Premeer One Shot 'Rishta Katam'

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Premeer One Shot

"Rishta Katam"

Prem, Heer and Chahat Planned Their trip to Ludihanna. They were Leaving in two days. Everyone was happy that their family was spending time together and catching on the time they had missed. Heer was also very happy that she had moved back with Prem but every time she came across Gaytari her happiness would faint.

They were packing since they were staying for about 2 weeks.

Heer in her room packing Chahats cloths when PRem came in.

Prem – "Heer mera white kurta nahi mil raha tumhein pata hai kahan hai." Heer was lots in thoughts about gaytari and didn't notice Prem talking to her.

Prem – "Heer mera kurta …. Heer … HEEr" he snapped his fingers in front of her face.

Heer – "Haan Prem tum kab ayay." Prem looked at Heer worriedly.

Prem – "Heer kya hua?" Heer gave a fake smile.

Heer – "Kuch nahi Prem … wasay tumhein kuch chiya thaa." Prem held Heer by her shoulder.

Prem – "Heer tum aj bi mujh sey kuch chupa rahi ho … Heer kitna kuch ho gaya or tum aj bi batyo na kya hua."

Heer – "Prem … Kuch nahi." She said looking away from his eyes.

Prem made her look at him. He was stunned when he saw tears in her eyes.

Prem – "Heer meri kasam kah kar kaho kuch nahi hua." She looked at Prem with shock as tears welled up in her eyes. Heer finally broke and hugged him crying. Prem was totally shocked and hugged her back.

When he pulled her back. Prem wiped her tears.

Prem – "Heer kya hua." Prem held her face in his hands and she placed her hands on his hands.

Heer – "Prem mein tum sey kuch nahi chupna chati liken mein batna bi nahi chati … Prem ma …." Heer told Prem about every gaytari had sadi to her and cried the whole time. Prem totally heart broken.

Heer – "Bus yahi hai Prem." Prem got up in anger.

Prem – "Bus …… Chalo" he grabbed her by her arm and head out of the room.

Heer – "Prem kahan ja rahay ho Prem meri baath suno Prem Prem." She said trying to stop him but he just kept going.

Everyone saw Prem coming down the stairs dragging Heer along.

Lalit got up imeddiatly.

Lalit – "Hey bagwan yeh ab kya ho gaya" He looked at the way Heer was cring and trying to stop PRem and Prem in anger.

Prem and Heer came and stood infront of Gaytari.

Gaytari – "Kya hua beta"

Prem – "Beta mat bulana mujhe." Everyone stared at Prem shocked.

Gaytari gave Heer a dirty look.

Prem – "Pehlay meiney app ko maaf kar diya thaa liken ab nahi." Everyone stunned.

Harman – "Kya hua Bhahia."

Prem – "Ao batana chahay ghein kya hua." He said looking at Gaytari in anger.

Prem – "Ao kya batain ghee mein batata hoon … MA ney mujhe Heer sey door kiya or ….." he told everyone everything Gayatri had said to Heer and everyone looked totally shocked.

Prem – "Meri ek baath yahaan har koi sun lay … aj kay baad meray or Heer key beech kisi ney anay ki koossish kit u mujh sey bura koi nahi ho ga … or Ma aj kay baa dap ka or mera koi rishta nahi." He said in anger.

Gayatri – "Prem .."

Prem – "Bus … or kuch nahi sunna mujhe ap sey koi rishta nahi chiya or aj kay baa dap asay samjna kay mein ap ka liye mar chukka or kyun ka yap meray liye mar chuki hain." He said and walked away. Gaytari fell on the floor landing on her kness. Heer also left. Everyone looked at Gayatri in anger and left.

Aj sey Prem or Gaytari ka Rishta katam ho gaya 😛

Hope you like this one shot 😊

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luvharsh thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i really want tht to happen in real... hope creatives read this ..anyway really nice one shot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Go prem go👍🏼
Loved how prem talked and broke the relationship with g3.
And glad heer told everything to him.
Such an improvement from g3's side.
I hope this happens for real in the story.
Great OS. U rock...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice shot.. hope something like this happens in the show too...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice shot...
i do want this to hpn...
thankxx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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super os
kaash serial mein be aisa hogaya tho bahuth mazaa aayega
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haye.....
i want that to happen......
GOD!!! yeh Gwitch kab jaye gi Premeer ki life se.......
loved your OS.......
regards,
SUhana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i sooo wish that will happen.........prem ending his rishta wid gaya3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWWW thankyou guys sooooooo muh your aare alll tooo sweeeet❤️ *Hugggss* 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice oneshot.....loved the premeer scene.....
wish something like this happens in the show.....i'm waiting for that!

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