naksh-oneshot - Page 3

hey sweets toooooooooooooo good!

Originally posted by: yrkkhluvinangel

Wah!kya baat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!What a romance.............You gave such a beautiful description with the slightest detailing possible......dekho naa song was beautiful...........I swear, I have a lot to learn from you................

oh thanks..... 😳 😊 .....well i love that song a looot so i cldnt resist including t 😆 .....comeon yaar learn frm me????????wt???? 😆

Originally posted by: Uussmann

awesome job thanks for the pm

THANK U HUN....

Originally posted by: sinak

Fantastic romantic one. Plz write soon

THANK U....will try t for sure 😊

Originally posted by: 2112ization

well, it was awesome

i hope u dont mind but ur hindi was a little imean it was nt that gud i advice u 2 write every dialogue in english.

plz dont mind.

but the concept was awesome. i am luking forward 2 more such ff's.

Thanx

THANK U 4 THE COMMENT AND FOR THE TIP....ACTUALLY I M AWAY FRMINDIA 4 A WHILE SO U KNW MISSED THE TCH WTH T.....will try to improve and when i wrote hindi was nly cmin to ma mind......sorry 😊

Originally posted by: ahana2009

wow dat was sooooooo romantic.........keep writing more<br>

thanks a looooooot.......will try t 4 sure

Originally posted by: nasco

"he said coming near her...she moved backwards...and
hit the wall..he was soo close to her that he could count her
eyelashes..."jaanthi hoon na mujhe na soon ne ki aadat nahi hain...<br><font color="#6600ff">awsome dialogue yaar!!<br>really good. !!👍🏼<br>do write more of these❤️<br></font>

hhehhe...it just came..... 😆 thanks 4 the comment hun...will try 4 sure.... 😳

Originally posted by: Drishti...

oh my god di!!!!!!..it was awesome...shit it was too good..rlly...soooooo romantic di.😳😳.i cnt tel u..i cnt stop imagining it..it is way tooo good..im honest....it is superbbbbbbb....and it is superrrrrrr romantic....oh god..di i can visulaise each n evrything.😉😉😉.trust me!...awesome....loved it to the core...it doesnt look like ur first attempt..do write more

and yaa thnks for dedicating it to mee...im soooo touched di..i cnt express it..love u 2!!..muahhh..and im always here for u...:👏👏😃

thanks hun......u luv imagining huh.....will tryv4 sure hunbunh...... 🤗 and hey ur jeeju said he missed u afternoon.... 😆

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hey sweets toooooooooooooo good!

loved it!

pm me next time u write any more one shots/ff! plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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[DIV]love Zoah

thnks yaar......will surely pm u

Originally posted by: riya_luv_sv

thanks hun......u luv imagining huh.....will tryv4 sure hunbunh...... 🤗 and hey ur jeeju said he missed u afternoon.... 😆

haha lol...yh i love imagining things...😉 😆 😆