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Mithila

@Mithila_22

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

awwesum 1 shot fatima di..............loved it.....toh aapke dimaag kafi achi khichadi pak rahi hai...........aapke update ko imagine karte karte mere dil ke armaan pure ho gaye........

excellent...loved it to the core...

Edited by taniyamiths - 16 years ago

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hailaaa awesome yaar
sooooo romantic........please write more.......pm me😳

Edited by AMMY LUVS RIDZ - 16 years ago

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minalpink100

@minalpink100

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

so sweet one shot all the best friend keep it u ppppppppppppppp😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 16 years ago

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

im feeling so proud today!
im so glad i insisted you write this!
n u! omg u write great!
awesome, romantic, cute, sweet, lovely one shot
baraf ka gola + rain + mayur + kiss = me in dreamland
nupur becoming jealous was a bonus
n i can't get enuf of the kiss jokes! love u for having sum in here
just loved the os

Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 16 years ago

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heena

@heena.damor

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

gr8 shot yaar damn romantic ....... gr8 work dear...... keep it up .......

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Fattto my panipuri sister wonderful one shot dear.. woh * ahem ahem * wala i liked dear....

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Fatima dureshahwar

@Ohmyjerryworld

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nikki028
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee................fato.................mere dil ke armaan bhi pooore ho gaye...kal raati ruchi ki hottesssssst ahem ahem upd8 n nw urs..........by god........meri toh nikal padi......superbbbb....awesomeeeeeeee............10 on 10.............ab srsly u shud write more meri pyariiiiiiiiii behana.............luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuu............

Omg Nikki i m totally speechless i have no words to say omg i cant beleive that every 1 luv it soomuch

omg Maian abhi online ayi or seedha mayur shot per ayi omg i cant say what i m feeling now

i am at cloud 9 yar itni tareef main bat nahin sakti houn ke iswaqt main kya mehsoos kerehi houn

meri pyari behna mujhe ye jo khushi mili hai ye sirf tumhari piya mishu divya di ki wajah

u all support me alot main itna kuch jo likh payi houn sab tum logoun ki wajah se i m totally speechleess niki

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Asm

@Angel-A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

fatooooo its amazing yaar.. man i loved it..:):)
i got buttreflies in my tummy afta reading dis.. truly romantic.. yaar tumhare dimag ki kichri tasty hai..:):)
a big huggy from my side..:):)

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Rabbia

@Bewafa_Behan

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

ahh!!!
itz too gud...
it was just the mixture ov everthing v r lookin forward too...
tooooo gud...
enjoyed a lot...
well written..

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Fatima dureshahwar

@Ohmyjerryworld

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Nishithini
hello fato ji!!! 😃
papa is not here, so I thought of coming here for some time.

wonderful, awesome, amazing!!!! loved it. ab kya bataoon main. aap to zabardast writer nikli!!! 😳really nice one-shot. loved it. 😃

Hi Nishi omg janu glad 2 seee u here

uff main kya batoun apni dastan main writer to anhin thi lekin niki ke pyar ne or mayur ke kiss scene ne mujhe writer bana dala

Omg Thank u soomuch 4 ur luvely comment

Mayur hugs 4 u janu