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riyana

@riya_luv_sv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: pinky35

very nice riya......

so cute n romantic.......

thanks yaar....... 😊

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riyana

@riya_luv_sv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: yusra12
it was really romantic....write more

thanks hun.....i will love to continue

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musenartist

@musenartist

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Wah!kya baat hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!What a romance.............You gave such a beautiful description with the slightest detailing possible......dekho naa song was beautiful...........I swear, I have a lot to learn from you................

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USMAN

@-ChicoUsman-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

awesome job thanks for the pm

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sinak

@sinak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Fantastic romantic one. Plz write soon

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iHeartMoi

@iHeartMoi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

well, it was awesome

i hope u dont mind but ur hindi was a little imean it was nt that gud i advice u 2 write every dialogue in english.

plz dont mind.

but the concept was awesome. i am luking forward 2 more such ff's.

Thanx

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-alisha-

@-alisha-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

wow dat was sooooooo romantic.........keep writing more

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437810

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hey...i really lovd it...lovd the romance and evrything...

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

"he said coming near her...she moved backwards...and hit the wall..he was soo close to her that he could count her eyelashes..."jaanthi hoon na mujhe na soon ne ki aadat nahi hain...
awsome dialogue yaar!!
really good. !!👍🏼
do write more of these❤️

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Drishti

@Drishti...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

oh my god di!!!!!!..it was awesome...shit it was too good..rlly...soooooo romantic di.😳 😳.i cnt tel u..i cnt stop imagining it..it is way tooo good..im honest....it is superbbbbbbb....and it is superrrrrrr romantic....oh god..di i can visulaise each n evrything.😉 😉 😉.trust me!...awesome....loved it to the core...it doesnt look like ur first attempt..do write more

and yaa thnks for dedicating it to mee...im soooo touched di..i cnt express it..love u 2!!..muahhh..and im always here for u...:👏 👏 😃