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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok every 1 i wrote a ONE SHOT on mayur i m dreaming monday episode to jo damgh main pak reha tha sab MAYUR ONE SHOT MAIN LIKH DALA 😆

ok my mayur shot is about after the case

Mayank > Nupur hum case jeet gaye😃

Mayank says in romantic mood mera prize kahan hai
Nupur says kaisa prize😉
Mayank says itni mehnat ki or us ka kuch to inam milna chahiye mayu in naughty mood😆

Nupur change the topic Mayank abhi to treat ka time hai treat kelne chalte hain😉
treat meri teraf se😆

Mayank says lekin hum ja kahan rehe hain
Nupur says Mayank tum chalao to sahi

Mayank uff ye kahan le ayi BARAF KE GHOLE KE THELE KE PASS Yahan kya kerehe hain hum
Nupur says are bhaiya barf ke do gole dena

Mayank says nupur tum ye kya kerehi ho
nupur says Mayank tum thodi der ke liye khamosh nahin rehsakte kya ye lo barf ka gola khao

Mayank says ye maine pehle kabhi nahin khaya ise kaise khate hain

Nupur says kya mayak tum ne aj tak kabhi barf ka gola nahin khaya
Mayank says nupur nahin khaya
nupur says mayu uffoh mujeh to barf ka gola dekh ker morena ki yad agayi pata hai jab main morena mai thi
mayank says nupur phir se shuru may hojana apne morena ki dastan ko leker😆
nupur says haye kasam se mayu morena ki beri yaad ati hai ,,😍

Mayank in Romantic mood bus tum morena ko hi miss kerti ho ya kissi or ko bhi😉

Nupur in funny mood mayu main hmm .. han kerti houn ddlj ke raj ko 😆🤣

Nupur laughing mayu in anger mood main mazak ke mood main nahin hou

Nupus says acha baba sorry ab tum ne sawal hi aisa poocha main kya kehti😆

Mayank is still in anger mood

Nupur says acha mayank ager tum mazzak ke mood main nahin ho to kiss mood main ho
Mayank says romantic nupur main kiss ke mood main houn😉

Nupur shying blushes

Mayank says kya huva nupur abhi achanak aise itni chup kyun hogayi😉

Both are quite nupur looking down mayank looking her nupur shying and mayank smiling

Suddenly Rain starts nupur run trying to hide 4rm Rain

Mayu enjoying rain❤️😍
dancing in rain
😍
nupur says mayu tum bheeg jao ge yahan ajao😉
Mayu cum close to Nupur and hold her hand and start singing dancing in the rain
😍
dekho na ye sazzish hai bondounki dekho na dekho na huwa kuch hole hole zuban se kya kuch bola
😍
ab doori rehe na dermiyan samjho na saamjho na .....❤️........
dekho na ye sazish hain boondoun ki ........
❤️...😍.....
Mayank nupur both are dancing enjoying in the rain
❤️

Mayank cum close to nupur and hold her kiss on the eyes checks necks
and now he is trying to kiss on ahem ahem ... BUT Nupur says mayu baht der hogayi hai
gunjan intezar kerehi hogi mujhe ger drop kerdo na

Mayank wiping her lips says ok nupur

Nupur reached home now and thinking whole night about mayank

Mayank thinking about nupur whole night

Next morning they both r in colledge Mayank Finding nupur
and he saw gunjan is cuming with nupur they both are talking about something
mayank says hi to gunjan and nupur
Mayank says nupur mujhe tum se kuch important notes ki bat kerni hai
Nupur says mayank abhi nahin abhi mujhe gunjan se kuch bat kerni hai
Gunjan says di ap jao hum bad main bat kerleinge

Mayank hold her hand and take her to library room
Nupur says mayu ye kya kerehe ho Mayanks shhh.. mayank finger on her lips ... Eye lock scene for 5mins
Then suddenly nupur says 😲mayu kya hum yahan kya kerehe hain kya bat kerni hain tum ko mujhse
Mayank says mayu kal kuch Tum bhool gayi thi😉
Nupur says woh kya mayannk😲
Mayanks says kiss😉
Nupur says kya😲
Mayank says shhh.. and he cum close to her and kiss her on cheecks and says Nupur
kal ka din meri life ka best day tha kyun ke kal Maine 1st time kissi lerki ko kiss kiya
Nupur says kyab😲 kon thi woh or tum mere sath kya kereehe ho😕
jao usi lerki ke pass jisse kiss kiya tha se tum aisa kero ge man soch bhi mahin tha nupur start crying😆😕

Mayank says nupur chup hojao koi ajyega meri bat to suna😆

Nupur start her nautanki again ab sune ko reh kya gaya hai Haye maine kya kya socha tha or kya hogaya😭

Mayanks says Nupur chup hojao plz koi ajayega😳
Nupur says ata hai toa ajne do lekin mujeh batao woh lerki kon thi .. or tum use kab se jante ho blah blah.....😳

Mayank says ok tum aise man ne wali nahin ho Nupur Mayank hold her and kiss her to shut her mouth😳😆


then mayank says Romantic mood woh lerki tum thi jisse maine

1st time kiss kiya rain main jisske sath maine 1st time dance kiya jiss ke sath maine 1st time barf ka gola khaya
or jisko aj maine 1st time ...
is pehle mayu or kuch kehta nupur hug him And she says mayank i luv u soomuch Main tumhe kisi or ke sath nahin dekhpoungi
Mayank says funny mood... kisi or ko kya merna hai

jo nupur bhushan se panga le ....

Nupur says mayank tum bhi na and then she shy and smile

Mayank still looking her becuse she is blushing she is looking liek red tomato😆

Hey friends ok YE thi mere dimagh ki khichdi jo pakrehi thi 😆aftersbs scene and precap scene and i share this all with u plz leave ur comments😳

because ur commnets mean alot to me😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello fato ji!!! 😃
papa is not here, so I thought of coming here for some time.
wonderful, awesome, amazing!!!! loved it. ab kya bataoon main. aap to zabardast writer nikli!!! 😳 really nice one-shot. loved it. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey fato wonderful one shot...
i loved d line when mayank said mein aab kiss k mood me hoon...😳
kiss on ahem ahem..hehe..gud gud...
rain+baraf ka gola+mayur ...what a combination!!!!!!!!
your romantic one shot ...upar se ye pic post kar diya sath me...Now i am in dreamland again...😍
Keep writing...
Edited by Piya_2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee................fato.................mere dil ke armaan bhi pooore ho gaye...kal raati ruchi ki hottesssssst ahem ahem upd8 n nw urs..........by god........meri toh nikal padi......superbbbb....awesomeeeeeeee............10 on 10.............ab srsly u shud write more meri pyariiiiiiiiii behana.............luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuu............


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Posted: 15 years ago
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by god piya......firse???????/dekho ab hum dono ki timin bhi ek saath ho gaye hai.......sach mein hum 'bichde hue behane' hai......aur yeh baat mujhe kal raat ko ehsaas hui.....😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oye fato!!! kya baat hai yaar 🤗
kal tho itna natak kar rahi thi..aur itna acha likha...tum tho bilkul nupur ki taraf nikli 😃
waise hum khush hue bohot..aaaj 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki028

by god piya......firse???????/dekho ab hum dono ki timin bhi ek saath ho gaye hai.......sach mein hum 'bichde hue behane' hai......aur yeh baat mujhe kal raat ko ehsaas hui.....😆😉

yup...hum dono k kheyalat kitne milte jhulte hai ...hai na?
hum such me bichde huye behna hai...
mein apni bichde huye behn k liye ek ahem ahem one shot likh rahi hu..thoda baki hai aabhi...I'll post by the evening...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piya_2009

yup...hum dono k kheyalat kitne milte jhulte hai ...hai na?

hum such me bichde huye behna hai...
mein apni bichde huye behn k liye ek ahem ahem one shot likh rahi hu..thoda baki hai aabhi...I'll post by the evening...



@red.......
kya?????????????/😲

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee........................................

pehli baaaaaaaaar koi mere liye xclusivelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy os likh rahi hai.......thank thank u soooooooo sooooooooooooo muchhhhhhh................ab mujhe evenin ka bezabri se intezaar rahega!!!!!!...........
aur mera return gift bahut jald!!!!!!!!😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow . . . WOW!! WOW > > > Aur kitni baar bolun?? 😆

Lovely . . . you are an awesome writer!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG...twas xlent...lovd it...mayur kiss...nupur's jealousy!...😆...really lovd it...

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