|*| Tum Milay |*| Pg.36 Apr.6/2010

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Hey Hey My Peeps :D

I am back with another OneShot ' This is my imagantion of what I want to see in their Suhaag raat *Blush*. I was just dieing to share my idea with you guys .. I hope you all like and enjoy it. Please do comment and Press the like button.

*Note*

If any of you have a request for me to make a oneshot of some scence ' Please do PM me and I will make one.

I have gotten some request and fulfilled them and will try to fulfill yours.

Thankyou

Before you all get bored Here is Suhaag Raat'

*Suhaag Raat*

Preet ' "Bhaia kya hua .. lab taak bhabi ko dekanin ghaay ap." Preet said bringing Prem out of his thoughts.

Harman ' "Preet kabhi tu serious ho jaya karo."

Prem smiled at them. Geet came and pulled Prem by his arm.

Prem ' "Arrey Geet kya hai." Geet took him and made him stand beside Heer. The whole family gathered around. All of the Juneja's stodd beside Premeer.

Prem put his arm around Heer's waist and she put a hand on his chest.

Heer ' "Geet tu bi aa na."

Geet ' "Nahi nahi yeh teri family picture hai '"

Prem ' "Or tum family ho ' ayo." Geet smiled and stood beside Heer.

Chahat ' "Mamam." A little angel came in from the door, wearing a pink lehnga.

Chahat ' "Mama family photo mein, mein kahan gayi." She said walking towards her mom and dad.

Prem picked her up and kissed her cheek.

Prem ' "Areey hum tumhein kasay bhol saktay hain." She smiled and kissed his cheek back.

Chahat stood in front of Premeer. Prem's hand on Heer's waist and hers on his chest, the whole family gathered around and happiness in their eyes.

The photographer snapped a picture and everyone moved form their postions.

Heer took Chahat aside, both of them sitting in a room alone.

Heer ' "Beta exam kasay thay."

Chahat ' "Bohat achay mama ' mama ab hum yahan hi rahain ghay na." Heer smiled and nodded. Chahat kissed her cheek.

Kitan ' "Chahat chalo keltay hain." Chahat smiled and left the room holding Kitan's hand. As soon as Chahat left Prem walked in. He came and stood infront of Heer putting his hands on her waist.

Prem ' "Heer tum bohat khoobsurat lag rahi ho."

Preet ' "Bhaia baqi sab bi bohat achay lag rahay hain." Prem and Heer let go of each other and looked at Preet standing.

(Arrey Preet Yaar KAbhi tu unko Akela Chor diya kao ... HEHE)
Prem ' "Preet deak tu liye kar kay kya ho raha hai hamisha bolta rahta hai,"

Preet pulled Prem out of them room and Heer laughed leaving out of the room.

Preet ' "Bhahia 20min intazzar karlo phir jo marzi karlana."

Prem ' "Preet tu yeh '. Preet." Preet just laughed and left.

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The girls had taken Heer to her new bedroom, which was decorated with flowers, candels and the bed with a red sheet and flower's hanging down. She smiled and went to the window and looked at the moon.

Prem was pulled by Geet and Kulraaj, actually he wasn't pulled he was running towards the room him self. But the girls stopped him at the door.

Prem ' "Ab kya hai ' mujhe jano tu do."

Kulraaj ' "Teek hai ja." She said pushing him into the room. He stopped and quite down closing the door without making much noise. He locked it this time so no one would disturd them.

(Naughty Prem and Samrt ' doesn't want a little brat like Veera commming in and runing their romance ' smart Prem). He took off his sehra and walked behind Heer, putting his arms around her. She smiled and placed a hand on his cheek.

He placed his chin on her shoulder and enjoyed the moment.

Prem ' "Heer ek baath pochon."

Heer ' "Kya?"

Prem ' "Tum ab meray saath hi raho ghee na." She smiled and truned around, placing her hands on his chest.

Heer ' "Prem ab jo bi ho mein tumhein kabhi chor kay nahi jayoon ghee." Prem smiled and put his hands on her waist.

Prem ' "Paka." He said in a naughty way.

Heer ' "Kacha." She said laughing and Prem joined in.

Prem ' "Heer mujhe yakenn nahi ho raha kay aj koi lardka hamrai shaadi mein behous (faint) nahi hua." Heer looked confused.

Heer ' "Kya ' Kyun?"

Prem ' "Aj tum intni khoobshurat lag rahi ho na issliye." Heer raised her eyebrow.

Heer ' "Acha." Prem smiled a cute smile.

Prem ' "Haan." Heer kissed his cheek and put her head on his chest.

Prem ' "Heer aj kay baad hum apni purani aindagi kay baray mein koi baath nahi Karin ghaay." Heer smiled and hugged him tightily.

Heer ' "Wada" Prem pulled her back.

Prem ' "Wada." He said kissing her forehead. Both of them smiled at each other and looked at eachothers eyes ' lost forever.

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Prem kissed Heers cheek, thoart, cheekbone and forhead.

He took off her jewellary placing a kiss on every part of her bare skin. Heer had goose pumps, and shivers in her body.

He removed her red chuni and removed her bidi. He looked at Heer blushing with her eyes closed. He moved forward and was about to kiss her lips when she moved to the othe side, trying to walk away, he caught her arm and kissed it all the way to her shoulder. She closed her eyes shut again.

He slowly moved his hands down her bare wasit then her legs and picked her up in his arms.

Heer just placed a arm around his neck and face on his chest.

Prem placed her down on the bed. She truned her face away form him blushing. He made her face him by placing a hand on her chin.

Prem ' "Aj hamin ek honey sey koi nahi rook sakta." Heer smiled and put her arms around his neck. He bent down slowly as the light faded away '

(Baas Baas ab un dono ko chor deta hai ' Becharay kitni dhear baad ek ho rahay hain ' chalo kamray sey baar niklo ' Lets leave them alone ' *Laughing*)

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I hope all of you like it ' Please do comment and tell me what you think :D

Don't forget to Press the like Button :D

Love ' Ayysha

Here are links to My other Oneshot

Meray Saath

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1259858/premeer-one-shot-meray-saath

Soul Mate or Jewan Saati

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1263979/premeer-one-shot-soul-mate-or-jewan-saati-a-gift

Pyar, Vishwaas or Jeewan saathi

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1262542/premeer-oneshot-pyar-vishwaas-or-jewan-saati

Rishta Katam

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1261269/premeer-one-shot-rishta-katam

Pehla Pyaar

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1260449/premeer-oneshot-pehla-pyaar-do-read

Farz (Resposibilty)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1259549/premeer-one-shot-farz-responsibility

Milan

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1255974/premeer-one-shot-milan

Karwa Chaut

https://www.india-forums.com/my_posts.asp

Love Ayysha😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome
loved their suhaag raat
thanx 4 the pm
Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwww...Chahaat se hi toh Premeer ki family bani hai!!! how can they forget their cutie pie!!!
it was so sweet n Premeerish suhag raat!!
please write some more one shots...like the one , where Heer wore a short dress for Prem!!pls
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: amu142

awwww...Chahaat se hi toh Premeer ki family bani hai!!! how can they forget their cutie pie!!!

it was so sweet n Premeerish suhag raat!!
please write some more one shots...like the one , where Heer wore a short dress for Prem!!pls

Thankyou sweety 😳
I will Do a oneshot on that and wil PM you 😳
Thanks again😳
*Totally agree with The Chahat thing*
Love - Ayysha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya u r right. lets leave them alone.
nice os.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ayysha! you have become our one shot Queen!!
y'know if something (GOD forbid) happens and suhhag raat is interrupted. we can use this scene in an emergency.
so camera fades at just the right moment...... very good! we should give them some privacy.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww...amazing one shot...it was so romantic...keep it up...👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow... nice... chahaat came!!! that was really cute!!! :)
lovely!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: avisva

Ayysha! you have become our one shot Queen!!

y'know if something (GOD forbid) happens and suhhag raat is interrupted. we can use this scene in an emergency.
so camera fades at just the right moment...... very good! we should give them some privacy.😉

Hehe thankyou your comments are soo sweet😳
Thankyou
Love Ayysha😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeer928

awww...amazing one shot...it was so romantic...keep it up...👏👏👏

Aww thankyou Soo much :D

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