LAST BREATH ||PH SHOT|| - Page 6

Originally posted by: harshiti

areeeeeeeeee geeti miss u alot

and vey nice u made me cry very bad ash2😭

Originally posted by: Additi...

i am crying right NOW


what have you done? huh............

it was so touchy and romantic.......plzzzz do write more but happy AS not like this which made me cry........

Originally posted by: shareen

Simply outstanding!!Really well written.

Originally posted by: stunninstar

oh wow..tragedy..i loved it...it was nice.. Thankssa really long one...he he I know😆😆... its 1:30 am now.. i wil update my commet tomoro!!

sorry..i made yuh wait .. finally today i gt time to edit the comment..😆😆..Itss okay di, yeahh as if i don't know hw i made u to edit😉😆

arey aqsa...i didnt know yuh write so well.even i did'nt knew that😃😃l.twaz too good Thankyou Thankyou😳... and they both died at the same place yeahhh i wantd that way to prove that their luv was pure😊...felt really bad when prem died..me too i really felt lyk cryng while wrtng n readng it😭😭 and i gt confused when i read the end why??????😕😕😕 ws it confusng😕.. i had to read it again to undersand what had happened.. he he.. heer also died... that was a change actually..like such twisted endings than the usual happy endings,,. do write more.. cant wait to read more of yr master pieces..

luv yuh..

yeahh di will definately

ohhh masterpiece................thankyou so much😊

luv u too🤗

Originally posted by: Mobina

Arey Geeti 2 tu itne creative kaha sey ho gai shut up geeti2 i m creative frm very beginning😃 😆😆😆 mujey yakeen nahin ara kya One Shot tha superb pyaar emptions saab kuch👏. Thankyou Thankyou😃 mujey bohat emotional kar diya arey yaar sequence write kar jaha PH miley sirf mera liya😆😆😆 madam PH mil toh gaye n sequel to this, wht would i write??.................sorry next wish plzz😆😆😆

But overall loved it but meray Prem ko maar diya😭Haan yaar kya karoon maarna pada😭😭 us key baad Heer ko😭.haan toh unhe milana tha naa n prove karna tha tht their luv ws eternal................ n think nw it was tragic in a good way atleast thy met if i would'nt hv killed heer thn it would be badly tragic

agla one shot likhna aur Ph ko zinda rakhna aur milana bhi let me think, ohkk will try to but no promises😃 aur woh PH one shot mujey dedicate karna lol sochungi

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Omg!

it was awesome Thankss

great...too good Thankyou dear

i couldnt stop myself from crying well i take it as a compliment

loved your writing Thankyou again😆😆

do write more👏yeahh i will

Originally posted by: -fsn-

hey aqsa hey fatty
u write so amazingly plz try to write more but happy ones yeahh i will n happy i will definately try
after reading this i cry alot. I take it as a complimnt😆😆
write more soon yeahh hopefully u'll gt one frm me soon
luv
fatima

luv

aqsa

Originally posted by: snowwhite30

awesome............

Originally posted by: seemagb83

aqsa...this was beautiful.....seriously!!!!! Thankss madam finally u r here😡😡...I could feel every emotion.....ohhhh emotional premi2😆😆well said story dear........Thank you again😃😃what surprised me was I thought Prem already was in love when he was working through office mess before leaving to the cliff....yesss he was in luv much bfr thn Heer strtd to but it was beautiful to have turned best friends into lovers.....yeahhh i luv tht thing😳😳tragic ending....I know but my brain😡but I prayed that these lovers should remain together forever!madam it was a fictional shot, nt reality 😆

Again again????? whn did i do it bfr😲you did a splendid job!!!!!kudos!!!!!!!!!Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou