Tumse Mil ke (prida)

This is a poem about how Damini feels in Prithvi's presence:

Originally posted by: sistu

This is a poem about how Damini feels in Prithvi's presence:

Tumse Mil ke........

Tumse milti hoon to milti hoon us ladki se........

jo kabhi jhula jhulti thi

jo taaron ke niche baith ke kisi raajkumar ke sapney bunti thi

jo waqt ke haathon majboor hoke kahi kho gayi

parivaar ka beta bane ke liye khud so gayi

Ok, I'm hooked already! This has got to be the best description of the tender Damz who hides under her fighter persona... Love it! Sistu, 👏 👏 👏

Tum choote ho to milti hun ek ehsaas se......

jisme phir se sawarne ka man kare....

nikharne ka dil kare......

tumahre toot ke bikharne ka ji kare

OMG!!! I'm speechless! This is beautiful... 👏 Very well written!

Tumse milti hoon to milti hoon subah ki taazi hawa se

jo apne saath subah ki pehli kiran laati hain

jisme phoolon ki khusboo simat aati hain

jisme bhavron ki gunjun shamil hoti hain

*lost in dreamworld. Cannot speak coherently!* This is super-duper awesome!

Tumse milti hoon to sunti hoon apne dil ki dhadkan ko

jisme sirf ek hi naam baar baar dhakta hain......

Prithvi

Hayyyee, I'm dead! Can't say anything that'll do justice to the beauty of these simple lines... 😍

Title credit: It is from the song tumse milke aisa laga.......Movie-Parinda

P.S: Sorry if that doesnt make sense. I am not really good in writting compared to most of the writers on this forum. But I guess I cant resist prida so love to write pridaems😉.

It made total sense and beyond!!! I'm totally crazy about this poem!

@ not good in writing 😲 😲 😲 You are joking, right? You are amongst the gems of this forum, Sistu. Your poetry is incomparably beautiful!!⭐️ Please write more often...

Sistu: LAST WARNING😡 If u ever again say u are not good, get ready for my dandas..

This was super duper awesome...

And damini like u beautifully put has been lost somewhere becos of the responsibilities she has taken upon herself and it is with prithvi that she is truly rediscovering her lost self.. Just as i suspect Prithvi is rediscovering himself when he is with her..

Beautiful, Beautiful....👏

Love you for this, one of the best ones i have read🤗

sistuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.................🤗

Sistu, my friend, about time you stopped saying you are not as good as others..OK? You are so talented..

So glad you wrote this..🤗This was beautiful, just beautiful..⭐️ Keep up the good work..

While reading this, I could feel every emotion of Damini, everything that she feels in Prithvi's presence, everything..

Great job!

Originally posted by: diya86

everyone else has said, but i'd still repeat... that was awesome dawesome sistu!!!

i could soo feel the damini who is hidden behind the tough persona!!! awesome!!! 👍🏼 👏

Originally posted by: Shwetha!

Sistu: LAST WARNING😡 If u ever again say u are not good, get ready for my dandas..

This was super duper awesome...

And damini like u beautifully put has been lost somewhere becos of the responsibilities she has taken upon herself and it is with prithvi that she is truly rediscovering her lost self.. Just as i suspect Prithvi is rediscovering himself when he is with her..

Beautiful, Beautiful....👏

Love you for this, one of the best ones i have read🤗

Originally posted by: fibrinogen9

sistuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.................🤗

love ya...

its⭐️

Originally posted by: Who-I-Used-2-Be

Sistu, my friend, about time you stopped saying you are not as good as others..OK? You are so talented..

So glad you wrote this..🤗This was beautiful, just beautiful..⭐️ Keep up the good work..

While reading this, I could feel every emotion of Damini, everything that she feels in Prithvi's presence, everything..

Great job!