Mayur one shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: Piya_2009

hey fato wonderful one shot...

i loved d line when mayank said mein aab kiss k mood me hoon...😳

kiss on ahem ahem..hehe..gud gud...

rain+baraf ka gola+mayur ...what a combination!!!!!!!!

your romantic one shot ...upar se ye pic post kar diya sath me...Now i am in dreamland again...😍

Keep writing...

Dekhle jo kichdi mere dimagh main pak rehi thi likh hi dali

Haye piya ji main kya batoun ap ke comment ko dekh ker mujhe kitni khushi huvi

uff jab main ye one shot likh rehi thi tab main bhi mayu ki dream land main thi ❤️😍

Thanks alot 4 ur support u encourage me to write a mayur shot

Originally posted by: myownarea

oye fato!!! kya baat hai yaar 🤗
kal tho itna natak kar rahi thi..aur itna acha likha...tum tho bilkul nupur ki taraf nikli 😃

waise hum khush hue bohot..aaaj 😆 😆

Oye hoye divya di ap ko yahan dekh ker mujhe bari khushi huvi Mere ankhoun khushi ke ansoun hai i cant tell exactly what i m feeling now thanks alot 4 ur support

Yar main natank nahin kerehi thi sach main yar ande or dande se der ker😳

maine spelling mistake nahin ki or post ko edit bhi kiya 😆

Originally posted by: Piya_2009

yup...hum dono k kheyalat kitne milte jhulte hai ...hai na?

hum such me bichde huye behna hai...

mein apni bichde huye behn k liye ek ahem ahem one shot likh rahi hu..thoda baki hai aabhi...I'll post by the evening...

Uff piya cant wait for it omg plz send me the link of

ur ahem ahem One shot❤️😍

Originally posted by: Kanky

Wow . . . WOW!! WOW > > > Aur kitni baar bolun?? 😆

Lovely . . . you are an awesome writer!! 😊

Kanky bus aik bar hi kafi tha😉

Thank u soomuch🤗

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

awwesum 1 shot fatima di..............loved it.....toh aapke dimaag kafi achi khichadi pak rahi hai...........aapke update ko imagine karte karte mere dil ke armaan pure ho gaye........

excellent...loved it to the core...

Haye humari to bus yehi khoshish Thi ke hum mayurians ke dil ke arman pure kerden

I know i hate saturday sundat soomuch because no Mjht in weekends😆

Cant wait 4 monday episode😉

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

hailaaa awesome yaar
sooooo romantic........please write more.......pm me😳

Oye hoye meri piyu ahem ahem amin master tu yahan haila mera dil gaya kam se

kaise bhatakte bhatakte pahanch gayi

Thanks alot 4 ur sweet coment ok sweets i will try 2 write more😉

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

wow kya one shot tha

yaar burf ka gola or nupur bhusan two hot things maza aa gaya

omg bas jo dimagh amin pak reha tha likh dala😆

Thank u soomuch🤗

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

im feeling so proud today!
im so glad i insisted you write this!
n u! omg u write great!
awesome, romantic, cute, sweet, lovely one shot
baraf ka gola + rain + mayur + kiss = me in dreamland
nupur becoming jealous was a bonus
n i can't get enuf of the kiss jokes! love u for having sum in here
just loved the os

Hi Mishu janu OMG After saw somany coments now i am in dream land of mayur

Kya kehoun yar i m feeling at cloud 9

Thank u soomuch 4 encourage me alot

Meri ankhoun main jo ye khushi ke anso hain is ka credit tum ko diya di ko niki ko piya ko jata hai

U all support me laot yesterday omg tum logoun ke bina m likh hi na pati or apne dimagh ki khichdi biryani share na kerpati😆

Thank u soomuch

Originally posted by: preethis

Fattto my panipuri sister wonderful one shot dear.. woh * ahem ahem * wala i liked dear....

Thank u my pani puri sister per mera dil jilane agayi pani puri sister pata hai ne ke pani puri ka nam sunte himeri halat kya hojati hain😆

omg missing pani puri