it at first?

But just then Daya saw Richa move out of the room with a guy who resembled the murderer… and so Daya instantly followed. However, it took him sometime to clear the crowd and once he was just at the point of exit, he heard a bullet fire… Daya glanced back to see all his team take out their guns and Daya knew they will manage and so he went after Richa hoping no one in the hall will get hurt…

By the time Daya could figure some sense where he was, Richa and the guy had vanished. He stood alone in a corridoor with lots of doors. Each door into a storage… a different storage everytime and in the background, there was firing. Daya started to check each and every door… and he couldn't see Richa. He called her name in each room but she gave no reply.

Daya had checked almost all the rooms in the corridoor when he heard a bullet fire and then Richa scream. This bullet didn't sound like the distant ones in the hall and it echoed, so it had to be somewhere near and then Daya realised Richa had screamed. Was she hurt? He so much wanted to find her… Daya then looked at the room he had opened, it containted towels… hundreds of towels… all clean and nicely folded, some untidy and kept in a separate pile tagged 'washing'. Suddenly it struck Daya… yes there was a place Richa could be in. Daya immidiately headed to the corridoor below and soon he heard footsteps behind him rushing towards him… he stopped a little to see Abhi rushing towards him. Abhi had his gun in hand…

Daya immidiately told Abhi what he thought and Abhi agreed to it and together they headed to the room…

Soon Daya and Abhi were standing exactly below where Daya had stood a few seconds back. They were facing a big room – laundry room. The laundry room was indeed big. The hotel, didn't send laundry outside for cleaning, they had their own vast laundry section.

Daya broke in with his gun pointing straight… no one there… Abhi and Daya split up to check each side… Daya spotted some blood and followed the trail and then suddenly a girl comes out of a corner pointing a gun at him… it was Richa… her hands were covered in blood and she was hell scared… her hair were out of place as if they were struggling to be freed and she was sobbing… on seeing Daya, she dropped the gun and hugged him tight… she pointed to the opposite side and spoke in broken phrases 'Daya khoon… uska… wohh… wahan…'

Daya – "Richa kuch nahi hua… mat daro… main hoon yahan"

Richa was mostly fine except some bruises and a cut on shoulder which was bleeding… the blood in her hand wasn't hers and so she must have hit someone…

Daya asks Richa to pick the gun and follow him… she does so…