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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#371

mich 🤗
wonderful.... absolutely marvelous... (and this time you have quantity too

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I loved how sheetal's condition is used to break abhi a little and he opening up to her a little bit...
Looks like past is going to be revealed soon.. (dont be like cvs of the show and make us wait for yrs to actually find it afte giving hints about it )

Story is shaping up so well.. you know the bond between abhi-adi-sheetal comes out very nicely.. what was that in the reports apart from infection that caught so much anxity .. did i miss something... and you know i love how niki talks to abhi in your scenes.. like she asking if he is asking her for coffee to thank or somehting.. making sure that she understands and makes understand him..

cant wait for next one.. hope to read it sooon

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Ivy

@Ivy9

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Posted: 16 years ago

#372

Hey guys! I'm back!!!! I just finished reading all the scenes that u all have been writing and thought they were great! Good job everyone! And wow Michelle you're turning into a scene machine!!!!

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kabeeraspeaking

@kabeeraspeaking

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#373

Michiiiiiiii.

Lovely to hear about Abhi's past through someone else! But who is this asmaan-se-utri, khaajor-mein-atki Simi? :armed:

Girl better not mess things up.

My favourite part of this one has to be the gradual transition of the ice breaking between them, how Abhi asks her out to coffee, on the perfectly rational pretext of both being hungry. Smooth. And we got a little bit of the backstory on Nikki too, which seems to have mellowed Abhi down a little, even if for a few moments...!

:hug:

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anyalolita

@anyalolita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#374

Oh Michelle, you are smooooooth.....I loved how this is progressing...sorry for a mind numbingly superficial comment but I'm so sleepy...I can't wait for the dirt on Simi though 😃😳...hope Abhi doesn't fall for any of her lies!!

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clarita

@clars

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#375

michy awesome gal ,i luvvvvvvvvvv the twists and turns you bought out in the story .

am having some doubt on sheetal .is she somewhat related to abhi's past 😲.,y was abhi scared wen he came to know she and nikkichit chatted

i luv the flow of the story everything from abhi's behaviour to nikki's attitude towards him to be frank i prefer nikki the way you wrote than the actual one .

neways do continue am waiting to read more abt this simi ,i prefer this angle to the story rather than SLD 🤢

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Michelle

@mich09

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Posted: 16 years ago

#376

Ivy 🤗 🤗 Welcome Back.........Missed you a lot.....Yeah I realise now I just got in with the flow and wrote so many scenes 😃

Well Priyanka, Fati, Bhavna, Annu, Clars, I am glad you are all like the progress of the story....Thanks so much. Feeling really happy that you all are okay with it....

Well Priyanka to your question on the anxiety for Sheetal's blood reports, well if there was a combination of bacterial infection which is called Listerosis (something I ddin't want to mention) and if the ultrasound showed that there was a problem with the pregnancy then in such cases they have to abort the child. That is why Abhi mentions that it when he says that need to wait for the ultrasound report. Since the ultrasound was fine then the bacterial infection can be taken care of by antibiotics....
Sorry to bore you on medical termniology but since they were doctors and I wanted Abhinik to be shown working and worrying together I put up the scene 😃

Thanks once again all of you !

Well Simi will not be an out and out vamp but she has come to win back Abhi. 😃
Mich

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#377

Mich when r u updating?????!!!!!!

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sushma

@angeltiara

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#378

mich loved the third part so much

loved how sheetal n adis problems made abhi niki to come close n get concerned for each other n for sheetal

loved how nikki noticed the real abhi who is so fun loving with sheetal n adi n consider them as his family n

his true emotions with them which was hidden behind

loved how abhi mellowed down for a moment seeing nikki pain n niki n abhis talk

loved how abhi asked niki for a cofee simply

loved the twist of simi completely

superb going superb

do continue soon

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pinalkpatel

@pinalkpatel

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#379

Hi all,

i am sorry i havent been on the forums for last couple of days so i havent been able to comment on all the posts ......

First of all i would like to thank Mich for writing such a beautiful scene... it just made my day.. that is how i really wnated the AN story to progress in DMG..... But unfortunately they HAD to bring the crazy pagalpur wasis in the story.....

anyways , hi to all...

have to go now but will be back later

till then keep posting!!!!!

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#380

** Scenes Written by Erutan99**

SCENE 10

(This scene is dedicated to Priyanka as her promised gift from me. It doesn't really have an actual plot and is just a random cute scene that I thought could take place after the two confessed and were back at Sanjeevani. Sorry if AN aren't in character. I actually wrote this scene a while back for another couple but changed it up a little to fit AN.)

"He loves me..." A bright yellow petal floated gently to the ground. "He loves me not." Another joined the same fate as the first. "He loves me..." whispered the lovely young woman plucking off another petal and tossing it into the wind. "He loves me not," she continued mournfully. "He lov-"

"You know that doesn't really work, right?" Abhimanyu stole what was left of the flower from Niki's fingers and plopped down onto the bench next to her where she had been taking her break on top of the terrace of Sanjeevani.

"Hey! Give that back!" Niki shoved at the laughing man next to her and tried to reach for the flower as he held it as far from her as possible. "Come on, you jerk, give it back!" Abhimanyu only moved the daisy further from her grasp.

"You know you don't need a flower to tell you how I feel about you." Abhimanyu teased shifting suddenly so that Niki fell onto his lap.

Blushing furiously she once more tried to make a grab for the flower but was startled as Abhimanyu suddenly wrapped his arms around her bringing the daisy in front of them both. "All you have to do is ask me," he whispered into her ears.

"I...I...uh..." Flushed Niki just stared at the flower being held in front of her.

"So where were you?" He took her hands and gently wrapped them around the stem. "Ah, yes...He loves you..." Abhimanyu nuzzled the back of her neck as he pulled a petal loose and let it drift to the ground. "He loves you not." Feeling Niki stiffening in his arms he tightened his hold on her and pulled another petal loose. "He loves you..." Niki relaxed letting out the breath she'd been holding, and continued to watch with rapt attention as Abhimanyu pulled petal after petal repeating the rhyme.

"...He loves you not." Abhimanyu finished calmly pulling the last petal loose. Niki felt herself freezing and stared with a detached feeling as the yellow petal fluttered to the ground. The petal less stem dropped from her suddenly numb fingers.

"He loves you." Niki blinked in surprise as a beautiful rose was slipped into her hands. "I love you," the handsome man holding her whispered. Pulling her closer he leaned down and brushed a kiss across her bare shoulder. Niki's fingers tightened around the rose as she melted into his arms her eyes fluttering shut. Nuzzling her neck once more Abhimanyu buried his face into her hair. "And don't let anyone or anything let you think otherwise."

A soft smile spread across Niki's face as she savored the feeling of being in his arms. "I love you, too." Her only response was a feather brush of a kiss to her neck and that was all she needed.

~The End~

Edited by Erutan99 - 15 years ago