Suhaag raat by desi chic (fan-fic)

hey guys, I kinda just made up a suhaag raat ka episode for nahar and saloni.... u guys can post ur own versions too!

lots of laughter going on. piya aur kuch aur larkiyan nahar ko uske kamray ke undher dhaka deti hain. he tries to resist but fakingly (kyun ki woh bhi bechain hai 😆). to larkiyan jaldi se darwaazay ko bund kardeti hai aur bahar se lock kardeti hain. woh bed ki taraf dekhta hai jo ke phoolon se bhichha hua hai aur bheech mein behti hai saji hui saloni. bechara nahar vahaan kharahokar sochata hai "hey Bhagwaan, please mujhse koi galti mat karana varna saloni naraaz hojaaygi aur mujhe abhi tak manana nahi aata" (btw he has his has together like doing a prayer and looking up). aur phir woh dheere se bed ki taraf barta hai. as he approaches, phoolon ko paray karnay se phele woh phir se ek do second ke liye sochta hai. then he comes back to reality. dheere se woh phoolon ko paray karta hai aur bed pe beth jata hai saloni ke saamnay. dono chup rehtay hai. aisay hi chupi mein paanch minute nikal jaate hai...nahar to sirf saloni ki hi taraf dekhta rehta hai aur udhar saloni ki jaan nikal rahi hoti hai. woh sochti hai "ye nahar ghoonghat kyun nahi utharah?" aur tab hi, nahar ko hosh aata hai aur woh aapne haat agay karta hai aur dheere say saloni ka ghoonghat utah ta hai. saloni ki nigaahen neechi hai aur woh bahut khoobsurat dikh rahi hai. both have a silent conversation.

nahar - saloni, mere paas to ilfaaz hi nahi hain...

saloni - nahar, kuch bolo na. mein najanay kyun itni nervous hoon. dekho mera dil kitni zoron se dharak raha hai. oh no, kahin tumhe sach much sunayee to nahi dera?

nahar - aaj mere dil se tumhare liye kitna pyar arah hai... mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon saloni....

at that point, just as nahar silently thinks that, saloni uski taraf nazrein utha kar dekhti hai aur kehti hai "aapnay kuch kaha?". nahar kehta hai "aapnay kuch suna?". saloni kehti hai "nahin shayaad woh..." nahar kehta hai "meinay to shayad kuch nahin kaha lekin jo aapnay suna woh bilkul sach tah".... they both look into each others eyes for a few secs and slowly saloni agay barti hai aur uska sar dheere se nahar ke kanday ke oopar ruk jaata hai. he encloses her in his arms and the lights get dimmer and dimmer and dimmer and out.....😆 between the whole time the title song instrumental is playing in the background slowly.

kaisa laga? sorry for any mistakes in the hindi. didn't mean to offend anyone in any manner either. how about u guys write up your own versions too. anyways

cheers,

dc

hehehe so funne 😆 . loved each nd every word of it especially da silent convo 😃

hi

isint it sexy man. 😡

😆 gr8...fnx 4 sharin it wiv uz..it wz gr8 😃

hey that sounds so cute......i hope it does happen that way

aw that was soo cute!!!.. that sounds so real hope it does happen that way! lol

i didin't like it its boarng sorry 😕

hey guys!! thanks so much for the good feedback. candyfloss, good suggestion. I thought into it, and I guess I could try for something. but I'm not sure how it will turn out...anyways, I will try and post another part soon.
its like three in the morning and nahar and saloni are sleeping. nahar is in a light sleep and laying on his back and saloni has her back to nahar. nahar ek bari si angraii leta hai and lands up on his stomach but his hand falls on saloni's waist. he moans and then thinks, "yeh kaun hai?" and then sits up and slaps his head and thinks "arre haan, budhu, ab teri shaadi hogai hai". saloni turns onto her back so she is facing upwards. she looks so beautiful sleeping (she has no jewellery except the bangles). nahar looks at her and thoray chir kaliay kho jata hai aur uski nazar saloni ke sulfon pe parti hai. while saloni had turned, some of her hair got onto her face. nahar dheere say aapnay haathon se saloni ke balon ko paray karta hai and caresses her face gently. he takes another look at her and lies back facing upwards aur ab to uski neend gayi. woh apnay khayalon mein hota hai aur saloni bhi angrayi leti hai. she lands up with her face lying on the right side of his chest and her hand on his stomach. woh to sorahi hai na. nahar is hesitant and smiles. of course usay achha laga! woh bhi aapnay right arm se saloni ko apnay saat dhak leta hai. subha hogayi hai aur chiriyon ke shor se saloni utnay lagti hai. she moans in half sleep and slowly opens her eyes. at first she doesn't realize anything and moves closer to nahar (jise koi hosh nahin hai...sari raat soya nahin na bechara 😆) aur phir saloni realizes uskay haat bed ke upar to nahin lagta and she opens her eyes and realizes she her postion and nahar's arm around her. she's about to get up right away but slowly moves nahar's arm so that he doesn't awaken. she sits up and smiles faintly while looking back at her hubby. then she puts her hands together and looks up thinking "hey bhagwaan, please meri madat karna ke mein nahar ko koi shikyaad karnay ka mauka na doon". she looks at the clock and its 5:45. woh uth kar washroom jaati hai. she comes out in a beautiful lilac coloured sari all dressed up like a navi naveli dulhan, but she doesn't over do it. and then she goes to the kitchen and tara meets her at the stairs and greets her "arre saloni, bahut khoobsurat lagrahi ho" in a teasing manner". they both go to the kitchen and start the breakfast preparations. dheere dheere sab ajatay hain except nahar. woh bechara raat soya nahin teek se. saloni aur tara table teek kartay hain aur tara kehti hai "saloni, jao nahar ko utao". saloni gives her an expression of "mein?". tara says "haan, tum, akhir tum uski patni ho" and smiles. saloni nods her head and goes...phir kya hota hai? wait for next time!
cheers,
dc
ps - shaadi ke baad what does saloni call everyone in her new house?

it was cool and really shyish. but every thing was nicely expressed and the part where nahar prays was really funny. and loved every word u said. iwill wait for the next part.
sab

😆 ..quite a filmy suhag raat 😃 ..but i really like it 👏 👏 ..good job