Premeer One Shot 'Farz (Responsibility)'

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Hi Guys I Was bored So I Wrote a One Shot for Premeer it starts from where the epsode left off on Friday.

Here it is …

Prem and Heer made a promise to always be together.

Prem – "Chalain" Heer smiled and nodded.

Both of them walked threw the gate and went inside.

Everyone got up and looked at Prem Heer.

Chahat – "Mamaaa." She came running and hugged Heer. Heer kissed her cheek and held her hand.

Prem looked at Heer and then his family.

Prem – "Bauji aj mein apki bahu or beti ko wapis lay kar aya hoon … issey asshiwar nahi dein ghaay." Bauji smiled and walked upto them.

Bauji – "Kyun nhai don ghaa." He smiled and patted Heer's cheek. She took his blessing and hugged him.

Preet – "Wah aj is ghar ki Sita bi wapis aa gayi kamal ho gaya." Preet, Meher, Harman, Maya, Kulraaj came and all hugged Heer.

Preet – "Wasay Bahbi aj PB bohat kush lag rahay hain .. or kal raat sey bi ghar nahi thay … mera matlab kuch khass tu nahi hua." Heer blushed and looked down. Prem smiled.

Lalit – "Sharm nahi ati tujhe … apni Bhahi ko asay kahta hai … pora dimag saaf ho gaya hai tera"

Preet – "Dimaag saaf ho tu kisi ko pata nahi chalta liken jab sar saaf ho tab sab goor goor kay dektay hain."

Bauji – "Preet meray saath mazak mat kar …"

Kulraaj – "AP dono shure ho jayo … Heer kitni deear baad ghaar ayi hai or ussay atay hi ap dono ka jagra deekna par raha hai."

Meher – "Or nahi tu kya … chalain didi." Meher and Kulraaj grabbed Heer by her arm and pulled her in. All of them sat in the living room.

Gaytari – "Kulraaj yeh sabb kahan ……" She stopped when she saw Heer sitting with everyone else. Prem got up.

Prem – "Ma dekain mein Heer ko wapis lay aya hoon." Gaytari looked at Heer with hatered and Heer just looked down.

Meher hinted Heer to go and take her blessing. She got up and went to gaytari.

Heer touched her feet and gaytari was boling from the inside but manged to give a little pat on her head.

Heer looked down because she was too scared to meet gaytari eyes.

The whole day went fast. Everyone was all around Heer not leaving her for one minute. Prem got annoyed because everytime he tried to talk to her she was taken away by somebody.

Heer made dinner which everyone ate happily.

After dinner Prem took Chahat because she was tired.

Heer cleaned up and went to her room. She saw PRem had already fixed Chahats new bedroom which was beside their.

Heer went to their bedroom and took out Prem's kurta and also changed into a blue night gown.

Prem came in and saw Heer setting up her stuff into their closet. He remberd their scence after her birthday party when Heer kissed his cheek.

He smiled and went upto Heer and leaned against the closet.

Heer put her sari in the closet and looked at him.

Heer – "Meiney tumharay kapray bed pey rak diyain hai change karlo."

Prem just smiled and Heer looked at him in a confusing look.

Heer – "Meray cheray pey kuch hai jo asay goor rahay ho."

Prem straightened up and put his hands on Heer's waist pulling her closer.

Prem – "Kyun tumhein deknay kay liye koi wajaha chaiye." Heer smiled as Prem stared at her.

Suddenly their was a knock on the door.

Prem – "Uff Hoo subha sey sab kay saath hai or do minute meray saath hoti hai tu sab ko bohat duk hota hai."

Heer smiled and got out of Prems grip.

Heer went to open the door and shocked when she saw Gaytari.

Gaytari – "Heer beta mujhe tum sey baath karni hai."

Heer looked at Prem who was annoyed as ever.

Prem – "Koi baath nahi chalay jayo."

Heer smiled and left the room. Gaytari took her to the terrace.

Gaytari – "Meiney jab kaha thaa Prem ki ..." Her cut in.

Heer – "Ma mujhe pata hai ka yap meray yahan anay sey kush nahi hain liken Prem hai or mujhe uski kushi sey zayada kisi or ki kushi nahi payri."

Gaytari – "Liken mein nahi chati key tu is ghar mein rahay."

Heer – "Or mujhe is baath sey koi faraq nahi parta kyun kay agar Pre map ka faraz hai tu mein Prem ka faraz hoon or is faraz ko woh nibana chataa hai or mein ussey nahi rokkoon ghee." She said in a stiff voice and truned to leae, but stopped …

Heer – "Ma loog kahtay hain na… kay hum naraz unsey hi hotay hain jiney hum apna mantay hain … mujhe pata hai kay is sab nafrat kay neecchay ap kay dil mein meray liye payaar haai or woh pyaar ek din zarror ap ko dikai day ghaa." She smiled at Gaytari and left.

Today Prem Heer started a new life and Gaytari was going to be normal soon.

Everyone was happy, esicapply Prem because usey apnay faraz nibanna kay phir sey ek moqa mil gaya.

So Here It is Hope You like it …. Please Do Comment and Tell me if you Like it.

Love - Ayysha

Edited by Premeerxoxo - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice. do continue to write. thanks.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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cho chweet.............i hope u will write another one soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy very well written!!!
i loved how u said gayatri's gonna be "normal" soon! LMAO..that made me crack upp!!! :D
btw...wen are u updating K3G..lol...can't wait to read more of that...plus i want more premeer scenessss :)))))
tc
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Samra
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome OS do write more i just hate gay3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great OS Ayysha.................😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really really nice
love it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks god u r bored.
Hamesha bore raho.
Kyunki we'll get a lot of ur one shots then which i love to read😊
Great Os ya.
Plz write more.
I like it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really really nice!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyyyyy
good one! hope heer tells gayatri something like this in the show.....though it would be better if prem blasts her.....that would really be awesome....anyways....great oneshot!

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